神奇宝贝之磐石大君

Very good, a rare elf novel that specializes in the ground system. Not many people like the ground type, but the giant beast is really handsome.

I really like this book. I feel it is even better than the one written by the great sage. This book suits my taste. I have been reading Pokémon for 7 years and I like large and heavy Pokémon like Bandera. I wish the author continues to work hard.

This book is well written, just like those people commented before. It looks good, but the author is too short. Give it a try first. Hahaha, it's still the hard work of the author. Come on.

This book is one of the best Pokémon fanfics I've ever read. The author's writing is very good. There is one problem that I hope you can change. That is that the updates are too slow, and the skills are too long to write.

Faster, faster, let's finish the battle with Xiba today [crazy][crazy][crazy], and there should be a heroine [adoration][adoration][adoration] More updates on May Day, ten updates a day, 20,000 words, okay [crying]~

This is the real elf world! It criticizes the urban elf literature. The most important core of it is that travel is gone. Using travel as a link to meet new challenges and partners is gone. It also loses sight of the most important bond with the elf. It is just a stream of cultivating immortals and beasts wearing Pokémon skins. The school is more like a sect.

I have read a lot of Pokémon books, but I rarely see novels in which you gradually become stronger in a steady manner, and there are no ups and downs in the plot. One thing I think is particularly good is the potential field and fusion skills. At the same time, the term "qualification" has been removed, and it is still specialized. Generally speaking, it is in line with my appetite. Please give the author more support! More updates (Can you consider being a werewolf, day or night is fine)

It's really great. This style gives people a very comfortable and coordinated feeling. It's one of the only two books I have in my collection. Slowly watching him go from the original rating of 6 points to now, the author has been working hard and the books are getting better and better. I feel quite a sense of accomplishment. I hope the author can work hard! ! [Like][Like][Like]

Great book! Finally, there is someone who cultivates a big steel snake. It's well written and comfortable to watch, but it's a bit short. Please update online.

The heroine Sirona is my favorite [Adoration]. This book is actually quite good. Maybe the author will slightly weaken the protagonist when facing weak people. There are also typos and some setting conflicts. Others I feel are still very good. I hope there will be someone who can't fly in the future [laughter]

This is a must-read book in the series about writing expertise! ! !

It's really good-looking. I'll use Groudon later. Hehe. Very good-looking, very special, and very handsome

This is one of the few Pokémon stories that I can read, so I won't say anything else! I love the novels written by the author! Just... Giratina, Darkrai, Lord Snake, Alola Nine-Tails, and Frozen Bird, can there be some plot? [I'm about to cry] I like them so much. I don't want the protagonist to subdue them. Let's have a powerful supporting character and use them to kill everyone! (Of course, it would be even better if the protagonist can conquer one or two! [Salute]) It's just a suggestion... A suggestion... If it hinders the author's original plan, forget it [crying]

It's a good book. It's one of the few teams with Steel Snake as the main player. It's a pity that it's so slow.

I came here with the idea that Sirona was the heroine, and I was sucked in as I watched. This kind of battle is so perfect. I'm always shocked every time the Big Steel Snake appears. The pressure of the mountains slowly coming towards me seems to really appear in front of me. It's so cool. The burning bug is really cute when it acts coquettishly from time to time, and the golden flame after evolution is really amazing and cool!

I really love the latest chapter. It is the first time that A Liu is so strong and unique. It makes up for the regrets of the theatrical version. This is the strength that an insect king should have who can truly rival the Four Heavenly Kings. Hahaha

Four stars for anti-sinking, the real score will not exceed two stars. I really don't understand that Fengyuan's Dragon King actually only has one elf, Tyrannosaurus, and it can't beat the wild Night Demon of the same level [Like] [Like]

The writing is quite nice. The main character Elf's strength is improving at a moderate speed, and the emotional drama is okay. Of course, it may be a book that reminds me of the past. In short, it is well written and deserves five stars. If I have to find a shortcoming, it is that the update is too slow. If it were 10 chapters a day, I think it would be better.

