Overlord: Zesshi Zetsumei

I have a friend. He also specializes in writing novels. Because he couldn't finish the next chapter, he was tied to the street and beaten. Two ribs were broken. He was blind in one eye, deaf in one ear, and his hand was broken. If there is no other meaning, just remind me [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] Finished? It's pretty good. It would be great if I could continue writing.

It's clearly well written, why doesn't anyone comment? [What]

"It looks good, come on, I like it." "How should I put it? Although there is nothing unreasonable, I feel that the ending is a bit hasty. It seems that this book can be written more."

It's good, but the main role is a bit lacking

It's really well written! It's closer to the original work. I felt bad after reading it and I was very reluctant to leave it😫

A very ingenious idea. This setting is even closer to the original work. Thank you so much to the author.

Although the writing is very good, I still don't want to see the NPC's perspective at this stage.

Not bad, but the number of words is still a bit short

A very good book

It's very interesting. It would be great if there were extra episodes.