Junior Sister, She Broke Off the Relationship and Just Wanted to Become an Immortal

Sweet pet article, you can read it. Personally, I think it's too sweet and a bit boring. The senior brothers and master are too kind to the heroine, and they don't give any reason. They dote on her from the beginning. The heroine is very strong. When fighting with others, whether it is the heroine or the other party, the second one will always speak up. The heroine has incredible luck, and all kinds of opportunities come to her at will. There are also various men who match up with the heroine, have a crush on the heroine, help the heroine, and dote on the heroine. It's a bit like a male harem novel [laughing and crying]. There are no typos in the entire novel, and the plot is coherent, but the writing needs to be improved and is still a bit immature. The old bookworm is short of books, so I picked it up and read it, and gave me a review by the way [eating melon]

1. No cp·cultivation·strong woman·past and present life 2. The scumbag index is strong, it's fun to watch and heart-warming, the heroine is strong but not strong enough, the plot is smooth but a bit hard to understand (there are too many characters with too many names, you have to think about it before you can match them) You can read it yourself. I have read so many novels. This is the first time I have read the whole novel and I don't know what to say.

It looks great, the author keeps up the good work. [Laughing][laughing]

This book is the first book I have read in 2023 and is worth collecting. I like the content so much that I couldn't bear to finish it! It's so difficult to find a book that suits my heart. As soon as I found it, I finished reading it and cried in my heart.

I feel like this book is quite good. As for the heroine, isn't it a bit strange? It turns out that people who are in the Tribulation Period become Foundation Establishers, but the power they feel in Foundation Establishment is very strong. I'm always surprised. She doesn't look like the ancestor who is in the Tribulation Period, and is very emotional [Thinking]

It's so beautiful, I hope it doesn't end badly in the future

Is Gu Mian married? Can't you continue writing? I still want to continue watching that, but now it's gone! Let's write more extra chapters! It's so beautiful!

Very nice! But I hope the author will do more. Warm reminder: The author must balance work and rest, and don't be too tired!

How do you say Very good? It's very good, very, very good. Whether it's in terms of plot, character, or detailed description, it's all very good. It's just that maybe the author's writing style is not good, so the story doesn't seem that smooth and doesn't make people feel like they're there. But the details have already made the story flow smoothly. Sometimes there are too many foreshadowings in the story, so you have to work hard to fill in the holes, author

I like it, I like it very much, no cp female majoring in fairy literature

I like this plot of the heartthrob's son of fate. After all, reading novels is for fun. But the heroine is strong but not strong enough. It can be seen that there is a long foreshadowing, but the later reveal is too hasty and a bit rushed. Some details are not well explained. In the early stage, too much time was spent on useless areas. I was not happy enough to abuse scumbags. Some characters' personalities were not well interpreted. I gave it four stars because I like the heroine's training process and it's not too dragging.

That's great, I like Senior Brother very much! ! ! Will Xiao Xue mention the incident about senior brother in the future? ? ?

I read this book on January 18, 2023. The content written in it is very good. I like it very much. The author must work hard😄. I am looking forward to our next meeting. Also, I wish you all a Happy New Year

Great author, keep writing! Super pretty!

This novel about cultivating immortality without cp is eye-catching! The heroine is strong and sober, and does not rely on others. She relies on her own wisdom and hard work to overcome obstacles in the world of immortality. I just really want to see the extra story about the heroine😆

It's very interesting, but the author missed some foreshadowing that was laid before. I finished reading this book at 3:58 on Monday, January 23, 2023. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

I really like it, I really don't have anything to say to you all (I wish you all a Happy New Year in advance (ꈍᴗꈍ))

It's really good-looking, the plot has ups and downs, and what I didn't expect is... (No spoilers, just explore for yourself~) Anyway, I would like to remind the readers behind me (no spoilers are intended) to pay attention to the people around Mianmian~ [Note] It is indeed a book that I like, the heroine is strong and sassy [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Note: This book has no cp, but this only means that the heroine has no cp, it does not say... Hehehe [full]

I really like it. There is no male lead and the female lead is so handsome alone.

Hee hee, this book is quite interesting and worth recommending [like][like][like]

It's very beautiful and suits my taste. I hope the author will make more updates.

It looks great and I like it very much 😍 (I wish you all a Happy New Year in advance) [smile] [admiration] [admiration] [blowing kiss]

Very beautiful, very touching. I just thought that I don't need a male protagonist in the beginning, but I can choose a male protagonist in the finale.

One of the few heroines I have seen has no emotional line

This book is really amazing, it's super beautiful [Top post][Top post]

It's really beautiful, highly recommended

It's so good. I didn't sleep at night and stayed up late to watch it🌚My dear hair has fallen out.

It's so beautiful, I don't know why the rating is so low

Good looking. The heroine and her brothers like each other hehe.

I really hope Gu Mian and Rong Xuan get together. It looks very exciting.