One Piece: I Serve in the Marines, Ready to Lay Down My Life for Justice

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Hmm... So-so. After reaching chapter 12, I don't want to read it anymore... It's not interesting. The protagonist doesn't use his brain at all, because I understand that the system is trying to kill himself, but it's really unbearable if he doesn't use his brain at all. What else is there in Chapter 12? Is this what the protagonist said when he first came up? How much does the abundance of pirates have to do with the Celestial Dragons? At least the Tianlong people will give you a bite to eat if they like you. Will the pirate give you a bite to eat? Bad order is better than no order at all. If you don't consider the future, you might as well defect from the navy immediately. Anyway, you yourself, the protagonist in the navy, will also bring trouble to others. In this way, the protagonist has no restrictions on going crazy and committing suicide! No one thinks it's good for the protagonist to be selfish. Why bother in the Navy.

What kind of atmosphere can it be written like this? The details are poor and the plot logic is outrageous. A major is blamed for scolding the Tianlong people. Is it easy to have a civilian major? There is no detailed description and it is a waste of time to write it with humor.

So far, it's very good. I remember there was a book with the same style as this book. It seemed like a one-man effort. Yours is too short and doesn't look good enough! The author thinks it should be three centimeters at most. It's too short 😏😏😏

How could it be such a cool novel? Pirates wants this kind of invincible novel to crush all monsters. The protagonists of other pirate novels are brothers with these pirates and even claim to be pirates and adventurers. I don't understand why they can ignore so many evils caused by pirates. I hope the author can kill Doflamingo without giving him any chance!

To be honest, it's okay. Although the reason for risking one's life is because of the system, there is still something to be said for targeting pirates. Except for the slow update

Fujitora ➕The protagonist who is close to the strength of a general ➕ Zefa VS a Ming brother? If Brother Ming has such strength, will he be defeated by Luffy? The author just dragged it out. It looked good in the beginning, and I was thinking of giving it five stars. But first, Fujitora➕ Zefa couldn't protect an ordinary person in front of Ming Ge (those two marines are not useless, right?). Later, the protagonist insisted on causing trouble with Ming Ge. 1V1, you Fujitora➕Protagonist just ended the battle in 10 minutes (maybe less than ten minutes). He also said that Fujitora's opponent is Jack. Even Jack can be Fujitora's opponent?

The book is good, but there is a bug. The protagonist is a fighting loser who obtained the Phoenix Fruit for the first time. So how did he transform from a loser who dies at the touch of a touch to a general-level combat capability? At most, he has some passive abilities and self-healing abilities brought by the fruit. You can change it here so that you get the development level and physical bonus of the previous fruit ability user (mastery). Otherwise, your article will become a brainless and cool article. You will directly eat the setting of developing the fruit. Then there will be no concept of awakening, because the fruit does not need to be developed, just eat it.

I like his justice

This book is very well written, but there is one thing I don't understand: how can a phoenix control water? Isn't he a fire attribute? If it's some thunder and lightning, it's barely acceptable, but the Phoenix's ability to control water is really a bit different. The most important thing is Kaido. The Blue Dragon Fruit can't control water. Without comparison, there's no harm. Also, the author wrote a little less. I finished reading it in a while, and it's too short.