Warning, warning, the writing style is very average. Please adjust your heart before reading. Also, please treat this novel with the same mentality as reading a primary school student's composition. Slap lightly, or don't spray.
But even if you spray it, it won't be of any use. I listen to the DJ version of the Great Compassion Mantra, hehe.
If you can accept it, then keep reading.
I try my best to write based on the characters in Genshin Impact that I know, even though I don't have a deep understanding of them at all.
What to say about the rhythm? I don't have a precise positioning for this novel. It's up to you what you think.
Reader comments
This book is very good, good luck to the author
Well, it's very interesting. The novel I wrote is actually based on yours, or I wanted to write it after reading your novel. You wrote about Rice Wife, and I wrote about traveling with Sora in the Seven Kingdoms. In it, I added stone tablets and ultimate beasts. In summary, it is not as good as yours. After all, not many people read it.
The writing is good, do you want more female protagonists? The relationship between the protagonist and Ayaka is obvious, but the relationship with Xiaomiya is also very subtle.
The writing is pretty good, it would be great if it could be updated, come on! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
This book is very good, good luck to the author
Well, it's very interesting. The novel I wrote is actually based on yours, or I wanted to write it after reading your novel. You wrote about Rice Wife, and I wrote about traveling with Sora in the Seven Kingdoms. In it, I added stone tablets and ultimate beasts. In summary, it is not as good as yours. After all, not many people read it.
The writing is good, do you want more female protagonists? The relationship between the protagonist and Ayaka is obvious, but the relationship with Xiaomiya is also very subtle.
The writing is pretty good, it would be great if it could be updated, come on! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]