After Getting Rich, You Work Hard to Become Ruined.

Many friends have complained about the first-person problem. I want to say the reason is that it is my first time to write, and I bring in my own feelings. I write about seeing and encountering things from the perspective of the protagonist. Some people may not be comfortable with it. I tried my best to change some places, but most of them are still written from the perspective of the protagonist. Thank you for your feedback and I am reading it carefully. Thank you [laughs]

Not bad, but the first person could be removed

The plot is a bit rushed. When the author has time, he can refine the first chapter of the article and strengthen the logic. Come on [love] [love] [love]

It looks good, but I feel like there are so few comments.

Why is it that no one reads such a beautiful book? Please read more [crying]

Very nice! Hahaha, cheers for the author, I have always dreamed of living like this [love][love][love]