HP: Severus' Sister Is the Group Favorite

Awesome fanfic! It is divided into two world lines: the world of the original work and the world of this book, which later merged together. It's a text written by Xiang, a brother and sister! It does not discredit anyone, nor does it deliberately whitewash, but the heroine will correct the wrong behavior of some original characters (such as the breakup between Penny and Lily) so that everyone can get along with each other more peacefully! The original world line respects the settings very much and only brings a certain amount of warmth without changing the settings and character endings! Most of the world lines in this book are about redemption, which will change the endings of the characters. It's rare to see such fandoms! ! ! Blow it up! ! ! Compared to the n number of third-generation Dark Lords next door, there are not many fans who feel that this kind of heroine mainly brings warmth rather than overemphasis on ability and identity! Anyway, I really love it!

It's very good-looking. The characters in the original work are not very OOC, nor are there any stereotypes in the academy. The plot is quite interesting. The author is also very careful. Many details are supported by the content of the original work. The world view is very complete. I look forward to the subsequent development.

The writing is delicate, and the interaction between the original characters and the characters in parallel time and space makes their appearance become the original ones. There seems to be nothing OOC about myself. The two worlds of the parallel world and the original world are not recognized at the same time and will not feel inconsistent. Although the full text is not painful in my opinion (a pain for Miyou players), there are still sour emotions growing in my heart. At the same time, under the thrilling adventure, there is also a philosophy of life and a unique insight into chemical knowledge. In parallel time and space, they all lived a safe and happy life. It also fulfills their regrets in the original world. They always say that you can't learn anything from reading novels, but I seem to have learned a lot from this novel. Although it is a traditional group pet plot, it does not make people feel inexplicable. The relationship between the characters is progressive and has an underlying meaning. Whether it is the collection of flying birds or the illustrations and annotations about animals and plants, they have greatly inspired my compositions, especially ancient poems. This novel is really well written!

Good to read, good to read, good to read, important things have been said three times, and this article is very heartwarming (although it is not finished yet), (although the tears of being stabbed are not worth much). I still have to say that our lovely heroine, the little angel Helens, is the light for all of them, and then this light gave everything for them. What hurts me the most is their willingness to sacrifice for the people they love without hesitation (´•ω•̥`).

I really like the setting of this book. The author's writing style is also very cute. Haha, Severus's awkward look is really lovable. I look forward to the appearance of little Rey~ Good luck to the author~

Wuhu~ It is very rare to see such a lively author. The writing is also very beautiful. It hit my heart instantly [blowing kiss] They grew up little by little. Snape had a tender side and found Ota who fell in love with each other (crossed out). Rael also made changes in his thinking. I believe he will realize how unreliable his thoughts are and will definitely treat Helens well.

A nice batch! And the author is really responsible! Posted a lot of related pictures [learned]

Very nice! It's obviously not abusive at all, but I still cried [crying] The writing is so gentle, come on! Love you, moma refill~[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Love][Love]*⁂((✪⥎✪))⁂*

I feel that the plot setting of this book is quite novel and exciting. I personally like the style of this book. I like the character and setting of Otta, and he matches well with my brother. I saw the unhappy story from another angle and wanted to vote unhappy [full] but I couldn't let go of Rael's character and appearance. It is indeed more suitable for the heroine. Rael is a good and responsible boy. I am a little worried that he will not be able to firmly protect his girlfriend in the face of opposition from his family like Sirius said.

