Chuan Shu: I Originally Wanted to Pick up the Female Protagonist

Okay, okay, I've recently fallen in love with female master and male apprentice stories (don't ask why, just ask because... It's exciting [smile][smile][smile]) The characters of the male and female protagonists are both good, the female protagonist has strength, brains, and a very responsible system (I really like Tongzi!!!) Male The hero is very good at acting coquettishly (men can act coquettishly, and women's souls can wander ~ [you taste it] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]) The male protagonist turned dark in the later period and also took care of and loved the female protagonist very much (although he made the female protagonist 🔒, but I think it was fun, not sadistic at all, and the female protagonist didn't think anything of it), although the female protagonist The protagonist "hurt" the male protagonist (necessary for the plot), but the male protagonist was not very angry. When he saw the female protagonist, he still acted coquettishly. I really fell in love with him [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The author writes the plot very quickly, and often years pass in a flash [face covering] [face covering] [covering face] Face] will write some short plots from time to time (the heroine is the main character to complete tasks and accumulate experience points). The length is short, but there is something (acceptable for those who do not have high requirements for the plot line). The deputy CP is also very good, and there is no male and female protagonist Kurohara, which is a plus [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]. There is also a heroine who has a bad friend in the real world who has also crossed over. There is also a cp, and it is written in the extra chapter, kswl[laughing][laughing][laughing]

So pretty! ! Super sweet hahaha, the male protagonist is jealous, I like it very much [shy][laughing]

It's very beautiful. This is the only novel I've read recently. I was a little sad when 9595 left at the end, but overall it's very interesting. The author is looking forward to your next book.

Treasure article! The pace is a little faster, the boy's love is revealed little by little, and 9595 is also very cute! Those who are active in the atmosphere, if there is no one around, I will take them away. The female lead and the male lead will continue to give out sweets! !

The male protagonist is cute and very clingy. The whole book is generally good, but it is too short. The only fly in the ointment is that there are too few extras, and we didn't even see them giving birth to cubs. All in all, this book is still very interesting and worth recommending.

It's very, very, very good to read. Some of the plots can make me stomp my feet excitedly on the bed. The male protagonist really touched my heart. Anyway, I like it very much, so this book is very worth reading. The above is my personal suggestion, but it is still worth watching. Don't ask why you just finished watching it. Finally, I reiterate that it is really good to watch. Well believe me

[Soft and cute fox male + double cleanliness + traditional time travel system + non-black male and female protagonists + solving crimes (should be counted but not entirely [shy]) + female mentor and male apprentice + focusing on relationships] I have finished watching it, and it is generally good, but the sudden change of attitude of the heroine is a bit abrupt, that is, she has no emotional transition. She originally refused with both hands and feet, but suddenly she confessed her feelings, which shows her heart [staring] It can be seen that some places were written just for the sake of writing. [Shy] For example, where the villain wanted to kill the original male and female protagonists, and then the whole book is good, but the subdivision is not so good. Also, this book has no cultivation, the main focus is on emotions, and if it is mainly about emotions, the male protagonist has no temper, he is an innocent boy, and he is always shy and blushing. [Shy] There is abuse, very slight, and it is harmless.

Overall, it is still very good. There are twists in the plot, but it is not the kind of twist that is easy to accept. They are almost developing for the better. Both the heroine and the villain experienced different bad treatments when they were young, but they both have their own sunshine. There is a paragraph at the end about a novel author who wrote a book about the heroine traveling into the past. He will not be grateful because others saved him, but instead Why do you feel resentful because someone else is prettier than her? Excluding medical means, a person's appearance is given by his parents and cannot be controlled by himself, but the beauty of his soul can be controlled by himself. Although I have no experience and am not qualified to judge, I think one thing is that if the person who harmed you, you, has a desire for revenge, I can understand it, but this kind of behavior of repaying kindness with hatred, I feel that I deserve this end.

Jue Juezi is very good-looking, although there is a little knife in the middle, but it is inexplicably refreshing to look at, and it is the kind of torture that makes you feel comfortable physically and mentally, because you know that they have misunderstandings, and they both like each other. This is just pretending not to care, but in fact, you have already cared about Shi. She doesn't want him anymore, one thinks he hates her, one feels aggrieved and miserable, and the other is jealous, and the other can't help but feel soft-hearted. The male protagonist has good breasts. Although they are stuffed with black sesame seeds, it's innocuous. Hahaha, it's very sweet. The one in the middle can be considered sweet and cruel at best, and there are only a few chapters.

The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists and other supporting characters are very sweet. The male protagonist is half demon or half fox demon. He is afraid that the female protagonist will abandon him after learning his true identity, but she does not. The female protagonist still insists on accepting him as her disciple and tells him to hide his identity and not be discovered by others. Later on, he is simply a clingy person. Who knows the value of asking you to touch your ears and tail, and you will be jealous. , A real jealous person, and the heroine is also very well designed. When the heroine picked up the hero at the beginning, she thought she was the heroine from the original book. She grew up with the hero little by little and became a little white flower who did not rely on others to live. She never backed down in the face of difficulties. She felt sorry for the hero when he was injured, expressed her concern and gave him medicine, and took care of all his little emotions. She is strong and gentle. I really love it.

