Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Setting up a Stall and Telling Fortunes

It's very beautiful, with a few minor flaws, but it's really good. I've also written novels and couldn't finish writing after a while. No matter how good the author's writing skills are, I hope the writing will come out like a spring. I'll give you more recommendations. I'm afraid you'll miss this book. It's just a bit cliche at the end. If you don't help the girl, you have to steal the bride. What will happen to the father and the feng shui pattern of their family? I hope the author can sort it out by himself. Then I hope there will be no heroine. Thank you. There can be a lover who is an acquaintance. Then the author thinks about how the protagonist faces the Shenlongwei. The Shenlongwei represents the country. I think we can think about it. After all, it is a city and it is based on the background of our own family. You can write it like that, in parallel time and space, and then you can think about it after remembering that you are not your "mother" after all, and you can probably get over it. By making the protagonist a little more sad, I don't see anything wrong with the protagonist anyway, but now villain stories are popular. Many previous protagonist models such as snatching brides, miracle doctors coming down from the mountain, using other people's goals to instruct others to heal, but the protagonist is asking for a gift of chalcedony, although the tone is a bit harsh, I think there is nothing wrong with it.

Great, I wish there were more books of this type

A rare unsystematic article, and the concept is also very interesting

It's really good. It broke the bottleneck of the system. It's a pity that there is no follow-up.

Looks good but a bit short!

Not bad, not bad, although a bit toxic, but still watchable