It's really beautiful! ! ! It would be better if the author could write some more stories about adult Sri Lankan religion [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's really good-looking. The heroine Helens makes up for a lot of frustrations, but the heroine is not a tool. She has her own personality charm and is a super Ravenclaw [heart-sending]. Although the original world has not changed anything, they are all fine in the parallel world. Regulus did not die young, and the brotherhood with Sirius was alleviated; Lily and James did not die, and Harry became a happy child [laughing]; Professor Snape came to the parallel world from the original world after his death, and received the love of his mother, sister, and little Prince, and the care of his family, becoming an older baby in his thirties who can still be willful and doted on by his mother [laughing]; Barty Crouch has friendship, love (real love is in the later period, it is a marriage of interests before love, and the political friendship of comrades gradually turns into a love of dependence, immortality [admiration]) and the father's love from the master. He and Dimu have a relationship of both teacher and friend. In the original work, he plays Dimu, and in the parallel world, Dimu plays him [laughing][laughing][laughing] In the early days, college life was sweet and warm. It's just that a small part of the glass shards in the later period was a bit heartbreaking. I personally cried more. I didn't feel the farewell of Rael who was about to die (the male protagonist did not die, but was saved by a life-saving prop left by the female protagonist). However, it is really difficult not to cry [crying]. However, there is a HE ending. I personally decided that the HE ending is the real one. After all, there is foreshadowing. I did not watch the BE ending. Babies who like to watch can try it. BE ends in Volume 13: Chapters 369-387 The ending of HE is Volume 14: Chapter 388 and later The CPs in the book are quite sweet, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very frustrating. In the early stage, the male protagonist was a sweet, gentle and considerate little puppy, and he was so soft that he only dared to have a crush [laughing]. In the later stage, he turned into a dank little wolfdog, but he still respects and cares for the heroine. He is not a yandere, and he also likes tea. He is a green tea-flavored little wolfdog [licking the screen] and loves to eat.

First of all, the writing style is very good. Whether it is describing the scenery or the heart, it also respects the personality of each character in the original work. It does not criticize a character that you don't like subjectively, but analyzes the possible personality of this character, which has advantages and disadvantages. After all, as the author said, it is not black and white. He also very considerately creates the general appearance of the characters for readers so that readers can have a sense of substitution, and there is also a lot of professional knowledge. Although I still can't understand the chapter, I can see that the author has written it in great detail, and must have checked a lot of information. Snape in the original world is really heartbreaking. Fortunately, Prince and even everyone in the parallel world have filled the regrets of fans, and also given readers a good home for Snape in the original world. I can only say that this book is well written and carefully written. I look forward to the author's next book.

I like it so much, the author's writing is great!

It's really beautiful! ! ! When I read this book and saw the second time I got along with Snape in the original book, I couldn't help crying (•̩̩̩̩＿•̩̩̩̩). The love between Rael and Helens, especially the version where time and space are intertwined, made me cry TTTT TT, finally, this book has a Happy End, with the happy big brother Snape, the little brothers Prince and Ota, Helens and Rael, and the mother. The children live happily together, which is the ending they deserve! ! ! O(*≧▽≦)ツ ~

A very good book, but it tortured me twice in the middle. It was really sad, and it made me realize what it is like to be stuck in one's throat. My poor Severus and Rael [crying], but the finale is so good that I automatically ignored the eleventh volume and skipped directly to the great ending of the twelve volumes [smirking] [sending my heart], thank the author for allowing me to see another little Barty, it was wonderful [cool]. Finally, there is Attack Erin, well, it has been confirmed that she has a hermaphrodite in her eyes. [Laughs] As expected, he is the descendant of the dragon. What a wave of policy output, which makes people familiar and "envious" [send heart], familiar education [cool]

Finally there is a book with a lot of Regulus scenes, and it's pretty good. I have been following it until now, and I feel that the writing is very, very good. It does not have the phenomenon of a wonderful beginning but a bad ending, although it has not yet ended. [Like][Like][Like]

Wow, this book is one of the rare books that I like very much. In fact, it is my favorite book. The first is just getting started. Helens traveled to another world, the world of his elder brother, and then the world he entered after concentrating on the bone-piercing curse, and finally the world he was trapped in. That Avada Kedavra. After that, the world really gets better and better the more you write about it, but the author, you are also very good at writing about swords, right? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] It's really the one who wants to stab me.

The writing is quite good. The heroine was created and Sephilus was redeemed. I don't know what the ending will be. I hope it will be the happy ending in my mind. At first, I couldn't distinguish the characters, and I felt that it was a bit outrageous for the two girls to travel back and forth in time and space. I was really touched after reading it. The author is also very attentive. There are many pictures in it.

