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First of all, one word, good! Judging from the plot, the protagonist's personality is very consistent with the will of the light. Different from other invincible novels, I feel the growth in Qin Ye. At the same time, the characters and behaviors of the supporting characters are not just cheering for victory. They have their own thoughts and emotions, such as the father of the three members of the Ye family. Finally, I hope that my son will come more violently! There are too many people watching Owen Invincible! It's all so beautiful! Now that I have chosen Nexus, I feel uncomfortable even if I don't "strangle" Qin Ye! Finally, the reminder is too little! I want to see it! Come on!

The book is pretty good, nothing wrong with it. It's just that as a student, you have too little free time, and it takes a lot of time to practice and practice combat skills. Being an unsystematic student protagonist in the human form of Ultraman has great limitations. Those able-bodied people in Nexus who were later given the ability to fight with the Light Call were because they were not afraid of death. The other two were originally combatants with rich combat experience and inherited skills.

In fact, I was very surprised when I read this article. After all, many Ott articles now follow the route of invincible articles, but in fact it makes people feel very unreal, and maybe it's because of my deep personal opinion! I really like to see the protagonist half-dead, so I really like this article. The protagonist continues to grow and gradually become stronger in the process. This route is really something I never tire of! ! ! (>ω<) (And the author's writing is also very good, highly recommended😁)

Not to mention, the plot and writing are not mentioned at all, which is a bit strange. Other Owens all wish to see how powerful the protagonist is, but Nexus is different. Each protagonist is written more miserable than the other. Maybe this is the charm of a real man. Come on, author, I will catch you to the end.

It looks great. Can the author write some chapters where the protagonist becomes darker? It's a very sharp chapter. This is what I thought about the darkening process. When the protagonist saves other worlds, the villain transforms into the protagonist, attacks the protagonist's original world, kills his parents in front of the protagonist's sister, and makes the protagonist and the people in his world become enemies. The protagonist's sister becomes one of the main forces against the protagonist. After the protagonist comes back, he sees such an earth and asks someone to find out the current situation. The protagonist found his sister, but his sister regarded him as the enemy who killed his parents. The protagonist wanted to explain clearly, but his sister did not believe it. In this way, the protagonist was suppressed by his dark side for various reasons and destroyed the earth. After the protagonist woke up, he looked at the scene in front of him and thought about what he had done and fell into self-blame. During this period of time, the protagonist was both good and evil, and with the help of the heroine, he got out of self-blame. The above is my personal opinion. If the author dislikes it, don't criticize it.

Keep writing, Ott texts on tomatoes are quite rare.

This is the fourth book I have read. In the true sense, the protagonist fully reveals his responsibilities and the combination of human humanity and Ultraman's divinity. It is the aggregation of light and humanity, the growth of an ordinary and hard-working person. The real light does not mean that you have powerful power to enslave and trample others after you obtain it, nor does it mean the invincibility in the online articles and cool articles you read. In the same way, novels should make people learn something from them. There are really not many novels written about Ultra fans with a sense of responsibility like this. They are also really classic and shocking. However, I still want to remind you that I am a little impatient to read them. I wish the author will continue to work hard!

This book is one of the many Ultra fan Xiao Nai books I have read on Tomato. The protagonist has a very upright outlook, and the series of plot developments are very logical without feeling far-fetched. Come on, author, I will keep following up.

Come on, author! As one of the few novels about Nexus in Tomato, this book is the only one that made me feel good. I have also read other novels about Nexus, and they were written like shit.

It's okay, but why are there only descriptions of light rays and no descriptions of fighting?

