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This is a book that I like very much. The content may not be called a masterpiece, but it is less poisonous. I also like the subject matter very much. Personally, I feel that it is my favorite among the hundreds of books I have read (The Sword Heroine will be changed to one star directly) [Chigua]

A very good book, very sweet. Let's talk about the shortcomings: The worldview structure is incomplete and the details are obviously not full. The world view is similar to that of Zhanshen, but it is obviously not as good as the details of the battle, the imagination of the setting, or the level of burning. Basically it is all supported by emotional lines. It is recommended to add settings. You can adjust the word count so that we don't have to look at it and not understand it sometimes. As for the fighting scenes, I'd better write more! Or you can write more about showing affection on the battlefield. Or, just risk your life and issue a knife and that's it. Advantages: The author's emotional drama is really good, and his grasp of people's emotions is very accurate, much better than Sanjiu's ignorant single. She is a very cute and lovely heroine, and it is okay to use a knife in her hair appropriately. Also, urge for updates.

To be honest, the outline of this book is good. I feel that the best part is the encounter with Xiaohanhan at the beginning. It would be better if there is a side story, a daily story to sweeten me. The previous part has already made me a god. The subject matter is not out of the ordinary, but it stands out from the crowd. Qiuyue looks a lot like Eri, which has always been a pity, but it's really good to put Eri into it.

It's great!!! I support it, I've already started to follow up on it. Although the novel does have a bit of a knife edge, it's really nice and sweet. I like the silly look of the heroine the most. Although the novel is fantasy, I prefer it to be more daily. It's best if the plot is less knife-edge, so that it won't be too overwhelming.

It looks good. I hope the author will update it more and not let down the party and the people.

You must keep writing and read it well [blowing kiss]

There is a single heroine. The heroine Shangshan Qiuyue is very similar to Shangshan Eriyi in Dragon Clan. It can be read as a sweet book similar to Eriyi. However, this book also has many knives and rich emotional lines. Although the ending is a bit rushed, it is still quite good overall. It is highly recommended to read.

It's not brainless, the plot is relaxed and moderate, and there are some laughs interspersed in the text from time to time, which made me feel... Relaxed while reading it! ! !

The author is a very patriotic person. The characters in the book are very good and unique. The female protagonist is very cute and the male protagonist is also very powerful. The writing is quite good, but from time to time he would stab me with a knife and make me want to vomit blood. Overall, it is not bad. I have read hundreds of chapters and it is not bad. I will continue reading. (This book has a female protagonist. The male protagonist is not romantic or a philanderer. He only loves the female protagonist. She is relatively sweet. The battles are very graphic. Highly recommended)

The highlight of this article is that Tongba (of course I don't think it is a highlight) has a good body, but it feels like daily small things account for a bit too much, and it feels a bit slow-paced. Maybe it's because when I read other novels, I feel like I'm just fighting and killing all the time. Also, I think the relationship between Su Yu and Su Ze is a bit strange, I can't put it into words. There is also a bit of an unexpected attitude toward his father. Well, the heroine is quite silly, which I didn't expect. Although she is indeed cute and interesting, it would be pointless if she continued to be silly. (This is just my own feeling. The author can write whatever he wants in the future. After all, I really like this article.) Really, I rarely read this slowly. After all, I like to skip chapters. It's really painful to wait in the end. The author should do your best, don't give up on the article, and it's best not to stop updating. Come on, work hard, I think this article will take a long time to read to its fullest.

It's a very nice book, and there is no knife at all. Readers, please rest assured. I was so confused after reading The Lost City of Beasts before. I wanted to find a sweet book about supernatural powers to read. When I saw this book, it was so sweet that it made me die. The only drawback is that the author has not updated it [crying] Also, I saw other comments saying how the book is not good. Everyone has their own tastes and they don't have to read it. Why should the author write according to your thoughts?

This is a book that I like very much. I can mainly see my own shadow. The protagonist may not be the strongest, but he does his best to protect his country and his lover. Perhaps, you can consider using the heroine's small tragedy to improve the strength of the male protagonist. However, after writing this book, I independently think that the strength of the male protagonist has improved very slowly. Obviously you have thanked Gunyan and there is one above. By the end of the article, your combat power has collapsed. Please pay more attention next time. To my dear author, reader Chen Qian

It's really good-looking. It's sweet yet sweet, yet not boring. The plot is tightly connected, and the protagonist always gives people a sense of tension in the trial of life and death. It made my blood boil. The writing is beautiful, and the vivid image of the characters can be deeply rooted in people's hearts in just a few words. The author updates quickly and it's a pleasure to read (cross out)

