Originally I just wanted to work and earn a little money, but I accidentally turned into a Yin-Yang man, earning money from selling cabbage, with the heart of selling white powder. His moral practice is so shallow that I can't tell whether he is a human or a ghost...
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Not bad, worth a look
At the beginning of the second chapter, the author uses the word bustling to describe desertedness. This word obviously describes being lively. Please pay more attention to the words you use when writing.
Although the male protagonist is timid, he still likes to watch it. When will Uncle Zhao return to China? The female protagonist's character is also quite good. It will be updated soon. [Stare][Stare]
It's great to watch, and the plot is interesting.
Not bad, I like it very much
Not bad, but a bit general and not specific enough
Not bad, worth a look
At the beginning of the second chapter, the author uses the word bustling to describe desertedness. This word obviously describes being lively. Please pay more attention to the words you use when writing.
Although the male protagonist is timid, he still likes to watch it. When will Uncle Zhao return to China? The female protagonist's character is also quite good. It will be updated soon. [Stare][Stare]
It's great to watch, and the plot is interesting.
Not bad, I like it very much
Not bad, but a bit general and not specific enough
Not bad, very exciting