On What Impact Does Having a Strong Imagination Have on the Golden Light Curse?

This book is still mainly written by the author himself. There may be many contents that are not in line with everyone's feelings. If you have anything, you can point it out and we will try our best to correct it in the future! ! ! ! After all, 9.3 Is the recommended day. In addition, I hope you can recommend some ideas suitable for golden light spells. I will refer to them in the article! ! The author would like to thank everyone here! !

When will you return to being under one person?

Luffy wants to be the Pirate King, and the protagonist wants to be the Nanny King. I understand everything, but I can't stand it anyway.

Support the new author. It seems that this book has no flaws so far, but the update speed is a bit slow [face covering]. In addition, the combat power system should not collapse after returning to the one-person world. Come on, as long as you keep writing, you will definitely succeed [Like]

It's not enough, author. It's hard to justify it if you don't update it. [Please update] [Understood]

When I met Chen Qi, I felt like a different person.

When I saw Chapter 11 and agreed to fight Zhuge Qing without asking anything, I couldn't watch it anymore. What I see is that the protagonist keeps saying that he hates trouble, but he never solves it, and instead causes trouble in various ways. I know you can't write without getting into trouble, but you have to deal with it. Merely provoking it and not solving it is so disgusting.

It's a bit weird for a Taoist priest to appear in the world of pirates. In the early days, it was fine to appear in a world like Jiu Shu Liaozhai.

One point deducted for the emotional drama. One point is deducted from the protagonist's character. One point is deducted for the protagonist's stance. If I don't know how to write emotional scenes, why don't I just like you just by looking at you? Is he yours? It's your thing. Inexplicable possessiveness and desire for expression, Shanxiu Jing's two lifetime experiences have all been fed to the dog? You are the first person I see using Spring and Autumn brushwork to write emotional scenes. Didn't you learn anything from Wen and Kong, the masters above Zhuge Qing? The meaning of the pirate chapter is unclear. What is the nature of pirates? You have the nerve to say that you are from Longhu Mountain without taking action. There is no point in the self-exposure link. After all, different power systems are different. If you write Lao Tianshi, you can see that it is better to brush Lao Tianshi's B grid and have smooth transitions than self-explosion. You just chose the one with the worst look and feel.

It's faster, not brainless, and doesn't have any big poisonous points (it can be explained by telling Master Tian that he traveled through time, and he needs help from Master Tian to upgrade the world). Why did the score drop by 0.2 In two days?

The pinnacle of one-person fan fiction (so far), it is innovative, not brainless, funny, and sincere. I think this book is really good. Anyway, I haven't found any one-person fan fiction that can compare with it. Just crush it. Come on, author [Like][Like][Like] The front is okay, but forget about the back, MD, it's a waste

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Should I watch One Piece or Under One Person?

Great book! No giant poison, no noob! At present, this book has some minor flaws. It's not that many readers don't like having a female protagonist, it's that many authors can't write well or handle the relationship with the female protagonist, but the author arranged a female protagonist! But let's arrange it according to schedule! You can't rank a heroine who has some weight. If she doesn't, you can't rank her with more appearance rate! You have introduced the heroine in one or two chapters like this. Do you think it might be better not to do this? As for saying that I am a time traveler, I personally feel that it is too early, even if it is to help myself, I don't agree with it! If I were to become the protagonist, I would have to travel through at least a few more worlds to give myself the capital to be completely crushed before I can tell you. Who do you think the Heavenly Master is? Do you understand the principle that people become more sophisticated as they grow older, and that people's hearts are separated from each other by their belly? Not to mention the secret of time travellers, even the skills have to be acquired after traveling through several worlds.

May I ask who the heroine of this book is? Is the heroine in Under One Person Chen Qi? And will the plot between Zhang Lingyu and Xia He still happen? Hope not! I feel like Xia He is good as the heroine! [Praise]

Fun in installments, I don't even know what use One Piece has for the system under one person? After waiting for the second world, write it and then add the stars

I originally said it would be five stars, but when I suddenly wrote about One Piece, I immediately threw up. And what's so good about One Piece? Anyway, I can't appreciate the deformed ones who look like this. Yes, even if I think it's normal Naruto, I can still watch it, but I can't stand Pirates.

Telling others that he has traveled through time is his biggest secret. He can tell others easily and confess directly to the country. Let them dissect and slice up pig's feet to study why they traveled through time. After all, pig's feet want to benefit the people.

I skipped One Piece and watched it because I hated the protagonist recruiting random apprentices. To be precise, I hated the protagonist teaching martial arts to the pirate world. I didn't like One Piece. (PS: I read the first few chapters of One Piece and felt that I couldn't accept it, so don't ask me how I knew it without reading it.)

This article about Pirates is longer than the one about Under One Person

It can be said that this is the best fan fiction I have read in so many years, and the update speed is not slow. It is absolutely praised. I strongly recommend that you go to the prison of delicious food in the next world, just to eat for no other reason [laughs]

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, and held it tightly in my hand. Inside, I walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. Gradually, it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was heavy. It might be both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just a few more chapters of TM. Who do you look down on? It was originally 5 stars, but I just can't stand this monkey.

[Laughing evilly] Come on💪, hurry up, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

This book is okay. Later, I returned to one person, and those who quit because they didn't like it in the Pirate World can still come back and have a look! ! That's how I am, I quit when I saw the protagonist in One Piece World, but I still couldn't forget it and came back to look at the catalog, and it turned out to be back! !

Very well written. I hope there won't be any Naruto plot later.

Judging from the writing style, it should be a good book, but I have never read Under One Person, One Piece, or Emperor's Armor... In short, what the author wrote has elements that I don't have. "I can't understand it, but I think it should be a good book."

If you want to write about summer, you can't just write about summer. You have to write about the girls who wrote furiously when they saw "Where is the way out for Li Chao and others" in the examination room? You have to write about the raised bachelor's hats and the red and swollen mosquito bags on the island, about the ripe red bayberry in the continuous rain, about the small tomatoes in the high temperature once in fifty years, about the unknown, about separation, about encounter, about the warmth and grandeur.

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It was very comforting to watch. I read the book reviews and I don't understand why I am so worried about the self-revealed time traveler. I think it is very sad to hide a secret in your heart and not tell anyone. This proves that this person has no one who can be trusted in this world. Such a person will be very tired to live. Everyone is an isolated island standing in the sea, communication is the bridge between islands, and trust is the cornerstone of the bridge. The stronger a person is, the deeper he will sink into the ocean, until he falls into the abyss. At that time, you will wonder what the meaning of other people's existence is, and friends are just the people who can hold you. Human emotions are a major feature that distinguishes humans and gods. It's my humble opinion, and I hope I can share it with you all.

I have to say that the world under one person is indeed very suitable as a novice village for quick travel. First of all, it is not much different from modern society. Secondly, the extraordinary power has not reached a level that is too high to be seen. The most important thing is that there is a safe way to contact the extraordinary power.