It's very good-looking, but it's a pity that there's no dark room [I'm about to cry]. I originally thought it would be boring to see the male protagonist become dark, but ugh😔, it's such a pity [crazy], but it's also very good-looking, I like it very much😍

It's a bit short for me, but it doesn't stop it from being good-looking [shy][shy][shy] I saw it in the early hours of the morning [shy] the male protagonist is really cute and grandma in the whole story, I like it very much [shy][shy][shy] at the end it's all he, but I don't have any regrets [laughing]

Both the development of the plot and the pacing are very well written (I really like [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]) and the overall length is not very long. The author's writing style is also very good. If you like the author, be sure to follow him⊙∀⊙! The content of this novel (very novel) is different from what I have read before, especially the ending where the bad system needs to be eradicated, and it is not only the heroine who has traveled through time, but also other people. I also learned some stories from the back about the male and female protagonists when they were young. Not much to say! I love this book so much. If you are a fan of the book, remember to read it! !ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

Overall, it's pretty good. It's a sweet fantasy novel. It's not as vast as other fairy tales with a world view. Overall, it's a story between the male and female protagonists, the original male and female protagonists, the senior sister and Xiao Zhun. The author's writing style is okay, but it gave me the feeling that he had written everything but nothing. Everything is written, including the male and female protagonists getting to know each other, falling in love, killing each other, and reconciling, as well as various missions and events interspersed in between. Nothing is written about the relationship between the male and female protagonists, the psychological description, the characters are not three-dimensional enough, the conflicts are not obvious, the events are too simple, etc. Generally speaking, short sweet stories about cultivating immortality can be followed [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

Very good plot The heroine's time travel is very good to the hero, but the hero falls in love with the heroine... There is a scene of imprisonment, and they get together after expressing their feelings. I still really admire CP (Lu Tang and Xiao Zhun) haha The extra chapter completes the previous plot. It's a very sweet extra.

Although it was short, it was very sweet and had everything it should have. There was a misunderstanding in the middle, but it was resolved quickly. The male protagonist never blamed the female protagonist for pushing him off the cliff. The reason why he pushed him was because the male protagonist's identity as a half-demon was discovered and he was slandered as the person who massacred the village. The female protagonist was seriously injured and could not protect the male protagonist. Before pushing, she put a protective shield on the male protagonist, so he would definitely not fall to death. Not long after pushing him, the female protagonist reversed the case and caught the culprit. Later, the male protagonist became stronger. His men captured the female protagonist. After the male protagonist went to rescue him, he put her in shackles and put her in his room. The golden house hides the beauty. It has been sweet from now on. The male protagonist is a bit yandere. Finally, the misunderstanding is resolved, he expresses his feelings, and then they get married. The other male and female partners are also perfect.

Read the series in one sitting! This book is very well written by the author. It is a story about raising a master and a disciple. The heroine raises him and loves him like her own brother. However, she has already secretly promised her her heart. When the disciple grows up, he eats the master. The disciple is very innocent and becomes shy after being teased by the heroine. There is also the most poignant thing. My male protagonist turns out to be a fox (half-demon) with fox ears and a tail. When the male protagonist is shy, his ears and tail will pop out uncontrollably. This article describes the character of the villain Jiang Yu (the male protagonist) very thoroughly. The female protagonist is very strong, strong, intelligent and beautiful. The ending is perfect, and there are several pairs of plots in the article, but the only bad thing is that the heroine's emotional change towards the hero is too hasty. Recommended recommendations [smirk] [snicker] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [admiration] [admiration] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoring] [flying kiss] [cool] [send heart] [lick screen] [laugh] [love] [like] [love] [sad] [OK]

It looks good, I really like the characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] It would be nice if there were more post-marriage extras for the male and female protagonists [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry ][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

This book is very interesting in the early stages, but there are more kissing scenes in the later stages. Personally, I think the early stage looks better. If you like watching kiss scenes, I suggest you watch the back part~ [Note] In addition, there are many CPs in the book, the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the original male protagonist and the original female protagonist, Lu Tang and Xiao Zhiwen (Xiao Zhun). There is also a supporting role of CP, the waiter and the proprietress. Highly recommended, it may be a bit cruel later on. What he writes in each chapter is brilliant. Moreover, the topics of each chapter are very simple and there is a lot of content in each chapter. The only drawback is that the ending is a bit too fast. Well, it looks good anyway. And it only has 98 chapters, and several of them are extra chapters. If you don't like reading long stories, I recommend reading this. This is a master-disciple relationship. It is highly recommended to those who like reading Master-Disciple Love. This book review ends here. Goodbye! (Hope to give a like)🙏

It's a very interesting plot [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] However, the detail of the car part has been reduced, which is too bullying for people like me who like seductive writing (I am like this, my book list has exposed me) [Punch]. The male protagonist is relatively shy (he was aggressive when he did it, don't doubt it). After the female protagonist died, he was more open-minded (more open-minded than the male protagonist). He never admitted that the male protagonist liked him, but of course he admitted it in the end.

