Mortal**

The author's writing style is sophisticated and beautiful. The quality of this book is also outstanding. A mortal man leads three nephews to cultivate immortality. He writes about intrigues and the sophistication of human beings. It's really good. I finally found a book that can calm my mind and let me read it.

This book really suits my taste, and it feels very mature to read. 1. The characters are well drawn. An old soldier who survived the blood sea of ​​corpses carefully led his family on the road to immortality. One of the three nephews is mature and steady, one is cautious, and the other is decisive in killing. The three people have different personalities and have embarked on different paths, but they are all for the prosperity of the family. 2. The plot is reasonable and compact, without any poisonous points. The narrative is clear. The plot of each character in the group portrait was grasped just right, without seeming to be delayed at all. The author's literary skills are very solid, and his realistic style is a little humorous. 3. Come on, author! I followed this book from "I Am Immortal in History" and hope this book can be completed.

The author couldn't finish the last book, and he still has unfinished ideas! The narrative of this book is simple and sophisticated, and the plot is compact and reasonable. It's a great book.

Recommended, the book written by the author is really good

A rare work, a writer looks at this work from the perspective of experience: The author tells the story from the perspective of a family, starting from a veteran who is not the protagonist of cultivating immortality, but is also the origin of cultivating immortality. He uses the main character as an introduction to narrate the story. Among the works on cultivating immortality, there are few! Coupled with the author's excellent writing skills, it is really fascinating to read. The character setting and plot arrangement are very thoughtful, with both a sense of immortality and a detailed depiction of real life. While reading, you will also resonate with some opinions. The author is very attentive! At present, the total number of works is not large, and more of them need to be cultivated. Seeing that there are a lot of plot foreshadowings in the story, I feel that the setting is quite long and it should be very interesting! I am very much looking forward to the subsequent development of the story and the rise, fall and growth of the family. I wish the author all the best, and the most important thing is that everything goes well with the story update hahaha, I hope there will be more, and I hope it is not a cool novel and not a harem. So far, I like it! There is no system, no harem, no smooth sailing, no mess. It's great to dig holes and fill them while telling the story! ! ! Five stars! ! ! !

I have finished reading the latest chapter. This article should be a group portrait. So far, the protagonist's position has changed from the old soldier to the second child. Except for a few chapters, there are no major problems in other aspects. Keep up the good work. You will have your place in the future Tomato masterpiece. Come on.

Yes, that's right. It's not easy to find a good quality novel on Tomato. The writing and plot are excellent. If nothing else, Li Ping'an should be dying soon. It would be great if we could give him a break, so that he can truly become the family's Dinghaishenzhen. [Note] The ancestor of the Li family I read more than forty pictures in one go. The author will update soon. I will keep a few more pictures and read them again.

Not bad, not bad, well written, a bit like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but can you give the protagonist some tricks so that he can also practice?

Well written, keep it up. You can even write the kind of story about the family from generation to generation. You don't have to be obsessed with an ancestor who has lived for many years. How about writing a relatively rare family story?

It's good-looking and has a sense of history. It's not a family story on the surface, but it's actually a cool story about a personal protagonist cultivating immortality. It can be regarded as a relatively good group portrait fantasy. The writing style is quite humorous, but there are many thought-provoking places if you savor it carefully. It made me see another real world. The character descriptions in the book are very real, and the portrayal of people's hearts is also profound. The author's grasp and description of human nature are impressive. Although it is a leisurely book about cultivating immortals, I would like to read it several times if I have time.

I just read a few chapters. This book is very good. It is not a mindless novel. It is organized and organized. The author has a sophisticated writing style and clear narrative. I don't know why it only has a score of 6.8. This book is acceptable on all seven points.

The purpose of this book is very high, the writing style is the best among the best, and the author definitely has the ability to become a god in one book. The main reason why the score is not good is that the level of this book is too high, and those who like to read refreshing articles can't stand it. I just can't stand it, and of course it's not the author's fault, but mine. Of course, after reading a little bit, there are a few settings that I want to complain about. That is, the first protagonist of the book, Li Ping'an, can actually devote his life to three nephews (two of whom are not biological nephews) and never marry. It is difficult for me to feel involved. If the second generation of the Li family were his own children, and the children of his uncle and younger brother, I think more people would watch it.

