Tomb Robbery: the Mistress Is in Danger, the Support Team Is Dispatched!

This is the highest level of Tomb Raiders fan fiction I have read so far. Both the grasp of the characters and the description of the details are very close to the original! Moreover, it also has its own new features on the old equipment. The writing is very smooth, the content is novel and interesting, and non-toxic. The most important thing is that it has achieved CP freedom. You can do whatever you want, it is absolutely brilliant! Unlike The Evil Spirit Next Door, a Knife is also well written, but it has one of the biggest poisonous points (the Ghost Blowing Lamp Iron Triangle was incorporated and then forcibly dismantled, so that Lao Hu and Fatty turned against each other and Hu Bayi was written to death!) Other fans like to randomly combine some dream girl-style CPs, either the protagonist and the younger brother, or the protagonist and anyone from the original protagonist team to forcefully engage in CP and produce industrial saccharin, which leads to unstable plot lines and easy to go wrong! So this book is definitely a conscience masterpiece! Everyone must come and see it! (๑> <๑)

It looks good. I was put off by the introduction. After watching it, I thought it looked good. I didn't lick Wu Xie as much as I thought. Everyone stands out. Sister Lou is so handsome and handsome, and she and Heixiazi are together for a CP [making faces] My favorite among tomb robbers is the Black Blind Man When can I confirm the other party? [Sending Hearts]

It looks good and I like it very much. Speaking of which, Hei Ye and Lou Ye are co-stars. The author's writing is good and connotative. I feel that the two of them should be a couple. I feel that the two of them will be very affectionate together.

I have actually read a lot of pirated novels, but this one written by the author is really unique. It has no OOC, no broken characters, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. I highly recommend, highly recommend, highly recommend!!!*^O^* (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Very nice! First person is a minority in Tomato, and the author writes well. The plot moves quickly, without being muddled, and there are almost no typos... However, what needs to be strengthened is the characters themselves, which are not delicate enough and the characters are not too prominent. Finally, I confess my love to my baby Lou, the long-haired beauty that I love so much [blowing kiss]

Sister Lou who loves white peach flavor [laughs] But at the same time, I am very happy to do CP. I have to say that Taoist priest's writing style is really good. Some of the descriptions are so detailed that it scared me [face covering]. But I can only say that Taozhang's writing is so good＼(^▽^)／! The logic is also very clear and the knowledge is very broad. Sometimes I even wonder if I am here to learn. All in all, it's not a loss at all to get into the trap, and the character creation is also very good. In short, I love it very much [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]

I haven't seen such a great book for a long time. This book is the only three best books about pen theft that I have seen on Tomato. The article is told in the first person, which makes it very engaging and easy to empathize with. The characters are very delicately drawn and there is no OOC. The plot of the story is ups and downs, logically rigorous, novel and interesting, and not unconventional. The relationship between the characters is very touching. Although the article has a protagonist, it is a group portrait, and each person has his or her own characteristics. Really great, highly recommended! ! !

Highly recommended, it's very good-looking. The protagonist's martial arts and IQ are both good. He's not as good as the younger brother in martial arts, but he's better than Mr. Hua'er. His IQ is on par with Mr. Hua'er and Wu Xie. He's rich and handsome. (I didn't conflict with Mr. Hua'er's character, and I didn't compete for Mr. Hua'er's role. They both have money, but the protagonist is not the sponsor. The sponsor is still Mr. Hua'er. The protagonist is Wu Xie and Mr. Hua'er's brother, although he is not his biological brother)

The writing is very good, and the characters' logical thinking is very clear. In my opinion, the original characters have not collapsed so far. I've read a lot of tomb robbing fanfics. Either the characters are OOC or the protagonist has a scary aura. Or the plot is dull and lacks logic. Some plots basically follow the plot of the third uncle, without any new ideas. Although there are also changes to the plot, there is no logic at all. Although they all say that you don't need to use your brain when reading novels, common sense can be ignored. I was drunk too.

It's great. It's the only one in Tomato that I've seen that isn't OOC. It has the atmosphere of people making jokes. [Crying] [Crying] I love it so much. Some fandoms written by fat people are unflattering and naive and OOC. I really love it when I see it written well. This is such a good book. Wen Huang will come back and read it again [laughs]

Very nice! The logic in the article is very rigorous, the description of the main characters is not broken, and it is still very readable to this day! The protagonist, Lou Sui, is very cute and has a funny personality. He is also a little grudgeful. Because of his upbringing, it is difficult to trust anyone. He is lonely in his heart and longs for a partner who can take care of his back. He is clear-headed and capable! Great support from the author and I look forward to the follow-up development!