It's absolutely beautiful. It can definitely be rated 9.4 Or higher. Chapter 98 is a short story, which is very sweet. There is a little misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists, but the male protagonist does not hate the female protagonist. He has always loved the female protagonist. It is a little cruel and joyful. Highly recommended for super love! ! !

I don't know what to say, but really, this is definitely the most unforgettable book I have ever read. 9595 Really dotes on the heroine. Both the main and sub-CP endings are very good and very sweet. Great support for the author. I want to see you open a new book.

The author writes very well. This is my first second-hand book on Tomato. The emotional handling of this book is wrong, whether it is between the male and female protagonists or other CPs. The description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very good, and the plot has interesting ups and downs. However, the handling of the heroine's emotions towards the hero is a little vague, some branch lines are not so closely connected with the main line, and the role of the system is not that obvious. Overall, the book is really good. There are few good books among the tomato novels I have read. Good luck to the author [smile][smile][smile]!

This book is really good. I have been very picky recently and I gave up after searching for many books. Until I found this book by the author Dada on a topic, and I happened to like reading this type of plot. [Laughing][laughing] This book is sweet and has some sadistic aspects, but only slightly, and there is only some sourness in my heart. It's also a nurturing series. The progress in the first part is relatively slow, but in a blink of an eye you can see that the main male character has reached adulthood. If you are impatient, you can just hang on, it will be very sweet later! [Shy][shy] And there will be cars running back and forth in front of you behind, which is really beautiful! [Laughing][laughing] Finally, I hope everyone can see the story of Ah Yu and Qing Ci. I wish this couple a happy life, grow old together, accompany each other for the rest of their lives, and never be separated [crying] [crying]

It's not bad. At least the heroine won't push the hero away, and there's no Kurohara hero or heroine, but I don't understand why the original hero went to find the heroine, and was inexplicably cold-faced when he couldn't save her. I was really speechless by him. [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Others are not bad. The male protagonist is a yandere and coquettish type, and the female protagonist is not a saint. The system is also powerful, not bad.

The story that echoes from beginning to end is really amazing. Chapter 2 echoes the ending plot just right, blowing up the author's idea. It turns out that everything is traceable. It starts with a promise: No matter where you are, I will come back to find you; it ends with the completion of the promise that you really come back to me. It has a beginning and an end. 9595 Found Qingci probably because Ayu's life was too hard, so he arranged for Qingci to accompany and protect Ayu. Although Ayu spent the first half of his life wandering around and suffering a lot, Jiang Yu finally waited for Gu Qingci who said he would come back to find him. Qingci was the light in Ayu's life. Although the article is not long, it explains everything that needs to be explained. It's beautiful! ! ! I really like this kind of short but rich plot. The story of Xiao Zhun and Lu Tang is also interesting. The 9595 system is finally not the kind of Tongzi who only cheats the host. I am touched. The stories of Qing Ci, A Yu, Lu Tang and Xiao Zhun will never be finished. They will definitely live happily in the parallel world. I thank the author for giving them life. I wish you peace, joy and everything goes well. ————2023.3.5.16：26 Bx. M

Ahhhh! It's so good. I like this kind of article. The author's writing is very good. The plot is also very exciting. It's not sad at all. There are just a few pictures in the middle that are a little bit sad, but that's not called sad. It's just to let the other person see his heart clearly. On the surface The heroine will also explain the reasons for these pictures in the following chapters. Anyway, they are very beautiful and really sweet. If you like reading sweet articles, you must try it. Moreover, every couple in the article finally gets married, and every couple is not abusive. I really recommend it! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates]

Love it! ! It's just a bit short, I want to watch the extras of 9595! This is the first time I like a system so much. I really like this article. It's not abusive. Some people say it's abusive. In fact, I don't think it's abusive at all. When I saw that, I didn't feel any emotion at all. It's really not abusive. On the contrary, the male and female protagonists in the back are very sweet. The male protagonist is very coquettish and even calls her sister! ! ! Who knows! ! ! Show them all to me! ! ! ! ! Don't make me kneel down and beg you! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] (In addition, I also like the author very much, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah)

It's not very long, just enough to read (✪▽✪) I really like this kind of tender and slightly sadistic plot, especially touching the little fox, it's really awesome, I'm really moved. The final foreshadowing is good: the fireworks and the rescue really turn out to be you.

It's really good. It's so sweet at the end. It's also very sweet at the beginning, but there may be a bit of abuse in the middle. I don't think so. It's just that the heroine pushed the hero off the cliff, and then the heroine... See for yourself, I won't tell you, hahahahahaha