Genshin Impact: The Wonderful Adventures of Pokemon

At least 2 and at most 3. But this is the first time I wrote this and it was very good. I gave it a 4. My writing skills are at least up to the passing mark. To sum up the shortcomings, the details, content, and image of the characters and Pokémon are insufficient and too much is skipped; in addition, in other Genshin Pokémon novels, even if some writers have poor writing, their seven gods at least correspond to first-level gods. In your case, the power of the general Raijin Kage, who represents the entire Inazuma Rai, can't even defeat the Super Flame Chicken. I can't figure out what the author is doing? It's best to add something later. For example, Lei Qingqing's state is very similar to Barbatos, and his strength is half-deficient. Otherwise, if a loyal fan of Genshin Impact (especially Lei Qingqing's) sees it, he will be scolded if he can't help it.

This book is very good, good luck to the author

Correct, pertinent, objective, rational, appropriate, suitable evaluation

Well, it's very interesting. The novel I wrote is actually based on yours, or I wanted to write it after reading your novel. You wrote about Rice Wife, and I wrote about traveling with Sora in the Seven Kingdoms. In it, I added stone tablets and ultimate beasts. In summary, it is not as good as yours. After all, not many people read it.

The writing is good, do you want more female protagonists? The relationship between the protagonist and Ayaka is obvious, but the relationship with Xiaomiya is also very subtle.

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The writing is pretty good, it would be great if it could be updated, come on! 👍👍👍👍👍