The plot is good, the story line is complete, I like Xiaohanhan and the others very much, and there are also less knife points. The moment when Meng Kui committed suicide in order to let Wei Jin, the father who raised him, return home, and the last picture and the text under the picture really made me almost cry (இдஇ; ). You 🍅 all like to make me cry I looked at the bookshelf and saw the word "break" written in the upper right corner of his two books. I was wondering if this guy ran away? Until I accidentally discovered that this guy actually opened another book

It's really good [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] but too little, a short Peking Opera cat [please taste it carefully]

It's okay. I thought the focus was on emotions at first, but I didn't expect that it created a relatively large world view. If I hadn't watched Zhan Shen, I would definitely give it five stars. One thing to say, it's really not good to compare, but after all, it is mainly about emotional drama. It's very good to be able to write it like this. If it can be written better later, I will change it to five stars immediately (and the author, please don't stop updating!)

It's very good, but it's a bit sparse, and the plot is not that boring. However, I will change the review as it develops later. It's still a very good work. The content of the article is a bit short. After all, more articles will attract readers. No one wants to see the interest suddenly disappear. Keep up the good work [shy]

It's quite good to watch. To be honest, my motivation to watch it is the heroine. Hahahaha. The heroine is silly and cute. The disadvantage is that there are too many plots. I personally don't like too many plots outside the main plot (because I lack patience and I tend to get anxious when watching it). Also, the male protagonist and the female protagonist have not been together for long. The male protagonist has been performing various tasks (a broken male protagonist, literally). The female protagonist is very worried every time. I am also afraid of knives. I am the only person who doesn't like to watch plots where the male and female protagonists are tired of watching each other. Here, I don't like to watch the plots where the male and female protagonists perform various tasks. I am crazy about watching the plots where the male and female protagonists get along with each other hahahaha Also, I was a little concerned about the plot of Xiaomi Porridge living in the home of the male and female protagonist (even though she was very pitiful, I still felt awkward watching it) In short, I like the plots of both male and female protagonists. Shen Qingsheng deserves to be without a partner before hahahaha The book is still worth reading By the way, I didn't watch the ending. I'm afraid of knives. Hahaha. If anyone has watched it, can you tell me about the plot (if you don't use knives)

Now, there is nothing wrong with the writing. If the fighting power is not too high, the emotional line is not messy, and the follow-up storyline is good, then this book will be a hit. I have been wondering whether the relationship between the male and female protagonists progressed too quickly, and there was not enough foreshadowing, and the time they spent together did not last long.

I personally like girls who are cute and innocent, so I also like the heroine in the novel. I also like the character of the male protagonist. Moreover, he is handsome, and his talent and appearance make him feel very comfortable when standing next to the heroine. Overall, I enjoyed this book

The author of this book has a very good character portrayal of the male and female protagonists. He has changed some of the characters in Dragon Clan. This heroine reminds me of Eli Yi. He changed the cowardly Lu Mingfei into the brave and determined Su Ze. It is very good. It is also an alternative. One of our dreams in Dragon Clan is fulfilled.

The plots are all good! There are lilies, cute girls, girls and more! Just fall in love! 😍😍

There is nothing wrong with the writing and plot rhythm, but the author may have overlooked one thing: the foreshadowing should not be too low, which will form a different kind of poisonous point. However, the author himself also realizes this, and the negative reviews are basically for this reason. It is a very good book.

Yes, it ranks among the top three sweet pet stories I've read in Tomato. I hope it doesn't collapse in the future. Come on!

There are many problems with the description of combat in this book. The author himself knows this and sincerely apologizes to book friends. After all, the author is forced by life. Five stars are given to daily life. Although there are still some problems, I have enough sugar.

Let me tell you, this book, when I first read it, I remember it was around 8:00, but now it has reached over 9:00, so I think this book is recognized by everyone. First of all, this score is really speechless. I personally think this score is particularly suitable for this book, because in my opinion, I think the score of this book should be higher, 9.5 9.6. Yeah, yeah, it has something to do with the government. Yeah, it's quite good. Indeed, even if I read this book again after a few months, I still think this book is a rare masterpiece. Listen to me. If you are short of books and like to read passionate content, just collect it and repost it. Where did Qiuyue pick up this shirt? Or tell me the address. I carried the plane all night. I would be so jealous if I went to pick one up.

It's good to read, but it's too short. Is there any book with similar themes to this book? Please recommend it [Top post][Top post][Top post] It would be better if the heroine's character is similar. Please don't hide it. Thank you to all the book friends.

It's a very good little sweet article. It doesn't have any poisonous points at the moment. It's just too few and it's not enough to read [grievance] [grievance]

The writing is very good. After reading so many books, the characters and plot of this one are still good.

The first time I watched Lily was on a male channel, I really didn't expect that [facepalm], but the characters of the male and female protagonists are pretty good, so I don't know if the plot behind it is okay or not [laughs]