How Does a Wild Imagination Affect the Golden Light Mantra?

This book is still mainly written by the author himself. There may be many contents that are not in line with everyone's feelings. If you have anything, you can point it out and we will try our best to correct it in the future! ! ! ! After all, 9.3 Is the recommended day. In addition, I hope you can recommend some ideas suitable for golden light spells. I will refer to them in the article! ! The author would like to thank everyone here! !

When will you return to being under one person?

Luffy wants to be the Pirate King, and the protagonist wants to be the Nanny King. I understand everything, but I can't stand it anyway.

Support the new author. It seems that this book has no flaws so far, but the update speed is a bit slow [face covering]. In addition, the combat power system should not collapse after returning to the one-person world. Come on, as long as you keep writing, you will definitely succeed [Like]

It's not enough, author. It's hard to justify it if you don't update it. [Please update] [Understood]

When I met Chen Qi, I felt like a different person.

When I saw Chapter 11 and agreed to fight Zhuge Qing without asking anything, I couldn't watch it anymore. What I see is that the protagonist keeps saying that he hates trouble, but he never solves it, and instead causes trouble in various ways. I know you can't write without getting into trouble, but you have to deal with it. Merely provoking it and not solving it is so disgusting.

It's a bit weird for a Taoist priest to appear in the world of pirates. In the early days, it was fine to appear in a world like Jiu Shu Liaozhai.

One point deducted for the emotional drama. One point is deducted from the protagonist's character. One point is deducted for the protagonist's stance. If I don't know how to write emotional scenes, why don't I just like you just by looking at you? Is he yours? It's your thing. Inexplicable possessiveness and desire for expression, Shanxiu Jing's two lifetime experiences have all been fed to the dog? You are the first person I see using Spring and Autumn brushwork to write emotional scenes. Didn't you learn anything from Wen and Kong, the masters above Zhuge Qing? The meaning of the pirate chapter is unclear. What is the nature of pirates? You have the nerve to say that you are from Longhu Mountain without taking action. There is no point in the self-exposure link. After all, different power systems are different. If you write Lao Tianshi, you can see that it is better to brush Lao Tianshi's B grid and have smooth transitions than self-explosion. You just chose the one with the worst look and feel.

The pinnacle of one-person fan fiction (so far), it is innovative, not brainless, funny, and sincere. I think this book is really good. Anyway, I haven't found any one-person fan fiction that can compare with it. Just crush it. Come on, author [Like][Like][Like] The front is okay, but forget about the back, MD, it's a waste