After reading this book, I picked up Pokemon FireRed again. After reading it for more than 10 hours, combined with the guide, I finally had my first Pokemon pass in my life. It was very nice [like][like][like]

I love reading it. This book says that Sirona is the single heroine, but in fact there are more than 600 photos from Chapter 1. The connection with Sirona is not very big. I hope the author can add some plots with Sirona.

It's really good-looking. I'm following the update every day now. If the protagonist really becomes the King, will he be called King Xiaoyong? Then standing with other King will feel a little weird [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This is the best Pokémon novel I have ever encountered on Tomato 🍅, bar none. I hope the author can work hard. Of course, it would be better to update it from time to time.

The best Pokémon text by far. The 6V6 all-out battle is well written, but some less important rounds could be written faster. The system report panel is too long and seems to have a low word count. Friendship and bond are what I think are the most powerful forces in the Pokémon world. It's great that the author can write about them.

It's a refreshing flow of Pokémon writing. It's very clear to read. The plot is clear and light. The whole text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful. It's simple but not vulgar. It's worth reading. It's great. I just hope the author will follow more. It's not enough. Keep up the good work, author! [Like][Like]

It's very good. The plot is mainly based on continuous competition and growth. It's interspersed with some mythical beast theatrical version content. It's quite good. I really like the competition-based format. The setting of the real book is mainly based on the original work. The author added some settings to make it more natural. It's quite good. Except for the age description, it's weird according to the original work [laughing and crying][ Laughing and crying] The protagonist's elf team is mainly composed of rock, ground and steel. This kind of specialization takes care of other settings. It is very interesting to read, especially the initial elf is a big rock snake. Later, there are common and uncommon protagonists in the same type of novels. Finally, there is a legendary and exotic beast, which is very good, and the protagonist elf can conquer it. There are a lot of them, but they all have a lot of appearances, which is good👍🏻Although there is a single female protagonist, the heroine does not slow down the pace of the protagonist, and there is not much love space, and the heroine is Sirona, which is very good [smile][smile] The writing is just beginning, both the plot and the character are a bit childish It's young, but it doesn't have much impact with the original work as the background, especially as it gets better and better later on. The plot and characters, including the supporting roles, are pretty good. The plot occasionally feels a bit slow and routine, but after reading the ending at this time, it's not a problem, and even some daily routines can adjust the reading rhythm. The author of the novel wrote that the championship felt like it was over, and that Alola was more like a side story later on. It felt like it was a pity that the battle with Sakaki that had been prepared for a long time ended in an open ending. Ash just mentioned it when he started, and was thinking about the Eight Masters Tournament. It would be better if these can be written as a side story. By the way, I also really like this timeline. A few years before Xiaozhi set out, he started in the Fengyuan region. Later, he also dabbled in other regions. It's good. I'm starting to look forward to the author's second insect novel starting with Hezhong [Like] [Like]

The protagonist's reality and ideals infected me and made me passionate. It also made me fall in love with this book even more. I hope the author can update it faster. I hope the author can continue to work hard and break through his limits in the future.

Very good novels, in which ordinary elves or quasi-gods break through their own limits and reach the level of mythical beasts, and the protagonists do not have those mythical beasts or phantom beasts so far. To be honest, I really hate writing about Pokémon that have these. If there are cheats or systems, don't write about having mythical beasts. Anyway, I prefer this kind of thing

Very beautiful. I finished reading it, and I read it again. Alas, the more I look at it, the better it looks. If only this book had always had pictures. I think he will always be on my bookshelf and the plot is very good. Come on, author, it's great. 💪

The pace is tight, the content is colorful and the character is distinctive. This is a good book, recommended.

It's very good-looking. The way you interact with Pokémon in daily life adventures is quite comfortable to watch. It can also be very passionate when fighting. Anyway, I got goosebumps when I watched it. Finally, I saw this 281. I really don't want the author to let Benjilas surpass the big steel snake very quickly. It shouldn't be possible [I'm about to cry]