精灵：开局钢之幻兽美录坦

This is the most satisfying book I have read. Other books are too poisonous. It is clear that the opponent should feel like a strong enemy, but it has to be written like a villain without killing the protagonist. It shouldn't be so difficult that everyone targets the protagonist, but it shouldn't be too simple either. There is a balance in between. I hope the author sticks to it and I support it.

Five-star reviews are paid in one lump sum! The author's article is different from other Pokémon articles in Tomato. It is not the kind of article that focuses on darkness. It does not treat Pokémon as tools, but truly treats Pokémon as partners instead of livestock for making money. (Isn't it true that some people regard the Pokémon world as a dark genre? Do such authors really like Pokémon?) (One star) This novel describes the relationship between the mythical beast and the protagonist very well - they help each other, not like the protagonists of some novels who just throw a ball at them to conquer them. The protagonist met Darkrai, Shemi, Giratina and other gods/phantom beasts in the early stage, and did not provoke them self-righteously. (One star) The author controls the plot very well, and can connect the plot very smoothly. The process of conquering each Pokémon is very reasonable. Whether it is daily life in school or training, he can well write the life of the protagonist and Pokémon. (One star) Regarding universities, this book does not go to Qingbei or Shanghai University like mainstream novels, but chooses universities in the province. In most novels, the protagonist's level has already reached a very high level by this time. This book fully conforms to the characteristics of a slow-burn novel - strong but not too strong. In the plot, even Melumeta is deflated at times after evolving. So, those who say this is the brainless dragon Aotian can climb up (one star) Ye Yuhuang is awesome! (One star)() How long does Kangkang read?

The story is well written with clear logic But one thing I don't quite agree with is that the speed of Meltan's evolution is too slow, or it can be said that the evolution process from Meltan to Melmet should be skipped appropriately.

The author's writing is quite good, but he is a little handicapped. He only updates a little bit in a day, which is not enough to read.

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is well-organized and not brainless. I've been following this book since there were no reviews. I'm a little proud when I see the ratings are so high now [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I suddenly discovered the slow-burning articles about Pokémon, which are so good\(//∇//)\The only bad thing is that the author is as short and weak as his Big Rock Snake [smile][smile][smile]

Don't poke or poke, the subject matter is quite new, the elves are relatively rare except for the Koga Ninja Frog.

The advantages are very outstanding. The author is very good at writing about daily life and interactions with elves and people. After all, the biggest highlight of Pokémon novels is the bond with elves. Moreover, the overall balance of combat power is very good, and the system function is not outstanding. It relies more on the protagonist himself, not a brainless novel. But the shortcomings are also very prominent. It pays too much attention to daily life and the main plot advances very, very slowly. The narrative of the light and dark dual-line book is very good, but the climax points are neither very exciting nor very few; and the biggest pleasure of the Pokémon novel is the evolution through the bond. The bond is there, but the excitement brought by the evolution is ignored emmm? Moreover, the protagonist seems to be a bit petty. He obviously knows a lot and is aware of the conspiracy, but neither seeks help nor uses his brain. He just lets the accident happen naturally and then solves it after the accident. This way of advancing the story is not only deliberate but also uncomfortable. Although it is not a brainless novel, many details cannot withstand scrutiny; some secrets cannot be exposed easily, but you cannot say nothing? This is also cool! Some secrets should obviously be told to a few specific people, but they are just hidden. The pace is already slow, and the secrets are hidden, which makes it even more unpleasant to read. Moreover, the update to the latest part cannot be guaranteed, and the number of words is even smaller. The people who follow the update are even more unhappy, and naturally fewer people will read it. The author's income cannot be guaranteed, and then there is no motivation to update, and it falls into a vicious circle. But the author's daily interactions are indeed very well written! I just need to speed up the pace, otherwise I'm really afraid that the eunuch will be unfinished! Come on [please ask for more explosive updates][please seek more explosive updates]

A very good and rare Pokémon novel. It is systematic but balanced. It not only has battles, but also has a lot of life details to enrich the novel. It is not boring. Pokémon characters and characters are very distinct. Good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Five stars for you~~ I feel that this is the most ideal PM article I have seen on Tomato. The golden finger is very reasonable and not too disgusting like superimposed characteristics. I hope to stick to myself and write with warmth, but I feel that the character of Frost Milk Fairy is not as full as the first two. I hope to conquer some elves except quasi-gods, mythical beasts, Lucario, etc., But I feel that they are all badly written [awkward laughter], I hope it will be of great help to the author [blowing kiss]

This is the first time I have seen such a harmonious article about Pokémon and human life. The description is meticulous and the logic is online. I feel like I have seen this different world with my own eyes. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Like]

This book is really good to read. I especially like Pokémon-related fanfics. So far, this book seems to have a lot of foreshadowing, and the description of the relationship between Pokémon and people is also very warm. Although, the update is too slow, at least 200 updates a day. Chapter Okay (just kidding hhh) My personal favorite Pokémon is Mariuli. The battle between the "Dragon Slayer Warriors" is also written in the article. The description of the battle is very exciting. The Hercules attribute + Thunder Punch is really cool when beating the Crocodile! ! Come on, author! !

