Stay Alive, Ellie

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The writing is good and the story is very sweet. I am also writing a book but the world view is a little bigger than yours. I got stuck after writing the first one. After all, this is my first time writing and I can't always grasp the relationship between the characters' perspectives. [Working on draft][Please update]

Come on, let those heroes come to life

Honkai Impact 3 is a story about growth, companionship and beauty, and most importantly, it is a positive, healthy and sunny story. The first time I encountered this story, it was still a very lighthearted and humorous heartwarming comedy... The other thing is that the author's knife skills are a bit poor, and he needs to practice more. Also, if the author has time, he can go and see Firefly's knife skills [awkward laugh]

Overall, one word: awesome*, the only shortcoming is that the protagonist's fight with them may be to promote the development of the plot, which may make it a bit hasty. I can suggest modifying it to make it more satisfactory. To borrow a sentence from Mr. Sekiya: This is a long ~~~~ shot [smirk] [snicker] [snicker] [snicker]

Cuckoo? It seems it's time to make soup for the author! (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

Although it's so short that I haven't understood what the plot is, it doesn't stop me from loving Ellie.

Come on, it's not easy to find a book about Alicia

Wuwuwu, my Ellie, she is finally alive. Wuwuwu

|･ω･｀) I really can't do anything to you, but it's still pretty good

I read through the comment section and found that they were basically all five-stars. There was only one three-star that was later changed to five-star. Why did the rating drop so much [face-covering][face-covering]

It's pretty good-looking, I don't know what others think, but I like it anyway

The author, this book is very good. Keep up the good work and update. Don't stop updating. If you stop, Jiangnan Old Thief will be the last one. Come on, this book is very good.

Hey, be good, give you a five-star praise (pampering)

I heard that five stars doesn't count, so I'll give it four stars [like][like]

The author has not updated for three days [almost crying] [almost crying]

The author writes very well. Come on.

The idea is very good, but I may not know how to write it later, and I pushed it too fast. In fact, if I write the previous part in detail, it would also be good to talk about the joint cooperation between Tianwai and Railway. But the idea is great.

It would be better if the author could use the time he spends reading other novels to write the book

The 3.5-Meter immortal listened to the call and presented the five stars.

Except for the last few chapters of The Riddler, which are a bit confusing, the plot is okay.

Very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard

A great novel, at least Ellie survived

Honkai fanfic worthy of 5 stars, a must read

Be optimistic about your author. This is the only good book I have read in Beng San.

Big cheers for the author! [Sinister smile]

Looks good, come on

It's beautiful, but there are so few people nowadays [laughing and crying]

It's just for this Ellie.

Not much to say, just watch it