I feel that this is the best Tomb Raider book I have written since I came to Tomato. The personalities of each character are very consistent with the original work, the characters are very vivid, and the various settings are very logical, as if it is a real world. It's my luck to meet this person. It's just that I wasn't very good at getting the name, I almost missed it [I almost cried] I thought about it again, whether I got the name or not, it is very eye-catching and makes people want to find out. Although it will give people a feeling of being written very vaguely, once you get in, you won't leave. This is a virtuous circle [shy][shy]

Although it is in the first person, the author's writing is very good, and the characters are not ruined by the original plot at all. The feeling of Fatty was written out, unlike some authors who made Fatty particularly annoying. The character design of the protagonist is also pretty good, but the sense of immersion is not as strong as the visual sense. But this doesn't matter, the writing style is light and makes me feel very calm.

I like the characters written by the author in large letters. Each one has his or her own characteristics. It is not like in some novels where fat people are written as useless (which is really hard to see). Moreover, the author writes really well in large letters and handles the relationships between the characters very well! ! !

I really love this book. It is definitely the ceiling type among the fanfictions I have read. I really love Lou Jie. The extra chapter has solved a lot of regrets, including the difficult feelings of the year. Everyone is so vivid and Aoao Lou Jie YYDS!

Ahhhh! ! ! She's really good and pretty, and I love Sister Lou so much (CP with the blind man [laughing])

This is the first time I read an article narrated from a first-person perspective, and it is very novel [I understand]. Taoist priest's writing style is very good, and I hope to continue to work hard. Personally, I feel that Sister Lou is a person who is both rough and elegant, and a little bit silly. She has a good martial arts value, but she is also naive. She is Xiaohua and Xiuxiu's brother, although they are not close. Sister Lou is very vindictive. She was bitten by Wu Xie when she was a child. When she grew up, she would bite her back. She was even scared of dogs [covering her face]. After reading the extra, I want to say that Sister Lou was a real tiger when she was a child! [Laughing and crying] I forgot to mention that our sister Lou has her own fragrance. The smell of white peach makes me suspect that the white peach has become a spirit [laughing and crying]

The story is complete, the protagonist has no golden fingers, and all his abilities are developed through hard work. The plot is compact, and it involves several large tombs, and the connections are strong, so it won't be confusing. Sister Lou and the protagonists in "Pirates' Bi" have a harmonious daily relationship with each other, and they have a tacit understanding of each other. The relationship between brothers develops naturally, and everyone except Fatty has a sense of CP! The first person can have more psychological activities, and less description of facial expressions will be more like Xu Lei's style of writing notes on tomb robbers. I really like that the protagonist gradually discovers the mystery of his life experience while helping Wu Xie to remove the medicine, which makes the protagonist's character gradually fuller, especially the meeting and farewell with Zhang Yunhui at the bronze door of the Xianshan Underground Palace. The whole plot has climaxes, and instantly made me feel that Sister Lou is a real person. This character is no longer flat, he is presented to me with flesh and blood. This is the best fanfic I've ever read! I hope the author can write better novels! Come on

It's really well written, and the main character perfectly meets my criteria for choosing a spouse. Come and take a look at my brain (shy)

The plot is interesting and the logic is reasonable. The writing style is also very attractive. The original characters also fit my own settings. It has that flavor that makes people want to keep watching it, and the more they watch it, the more they want to watch it! The disadvantage is that there are too few updates. Come on, create! Author!

Like it very much! ! It smells bad! The characters are not O0C and I am looking forward to the meeting between the protagonist and Wu Xie. I hope the author can work hard, work hard, and update every day! ! ! Recommended! ! !

A very good book. To be honest, after reading Notes on Tomb Robbers for so many years, the fanfic actually gave me the same goosebumps as when I read Notes on Tomb Robbers. I could only lie in bed and recite the rules. You can't touch me once I'm in bed. But I was still addicted and watched it for most of the night. I read in the comments that the author said that some people said it didn't look good. Boss, don't read it. It's a bad comment. Reading the comments, it seems that the author seems to have run away, and the other fan articles have not been updated. I hope the author can see it, the writing is really good. The rest is madness God, what the teacher wrote was so cool! ! ! This is a tornado destroying a parking lot! This is the antelope pedal! It's the goat jump! Crows fly! The mouse is wandering! Elephant kicks! Angry octopus! Giant ax chops down big trees! Totally crazy! Totally crazy! Totally crazy! Totally crazy! I finished reading it, it was great.