The writing is really good, there are no poisonous points in the whole book, and the IQs of the characters are all online. In particular, it clearly describes the naked predatory of the jungle, intrigues, and reality in the officialdom and the world of immortality. This is not very clear in other immortality novels. There is nothing good for no reason. It is just a greed for your wealth. Those who like reading novels may not be able to stand it, but this is the reality. There are so many golden fingers. You have to fight for everything by yourself. Li Ping'an, a mortal, risked his life to kill and seriously injure the immortals, and became the Li Clan of Immortals. To be honest, the writing is really good. In the years when cheat-finger novels have become popular in this system, this book is truly considered a masterpiece and can be discontinued.

I just started reading a few chapters. My thinking logic, writing skills, and sophisticated writing skills are all okay, but there are too few updates every day.

The author is really detailed, the writing style is very good, the article is fluent, and he is very intelligent. The author has understood the world of people to a certain level. The protagonist is decisive in killing, not the kind of mindless killing. Anyway, it is good-looking. Come on, author @

It's still a very good new book, and the group portraits are well written.

The author's writing is more coherent, logically clear, and closer to human feelings and sophistication. However, it seems that the author has an insight into the ways of the world, and must have experienced a lot of experience. It seems that he has also suffered a lot of setbacks in reality, and I feel that there is something in his words. ... Maybe it's not rated high if it's close to reality. It's rather boring. It doesn't have a slap-in-the-face plot, it's a heart-warming and fun-filled story with no brainers.

It's not bad, it's a beggar's version of Xuanjian Xianzu. Tomato doesn't have to spend any money to read this kind of novel. It's pretty good.

The real world of cultivating immortals, the process of a mortal family turning into a family of cultivators, is not like the soaring to the sky in other cool novels. It is very graphic and realistic, and Tomato is another magical book. I hope it can become a legend like the last book

This book is somewhat similar to "Xuanjian Immortal Clan", but it is completely different. It depicts the difficulty of cultivating immortals, the complexity of the human world, and the thoughts and strategies of mortals. Li Pingan's depiction is very good, and the characters he writes are also very three-dimensional. I have seen the latest chapter, and I feel that the group portraits are among the best. Old characters such as Li Ping'an and the three nephews. Immortals have immortal personalities, and mortals have mortal thoughts. Li Yuanshan and Li Yuantai of the fourth generation are also well written. They have very different origins and have created different personalities, but they both have the ambition to climb up and are mutual confidants. Belong brings the family to life and the different characters clearly. I hope the author can continue to do so and look forward to the following stories.

It's a masterpiece. It's rare for Tomato to read such a good book. Mad, there are less than ten chapters in a month. I suggest you not to fall into this trap. The author should stop writing. I want to scold you.

It has the feeling of an immortal novel, and Tomato Rare is very fascinating. I have only seen the first twenty pictures so far, and it feels like a fairy tale from the Xuanjian Clan. After four or five scans of the daily lists, the new book list, the general list, and the reward list, I have almost finished this list, and there are only a few that I can read.

Overall, it's okay. There's nothing bad about it. It's just that the author doesn't update it a little bit. I suggest the author update two chapters a day so that some people won't stop reading it.

The writing is pretty good, it belongs to a relatively slow-burning genre, the plot is well laid out, and the writing is pretty good, so it's worth watching.

It's great. It's the first time I've seen this type of novel about cultivating immortals. The content is logical and not watery. It reads very naturally. The writing style is also good. It's plain but with an aftertaste. The rating should be higher, at least nine points. I hope the author will update it soon [snickering] [smirking].

The structure and details of this book are really good. The main characters are the history of a family. They are timid and subtle, and there is no such thing as brainless pushback. It reminds me of the science fiction novels in the Base series that I read before. It's really good. I hope the author can work hard and finish the update.

Under the current restrictions, this book has described the most realistic process of a mortal cultivating immortality, which is not bad. This is the second immortality novel that I recognized. (If it doesn't suck)

Although I have read a lot of books on Immortality, this one is refreshing and really good. Please update it soon.

The author's writing style is really great [crying] [crying] It's a great book I discovered by chance. It's so good that I love to read it. But the author's update speed is too slow [angry] [angry] It's not enough to read.

Pretty good, no system. It's not a mind-boggling piece of writing. It suits my very finicky appetite.