The author came here to sign for your five-star review. I feel that the author is very good but the protagonist's aura is too ruthless. I have a MEGA key in the early stage.

This is the first story I have read about Melumeta - Melumeta. The setting is clear from the beginning. There is not too much wordiness and it is not very objectionable. The characters are very distinct and each character is quite interesting, such as the protagonist Yufu who occasionally escapes and Yuba who picks up his own characteristics. , The intelligence expert Xia Gouzi, the fire-breathing dragon man who looks cold but is actually a devil on the inside, the straight man Brother Ye who insists on letting the protagonist meet his parents, as well as stone maniacs, veterans, Jackrabbits, Pork Planes, Sister Yun, Old Longlongyan, Iron Thorns... Too many Of course, what really attracts us is each of Yufu's interesting Pokémon with different personalities and their daily interactions with the protagonist. The talkative and familiar Meilu Meta, the self-disciplined Frog who can evolve into a double bond, the Guaiguai Baoshuang Fairy Milk who is good at making desserts, the simple purple lollipop who is a roadie, and the unknown Yu Jieyin who also likes to call the protagonist his benefactor Sui Fengqiu (author OK) and the little diamond who has lived for a long time but still has a child's mentality (maybe he will become Dianxi) and the Suo Cailing who is aimlessly holding ancient coins and wandering with the wind (now he is the financial management of Youfu, and he may become Dianxi in the future) Sai Fuhao), confused and unknown, with explosive combat power, seemingly emotionless, but often showing funny expressions, Marshado, simple-minded, doing all kinds of things, insisting on building a Pokémon army, establishing a connection with Yufu, and now with Bodang Hoopa is friendly and playful with water (Hoopa seems to know Mewtwo), the silly fire crocodile who is good at singing and currently serves as a mascot and hand warmer, and Fiona, who can't find a home and lives in the school lake, is not very strong and has a very arrogant personality (don't spray water on me) It's useless no matter how much you say, just go and see it yourself.

First of all, I think the overall writing is very good, but it is too everyday. Those who particularly like daily life should be able to keep reading. Maybe it's because I've read too many novels, as if I'm always expecting a dramatic explosion of plot power in the silence, or maybe it's just that this point is still far behind, but in this case it's hard to keep reading. What is worthy of recognition is that there are very few poisonous points in the novel. At least in the chapters I read, there is only one poisonous point that I personally think, which is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Xiaozhi's foreshadowing appeared too early, which was slightly uncomfortable. I personally think that every good chapter is to increase readers' expectations for the article. When stacking the anti-toxicity, before there is a plot that is not confirmed to be a poisonous point, I hope that if it is a poisonous point, do the readers have enough anti-toxic buffs? Of course, in the eyes of people who do not think it is a poisonous point, it may be a flashpoint. The above are some of my small feelings. Overall, the article is very good and has avoided too many pitfalls. Come on, old man.

Looking at it now, it can be said that this is a very good Pokémon fanfic. It doesn't have too many cheats or flaws. I just don't know if there is a love line. I personally hope there won't be a love line. Anyway, good luck to the author.

I've caught up to the latest chapter, and it's the best Pokémon article I've ever read so far! Like it very much! ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥ The first bonus point: Although the protagonist has some tricks, he is not against the sky. He mainly relies on his own strength. This is a big plus! It really appeals to people like me who don't like the all-out invincible style very much! The second bonus point: the plot is gentle but does not drag on, it is fast when it should be, slow when it should be, it is detailed and detailed, and it is extremely comfortable to watch! You won't feel uncomfortable because the plot develops too fast, nor will you feel bored because the plot develops too slowly. You really can't stop following it. There are fresh and happy daily routines, exciting confrontations between good and evil, and exciting battles. The arrangements are very reasonable! The third bonus point: This book is really well written and detailed about the friendship and bond between Xiaoyou and Pokémon! Let me mention Koga Ninja here, the interaction with Yufu is really cute and heartwarming! The character of each Pokémon is well portrayed and feels very real. Compared with some articles that only write one or two sentences about daily life, it is really good! There are others that I can't remember right now, but I really, really love this book. It's number one among all the Pokémon books I've read. Finally - thank you to the author for your hard work! Love you! [Love] Please keep updating! I will keep chasing until the end! ♡(*´∀｀*)

Very good😄, although there is a system, it looks really good

It's very nice to watch. The protagonist climbs up step by step. There won't be a very powerful Pokémon at the beginning. Moreover, the system settings are very good. There are small activities for each festival. The mission rewards are not too powerful, giving the protagonist room to grow. Each Pokémon in the protagonist has a unique personality, and the descriptions are great without being rigid.

