The group portraits flow endlessly, and the male protagonist's character grows along with the plot, focusing on psychological shaping without peeing, and becoming the god of war in the later stage.
Urban hunting elimination competition, hunting those monsters with huge size and powerful abilities, in the early urban background.
Reader comments
What should I say? Author, I feel that this book is a success. Urban unlimited flow is indeed a relatively popular theme, and some derivative settings can indeed be used for reference. However, what you wrote is no different from Killing City.
1. There are too many imitations, and the same ones are teleported only after they die. Even the protagonist in the early stage imitates the character of Kato Masaru, but in fact, the character of Kato Masaru is really not very likable. He is just a bad guy. It is better to look at the anime's description of the real protagonist Kei Kurono, a real character transformation.
2. The same alien battle settings, but for Infinite Streaming, if you just fight aliens, the plot is really boring. There is no scary plot, no exciting battles, it really feels like playing house, and you can't experience real killing.
3. I suggest you do more scene descriptions and character characterizations, because I think your plot and dialogue are a bit messy. If you want to stream infinitely, you should try to write more about the supporting characters, even if they become sour after a while.
Four points is considered an encouragement. I hope you can improve in the future.
Just a correction, the protagonist is portrayed like Kato Masaru and Genno Kei, but the real pheasant can't save people at the beginning, and was dragged into the water by Kato Masaru. I feel like you merged the personalities of the two characters.
What are you writing? It's a waste of time.
I couldn't finish three chapters, so I slipped away.
What should I say? Author, I feel that this book is a success. Urban unlimited flow is indeed a relatively popular theme, and some derivative settings can indeed be used for reference. However, what you wrote is no different from Killing City. 1. There are too many imitations, and the same ones are teleported only after they die. Even the protagonist in the early stage imitates the character of Kato Masaru, but in fact, the character of Kato Masaru is really not very likable. He is just a bad guy. It is better to look at the anime's description of the real protagonist Kei Kurono, a real character transformation. 2. The same alien battle settings, but for Infinite Streaming, if you just fight aliens, the plot is really boring. There is no scary plot, no exciting battles, it really feels like playing house, and you can't experience real killing. 3. I suggest you do more scene descriptions and character characterizations, because I think your plot and dialogue are a bit messy. If you want to stream infinitely, you should try to write more about the supporting characters, even if they become sour after a while. Four points is considered an encouragement. I hope you can improve in the future. Just a correction, the protagonist is portrayed like Kato Masaru and Genno Kei, but the real pheasant can't save people at the beginning, and was dragged into the water by Kato Masaru. I feel like you merged the personalities of the two characters.
What are you writing? It's a waste of time.
I couldn't finish three chapters, so I slipped away.