Excellent tomb robbing article! The logic of the whole text is self-explanatory and does not ruin the character. Sister Lou's character experience is also very charming. There is no golden finger, but only the personal ability learned from learning! Love it so far!

Super pretty! Especially the stone one and the real and fake Liu Sang. I watched it in the middle of the night. I didn't dare to close my eyes. As soon as I closed my eyes, I saw this scene, but it was really scary and beautiful. It's just that the update is too slow. I want to keep it for a while, but I can't help it. I'm so confused😳 Although I haven't chased him for several days, he is really scary😱. But I couldn't help but come back to make my mark and keep chasing! [Send heart][Send heart] I really praise Sister Lou every time I see the real and fake Liu Sang. The author is so good at it, awesome*.

Believe me, I didn't have any high hopes at first because the first person was a bit strange. Then I read a few more chapters in succession and jumped right into it, finishing it in two days. She is really super, super and good-looking. I really like Sister Lou, and I get along very well with Heixiazizi. It would be nice if the article was longer, it's not enough to read [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

There is no time travel in this fanfic, Bai Yueguang, it's just random additions to the original plot. Everyone's characters in the book are very well created. I can't bear to leave Sister Lou after it's finished. The storyline is compact and coherent, and the writing style is the same as the original article. The sense of first-person immersion is really strong. No character is superfluous and has its own role. This article is all about one person. No matter how smart he is, he will trick many people, but one day he will capsize.

I really love it. This is the first book on Tomato that I didn't abandon after reading it halfway through. The plot is compact and logically connected. It neither destroys the setting of the original work nor has too many deified fan protagonists. Many of the new characters created are flesh-and-blood. It can be said that many places accurately hit some of my points. The language is rigorous and humorous, so that people will not feel too nervous or relaxed when reading the text. The emotional line is very thin, and the plot will not develop due to romance. Moreover, the image of Sister Lou really poked my XP hard. I really love it. I may be a bit of a sentimental person. This morning I found that I felt sad for a while when I finished reading it. I was still thinking about how I finished reading it so quickly. When I closed the book, I felt very reluctant to leave it. If possible, could you write a little extra? Please. The last sentence is great [I learned it]

After reading the story, I feel a little disappointed. I really like Sister Lou. The title of this book is something I would never click on, but someone who recommended it said the title was awkward but the content was very good, so I came here with the intention of giving it a try. I have to say, the person who recommended the book is really right! What a book title! Hey! Before I clicked in, I read the comments. Everyone was talking about Sister Lou, Sister Lou. I had a preconception that the protagonist was a very sassy sister. Until the black blind man appeared and confused me, it turned out that the protagonist was a boy. The author uses the first person to create this story, which is very close to the original work. The relationship between the original protagonist and the stolen character is very harmonious. The original copy is also refreshing. It stands out among the current stolen novels that are all about golden fingers, systems, spaces, and complete scripts. Although the protagonist is very strong, he has been trained since childhood. The relationship line is very, very, very obscure, but I can feel that their relationship is natural and gradual, and will not make people feel abrupt. I really like this kind of relationship, which is completely different from the industrial saccharine outside! This review is a mess, but I really like Sister Lou. Sister Lou is so charming! ! Finally, thank you to the author for bringing such a story! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

I just read a little bit, emmmm, how should I put it, I feel like what the author wrote in big letters is not a novel (no bad intentions, the subject matter feels very novel), it is very much like a narrative prose, which reminds me of someone Lu inexplicably, heh, that's probably it. I am writing a book review, so I gave it five stars. I will write again after reading it. After reading it, I will learn from it all, absolutely! Two words, recommended! Three words, Gaga is a good frog, come and take a look, I can't see you getting hurt, you can't see being fooled, and the author is very approachable and amiable... Bah, in short, the writing is good, people are still alive, who doesn't love such a book, and who doesn't like such an author, rush rush~

I'm going to comment after reading the first part. Sister Lou is handsome and domineering, beautiful and smart at the same time, good at skills, very flexible, and a long-haired beauty, great! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Although it is in the first person, the writing is very natural and the writing is smooth. The image of Sister Lou is roughly understood. The original character setting occasionally makes me feel that it is not too upright and leads to a light OOC (personally, I feel that it may be because I have not watched enough. I feel this is a slight feeling after watching the first part. Personally, there is no malice, a strong desire to survive, and a dog head to save life) [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] All in all, looking at it so far, this book can be considered a very good book on Tomato, Bi Xinloujie [shy][shy][shy]