It's really good to watch, but the be ending bothered me and made me use a lot of tissues. I cried many times at this ending and cried every time I read it. The author's writing is very vivid, and it's hard to get into people's hearts. The plots are connected before and after. It's very good-looking. I watched it from I have read it from beginning to end. This is really one of my Harry Potter fanfics that I think allows me to bring my own emotions into it. His writing is also very perfect and gives everyone a good ending, so that they all get what they want, which is quite beautiful😁

Run, run, run, except for the ending of the protagonist (only the ending), everything else is be, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, the whole process, I cried from the middle to the end, my eyes were swollen for several days, run, my family. I'm really crying to death. I'm really crying. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

It's very beautiful, the writing style is warm, and it makes me feel warm. The brother-sister relationship between Helens and Sif is handled very well, and the relationship with other pro-era members such as James, Lily, Sirius, Remus, Barty Crouch Jr., Etc. Is also good. In the original book, the pro-era member who has only one name at the expense of the Order of the Phoenix is ​​also mentioned! This makes me, a fan of the original book, fall in love with the author. There are character settings at the end of some chapters. I can only say that the pictures of the characters are so beautiful and handsome. The key is not only the story line of the parallel world that Helens traveled through, but also the story line of the descendants of the original world. In the original world, Sijiao was also redeemed, turning him from a greasy big bat (bushi) who never washed his hair or face. He became a refreshing professor in the love festival, and in this article, Eileen and Tobia divorced and returned to Hogwarts as professors. Helens and Sif also changed their surnames to Prince and were with their grandfather, which made up for the regret I felt when reading the original work. Helens CP Rael, Severus CP Otta, and the others are all original CP official versions, and the CP lines are also handled very well! Even Neville's parents' cps were written! Overall, it's great to read, and the author is also very enthusiastic and will reply to many comments! (I haven't finished reading it yet. I'll comment after I finish it)

Too! Great! La! A very, very complete plot! Although it involves many parallel worlds, the author writes very clearly and logically! I saw that the author said that he did not intend to write the be line at the beginning, but when he wrote this line naturally derived from it later, I also understood why I, a person who never watched be, did not skip it, but read it all because this development is really completely natural. The author also wrote it really well and cried, woo woo woo. Finally, thank the author for finally giving everyone the most perfect ending. I love you with all my heart!

Very well written! There are no black characters, the character fits the original work, the author is serious and rigorous, and the plot is very interesting. The character's psychological journey is also delicate and real! This is not a mindless article! (Tomato is not OOC and does not have black characters. It seems that its writing is quite difficult to find...) I have to say, the story is very interesting, it made me cry and laugh sometimes. [Ps: The story of the Cookie Fairy, the author is very educated! It's not a waste to get it! ] Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The grasp of details, innovative conception, brilliant writing, mature thinking, as well as the restoration and three-dimensional construction of the original characters, as well as the delicate expression of emotions are all included in this article. However, the protagonist's previous life was a bit tear-jerking, especially since he had a close relationship with his father in this life... The author writes about the protagonist's campus life. The ever-present dark spying on top of the brightness and relaxation is really unsettling. There is also the breath of the knife, which is also present in the words. Rationally, I know this is normal, but emotionally it really makes me want to send the author some reader specialties... The excellence of the author lies in his impartial view of the characters, and he does not use dramatic conflicts as the purpose of formulating literature, but looks at these vivid characters from a cautious and gentle perspective. I never have the patience to write too long reviews, mainly because I always forget about the knife! Author! You have the ability to come out! Shake people…

This book is very interesting. I haven't felt uncomfortable after reading more than 100 chapters. The main character is Si Jiao's sister, who is really like Little Sun. The plot is also very compact. The cp of no layoffs is very interesting, but as far as I can see, some places are a bit embarrassing. Except for some parts, which are a bit embarrassing, the rest are very interesting [face covering]

It's really super, super, super beautiful. The relationship between Helens and Rael is also written very delicately, and Snape is also cured by Helens. I can't read the abuse. I cried so much that my head hurt when I watched the bee line, so if you can't read the abuse, you can skip those chapters. All in all, I highly recommend this novel, it's so good!

He tortured me most of the night, and I cried in bed. Sad and sweet. 😭 The heroine is really great, she makes everyone think of her, including herself! ——————I would like to ask the author, how did you come up with the idea of ​​writing such a book? [What]

So pretty! ! ! ! I really like Sifu's family-oriented novels. There are very few stories about two worlds that share the same thread. This one is definitely a masterpiece. I have only read two of Rael's CP novels so far, but this one is so healing. Wow, wow, super invincible and beautiful.

This book really made me cry too much. Although it is very rough, the author's writing is very good, and the outline and logic of the story are also perfect. I dare say that this is the best work among all the Harry Potter fanfics I have read.

It's very interesting. The author is very active and knows how to use a knife [laughs]