Although it is a bit poisonous, it is not fatal! Overall, it's very good, five stars [send heartfelt]

The best article I've seen recently

A very interesting, slow-burning, everyday fanfic The current system is not very useful. It mostly promotes some small stories. There is not much exciting writing rhythm. It is a very slow-burning writing. The cultivation time is very long and there are not many battles. It is suitable for calming down and enjoying the slow Pokémon life (although I think this may be more suitable for the original world view). It depends on the author's future direction.

The content of this book is relatively ordinary, with few features. However, the author's writing style is very good. It looks extremely comfortable and the progress is not slow. The progress seems slow because other books are too fast. I can only write 500 chapters at most. This book can definitely be more.

Wonderful, hard to find book. I hope the protagonist can conquer the Aluminum Steel Dragon in the future. Its battle with the Alchemy Dragon is so exciting. After becoming Gigantamax, it is as tall as a skyscraper. Its strength is also in the first echelon under Quasi-God, so it will not ruin the plot. I hope the author can consider it I recommend Aluminum Steel Dragon again. Aluminum Steel Dragon has dual attributes of dragon and steel. It has a simple and honest character, and its heavy metal and perseverance is very interesting. I hope the author can write about this Pokémon in the future.

This is a very good novel with a rich plot. It is different from other Pokémon novels. In other Pokémon novels I have seen, having a system is almost the same as being invincible. But this novel is different. It is not an invincible novel. You can see the protagonist growing up step by step. I hope the author can continue to maintain it and not end it. Also, there are too few updated chapters in this novel. I finished reading it without even finishing it. I ask the author to reflect on it. @ Suifengzhideng

There are too many Pokemon fanfics that do not engage in CP or Gardevoir. The interaction between the male protagonist and Pokémon is very cute... Full of the joy of finding gold out of rocks () The slightly harsh management system and ecosystem are also very interesting and authoritative (?) In short, it's five points + and you're done reading it! First follow-up review: (The following comments contain spoilers of the drama, so don't read if you mind) In terms of the "late period" of the update so far, the proportion of the plot of Ergui is slightly too heavy, and the plot of Little Diamond and Dianxi has been put on hold for two to three hundred chapters without any progress... The atmosphere is much worse than before. It can be seen that the author likes Ergui Pun very much, but the private goods are too obvious! It's really not good for the development of the plot () updates are also very slow now, so be careful if you mind this.

The writing style is quite good, and the overall story is more daily, but the pace feels a bit slow. After all, the lack of evolution always makes people anxious, and the second one has not been released yet.

It feels good, the daily humor is interesting, and the main plot is vaguely visible (probably related to the amnesiac phantom Pokémon). What I am not satisfied with is that although it is not an invincible novel, the protagonist is too rubbish. After all, it is a novel, and it is impossible to always beat it. In the Hundred School League, the school is top 16, and the protagonist is top 13 personally. I feel that the protagonist is an ordinary person, and others are systematic. I hope the author can do better The follow-up is well conceived, and the systematic holiday tasks and so on are a bit abrupt, and then the main plot can be written clearly. After all, it is too repetitive to read it like this. I read more than 600 latest chapters in one go, and my reading interest is quite high. However, I personally think that the evaluation of a book is not only this, but more important is to read chapter by chapter. If you are still interested in reading a little bit every day, then it is a good book. My personal logic is a little confusing, but everything I want to say is written in the comments [smile]

I rarely read books with such a slow pace now, but the author has a good grasp of it. Although the pace is slower, the story is quite rich, not hard water, but this book has a casual and daily feel. The description of the elf battle is not particularly good, and there is no particularly passionate feeling. I have not seen a particularly exciting plot in a large-scale competition like other novels. I feel that it is not a book that mainly describes battles.

The best Pokémon fanfic I've read so far. What makes me most comfortable is that this is the only fanfic I've read that doesn't go too far. To be honest, in other fan fiction, it may seem cool to be number one in the world before graduating from college, but it is too collapsed for the overall strength system of the novel world. Therefore, generally this kind of author will speed up the plot rhythm to cover up the facts after the strength system collapses. This fanfic is one of the few in Pokémon where the protagonist is not Dragon Aotian and the plot setting is not dark. Although watching Pokémon only happened when I was a child, those who still insist on liking it when they grow up are those who have their own persistence. What I like is the bond between Pokémon and humans living together and taking care of each other. The real world is cruel enough, and I don't want to add some discomfort to myself by reading novels. I would give this article 5 stars if I put it in a fanfic. But after all, grading is a relatively rigorous matter. If I give this article 5 stars, I think it will be difficult to grade other non-Pokémon fan novels in Tomato. For this reason, I finally decided to give it 4 stars. The 0.2 Stars are deducted because the overall plot is a bit bland. There are hundreds of chapters, but the number of Pokémon battles between the protagonists and the same level is relatively small. The remaining 0.8 Stars are for fear of the author being proud.