Strange Stories************

It's beautiful and well written, why don't many people read it?

I beg you to be a fan of the author and the author of another book. Thriller game, wedding night, Yunlong Linliniang.

Coolness: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Plot setting: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Character setting: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Overall score: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Comments: I am currently reading Chapter 50, a book about the protagonist of a strange copy of National Fortune getting a simulation. First of all, the infinite simulation (it should be infinite simulation, the author did not mention this) is quite cool because it does not need to consume some things like other simulation stories. The National Games Live does not want to be as negative as other stories designed to be like the World Network War. Let's talk about the shortcomings. I won a girl in a bet and the hero said it would be useful to keep her. The girl also said that the hero was her god and so on. We readers were waiting to take the harem, but you were beaten to death within a few chapters? Then the author either writes small copies one by one or writes one big copy. I skipped to the next copy before finishing one large copy. I don't believe that there is only one Huangquan dance hall and convenience store in one city. The other parts of the Huangquan Song and Dance Hall are only briefly mentioned. This is not a clear jump. Afterwards, the protagonist followed Angel's note and escaped from the first dungeon of Yue. The protagonist rushed forward with his pet? Shouldn't we be cautious when entering a new environment? The protagonist of the simulation article should not be said to be brave and resourceful, but he shouldn't be a reckless man at least. And after Angel disappears, an explanation needs to be given. Give the protagonist an inner monologue saying that Angel comes first and leaves first, and then the protagonist slowly looks for clues and continues writing. If you, the author, also write foreshadowing, you don't have to be aware of it. 1: (Slowly discover clues during the exploration) 2: (Instead of a character disappearing and then suddenly appearing one day, or the protagonist suddenly running out one day when he is about to die, it is a bad routine.) In any case, 1 is higher level than 2 and has a more involved feeling. It's just a review and does not contain any personal feelings.

It looks better than the note from the mother next door

The temptation of the succubus makes the strange doll unable to extricate itself and is trapped in it [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

I have read a lot of weird books, but I like this copy of yours very much. Almost every one of them is different, especially the Huangquan Dance Hall.

Very good, bold to drop into the pit. But it is true that the rules are not very tight and not connected. This also shows that this book is not very brain-burning and is easier to understand than the Zoo series. The author wants this book, and the fire seems to have to be increased [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

It looks good, but it's too short. Can you do it, author? [Check it carefully]

Fulfill your wish!

I have read a lot of books about ghost stories with rules. In fact, it is very difficult to write your own copy and add details and twists. It can easily make readers feel similar and bored (just like the story of breaking off an engagement is okay at the beginning, but it starts to get annoying after writing too much). This book can be said to be good. The author is full of imagination and innovation, and the sense of immersion is much stronger than most ghost story novels. It can be said that it is worth reading. (Ps: The author is truly patriotic. If you have any ideas about world unity, I suggest you consider it)

It feels good, it looks pretty (-^^-)

The author wants to do it quickly, but who can read it? Let the foreigner next door see it and think I look down on it

Will Little Buddha always be there (✪▽✪)

It's awesome to say that the protagonist is a simulation system, and his own IQ is not low. He is not a holy mother, which is a bit of a disadvantage [laughter]

Hmm... How should I put it? It's okay to write, but... [Grievance]

The innovation of Not the Virgin stood out to me. I originally thought it was a pity not to save the cat-eared girl, but in the end the more I watched it, the more I liked it, which surprised me. Not much communication with reality, patriotism is great. I'm kind of looking forward to the author turning Little Buddha into a cat girl later on, and I'm also looking forward to the plot in which the protagonist gains super combat power. I originally wanted to cheer you on, but you are so awesome and you don't need me to cheer you on, so I decided that if you don't die, it's best to update it 5 times a day [laughing evilly] @president is not overbearing. It's nice to have a look. @ I've given you five stars. Come and see me.

Very good, keep up the good work

This protagonist also relies too much on the system.

The book is a good book. It's just the simulator system that I personally don't like very much. For example, a ghost story has about ten chapters, but if you add a simulator, the number of chapters will increase. In other words, for example, if you have two chapters a day, you will have one weird story for three or four days (generally if Goldfinger is not an emulator), you will have one weird story for six or seven days. This will lead to the fact that there is no update to play the weird story I want to see you. If I follow your update, it will be very uncomfortable if I can't finish it all at once (personal feeling)

It's okay, but I would like to make a suggestion, can it be more logically rigorous, because it is a rules-based novel.

Baozi's book must be given five stars

How should I put it? In terms of advantages, the logic is very clear, but I feel that some of the settings in Kaitan World are not very complete, but I can't put my finger on it. I take back my comment. There is no main plot, and the writing is messy. The main thing is that it keeps simulating, which is really annoying. The same goes for the cat. The cat setting is so annoying. It was only after reading halfway through that I realized that it was getting more and more boring.

Yes, the plot is not mentally retarded and the protagonist is calm and not a virgin. It's a bit strange to go to Spirited Away. The author directly ruined the world setting by doing this. It feels like it was written by two people. What An Qi wrote was quite good. Then I went to a place like that for no reason.

It's okay to write, but be more serious

This book is good. Has the TMD author been pickled? It hasn't been updated for so long.

Not bad, quite exciting

Yes, yes, good reviews.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I just hope that Little Buddha is not written to death, or that he can be included in future plots as long as he is not written to death.

After all, it is a new book and it is quite good and interesting, but it is more similar to the infinite deduction next door. It's very interesting. After all, I didn't read it for more than 30 minutes, so this is my initial evaluation [laugh][laugh][laugh]