Invincible: Blind the Old Foreign Man at the Beginning

To the author: Authors who are new to writing should work hard. To the readers: Please be gentle with your words and support new authors more, otherwise we will have no new books to read and be less violent online. Content evaluation: I have only read 3 chapters. The evaluation may be distorted, but I only comment on my feelings in the first 3 chapters. They are cold and cold, and the plot is not attractive enough. What do you want to write and express?

The writing is not strong enough to support so many lines of narrative, which makes people read this and that. The key is that the supporting characters only appear in a few chapters [awkward laughter]

It feels so messy

Rush, rush, rush