Let me comment first, I think it's not bad, but the author, you can use a knife, but don't use it on the protagonist's family. After all, it's hard to find an article in which the protagonist's parents and family are still alive. Even if the knife is okay, I hope it will recover later. It's a good ending. Finally, I want to ask, is this Ott novel a single heroine or a harem? (This personal suggestion list is for Nexus after all)

Okay, okay, from the point of view of the fan fiction, the writing is very good. It does not cheat and defeat monsters all the way like other cool stories, getting injured when it should be injured, and defeating when it should be defeated. To be honest, I have read too many Ultra cool stories, and this one is still good and more in line with the various aspects of Nexus Potential. Generally speaking, the protagonist is not invincible, and it is very consistent with the undefeated spirit of Ultraman.

It's great, great, but the author writes more slowly. The details of the fighting and some daily life. Take your time. Come on, come on.

Dear author, I heard that you are a senior in high school this year. When I saw this article you posted, I felt that you had no hope for your future life. Is it because you are too tired from studying, or because of something else? People have to live their own lives. You see, readers, when I graduated from the third grade of junior high school, I was not ready to go to school because my family pushed me too hard and my expectations were too high. My spirit no longer allowed me to go to school online. Do you know? The article you posted was similar to the article you posted when I was in the third grade of junior high school. When I was waiting for the results for half a month, I felt a big feeling in my heart. What you should live out is yourself, you should persuade yourself, work hard, and you won't regret it until the end, and I won't regret it either, because I chose my own path, and I will definitely finish it, because this is the path I chose. What about you? A senior high school student can't read as well as I, a junior high school student.

I haven't seen it yet. Give me a five-star encouragement.

Come on, come on, come on, keep supporting me

The author's writing is good. He can help the protagonist become stronger with a little help. Come on In fact, the author's writing is quite good, but the writing style is still a bit immature and still the same as before. The protagonist keeps on cutting, maybe he is the next generation of quasi-brothers, and the more he cuts, the better. Keep up the good work, author! I give you five stars [laughs]

That is to say, the author, I have two small opinions. The first one is, for example, let the protagonist be seriously injured, and then choose the next one, and then play a few times, and then bring the protagonist back when he can't beat him. For example, like the legend of Nexus, from the first to the last one [laughing], then you can write a few special terms, the kind of hot-blooded ones, it is best not to write about darkness, because the light of Nexus will choose the pure soul, and if you write about darkness, it will easily collapse [laughing] Mainly because no one has written about this path, Tomato or maybe all fanfics. If you want to highlight your own extraordinaryness, you can write this kind of The second way is to slay monsters in your own world, and then go to other worlds to continue slaying monsters. For example, if you meet a newbie, you can take them with you or something like that [shy] Mainly speaking of the first type, that is, I have wanted to read it this way a long time ago. A long time ago, I wanted to write a book based on my idea, but maybe my level is too poor and I have never done it [face covering]

I have read all the comments and replies from the author. It is true that the battle strength of Kiri Elod collapsed a bit in the back, but that is the author's inner thoughts and we cannot change it. The author also said that every book has shortcomings. Let's put aside the bad part and talk about the book as a whole. At least it is not an ugly book. I personally like to read it. This is just my personal opinion. Please don't criticize me.

Come on, author, it's all good, but it's just a bit unsatisfying [face covering]

Why not? Cero Dyna and Gauss only have Nexus and they can't defeat Hyperjedon at all.

It's not bad, and the protagonist's growth experience is also good. Won't Zero and the others appear? If the protagonist remains Noah, it will be difficult to play alone. But if it changes, it feels too fast.

Not bad, this book is worth recommending.

It looks really good, but don't force the knife for the sake of the knife in the later stage. I hope the author will not listen to some people's suggestions and just follow his own ideas. Everyone's story is different. Come on!

Very beautiful. I don't know why I'm always moved inexplicably. Come on [like][like][like][please update]

Good-looking, with light consciousness and mission. It can be said that if you are poor, you can benefit yourself; if you are rich, you can help the world.

*Great, give you "bone bone" palm

The writing is very beautiful, the author's writing style is very good, please don't stop updating, please

Read. Keep up the good work

Very good, come on, author!