联盟：变身病弱少女，我无敌了

I've never played League, I only know a little bit, so I'll try to understand it. But Lily Control, who likes e-sports, is really ecstatic, the kind of person who can laugh out loud in his dreams As long as you update together, I will read it every day There should be more emotional scenes, a little more, you can use a little knife (eyeing Hanbao's illness), but don't go too far (it's really painful if you go too far) Overall, I still like it very much.

[Chigua] From the perspective of the female protagonist, from the current point of view, she is either single or lily, and the setting is also good. His book seems to be quite comfortable, because he will not talk about too many frustrations, or he is a bit too happy. The opponent should be described from his battle process, rather than just talking about the opponent. Only by describing the strength of the opponent through some operations can you feel that this battle is a duel between strong men, rather than just describing it in one stroke and feeling nothing. Just relying on those few descriptions, it is very boring to say that the opponent is very strong [eat melon], and even if there is, some of them are quite few [eat melon] There are some fighting scenes and the like, so I feel excited. That's because they are evenly matched, and a strong showdown is interesting. Instead of watching some torture, just push it all the way and simply lead it through. Although everyone knows that they will win, the process is very important [eat melon]. A showdown between two fools is not interesting at all. This book is comfortable to read, and life must have some parts, but this kind of book prefers to see the process of the game, plus this kind of e-sports league, girls, there are a lot of such contents written in the book, so I want to see her shine more Although this book doesn't have any big highlights, it is comfortable to read, and it is quite good-looking anyway. The content is quite interesting, and it is still highly recommended. So far, she has not said that she has any entanglements or hatred with anyone in life. Part of it is between life and her best friends, then part of it is in the competition, and part of it is in the team. So far, she has not said that it involves a lot of problems in life. Some e-sports novels are about life content that is longer than e-sports content [Chigua] Life involves a lot of problems. Some of them are well written although they have no flaws, but I want to watch the game more. Finally [covering face] Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh! ! ! ! (˵¯͒¯͒˵)Come on As for the duration, I'd better add it. Although I don't know how long I watched it, sometimes I either didn't log in to the account, or I watched it on another phone.

Dear author, come on, don't forget to update, I love this book so much, I give you five stars, don't forget to update! ! !

The author's writing is great. Please update it as soon as possible. It's not enough to read. (It's important to emphasize that you don't want to get married, even if you stay single, it's fine)

Very beautiful (looks like I don't even want to sleep)

From 12 o'clock to 2:30, there is no need to question the quality of this book! The author is definitely a LOL master, but he is not at the level of a silver bottom player like me. Nice! I keep chasing it because I hope the emotional line will be pushed forward. Although it is exciting to keep watching the game, if the emotional line is pushed forward, I feel that the characters will be fuller. (Not because I want to see posts) The following scenes are outrageous. Even though I'm not good at it, I think the script can't be surrounded by 5 professional guys without using any control skills. Isn't this really embarrassing? Also, is there no plot at all? They are all LOL games. Which platform should I go to to watch the games? I have to watch the text version on Tomato? Forget me, let's add some emotional lines, it's all a competition, one after another is really boring. Why don't you let the girl take two days off to talk about love?

Very good, this is my favorite of all the e-sports articles I have read. I have watched it no less than 5 times. I really like Hanbao who is determined not to give up on his dream even when facing pain and suffering. Be brave and pursue your dreams. And it's my favorite double heroine Tie Tie. However, the emotional scenes in this article are well controlled and there are not many. But it's also all sweet. The heroine is also an ordinary person. Even if she has a golden finger that is unlocked by the system, most of it is used to eliminate the negative state of the body and use it for competition. Even if she is in physical pain, she has to work hard to hone her skills just to enter the professional arena. I really admire Hanbao's professional e-sports dream-chasing spirit. Unlike some other e-sports articles, which are just ordinary people killing and playing games randomly. Didn't put in much effort. This is why I like this book so much.

I think we can make the heroine a little more miserable, like the kind where she faints and gets hurt from time to time and refuses to tell outsiders, and when Xixi knows that Houju is distressed [blowing kiss] [sneaky laugh]

Although I don't play League, it doesn't affect me at all to feel the charm of the female protagonist fighting. She's so handsome [Adore][Adore]. I really hope that every time I play King, a boss will lead me away, instead of hurting my teammates every time I can't win [Facepalm]

The writing is great. If you keep this quality, it can definitely be rated 9.6. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Regarding alliance works, yours is the only one I have found so far that has the patience to read it bit by bit. After reading your previous comments, my advice is, it is well written and don't give up. As far as my personal feeling is concerned, rather than pursuing speed, it is better to ensure quality and to write well with care is the value of a book. In addition, persistence is a must-win. It would be a pity to stop updating such a good book. If there are too many trivial matters in life, it is okay to update slowly, bit by bit, and at a certain frequency, just be careful. There are not many things that a person can do in his life. It is good to stick to the next thing that is not boring. There are all kinds of wonders in the world. Some people will say you are good, and some people will say you are bad. If you are affected by this, it would be a pity to give up in vain. Persevering in yourself is a good medicine. Finally, cheers to the author, looking forward to the completion of this book and the subsequent plot.

The "personal" subject matter feels quite new, and it is pointed at tomatoes. The author's writing style is also good, and the plot... Is also quite good. The only shortcoming is. . . . . . . . . Updates are too slow! ! ......˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚

Come on, it's well written. If you don't have an affair with a man, I will keep chasing him. Writing has been so boring lately

It's very beautiful [sending my heart] [sending my heart], the author remembers to have a good rest. I'm not very demanding, just 10 chapters a day [shy]

It's really good to read. Compared with the author's previous LPL Demon Queen, this book is really mature and perfect. I believe the author can write this book better. I hope there won't be eunuchs [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Well, in general, the author's writing is pretty good, but can there be less real-life lol jokes? I can't understand it at all as a non-league player [crying][crying][crying]

It's really good. Tomato's e-sports article is really good. Now I'm back to update it. I'm really happy to see the update.

It's very beautiful, but it's too short [crying] If it doesn't change, I'll get into trouble [crazy] [crazy]

I finished it after watching it for a while, which was not very enjoyable. The beginning is a bit slow but quite satisfactory, and then the pace picks up, which is pretty good.

It's been three years [face covering] I don't know what to say. I graduated from high school. I watched it in the first year of high school... It's really good, but the update is really outrageous. Let's take a holiday once a month. I took four holidays. When I got home, I found that the update was still interrupted... It was the last holiday before the college entrance examination. I found that it was updated and I was about to win the championship... It was really the same as the college entrance examination. I felt like it was about to end. I felt empty and a little uncomfortable. This is one of my favorite e-sports articles. Even if I haven't read it for a long time, it is still charming. When I saw that there was a sequel, I felt really complicated, but most of all I was happy because the story wasn't over yet, just like my life didn't end after I finished the college entrance examination. So, it doesn't matter if it's a little slower, I just want to see Han Bao's story, and I want to see the best ending.

The writing is really good. Both the psychological description of each character and the details of the game are all in place. Unlike some other e-sports novels, which can't make people get involved at all. This book is really the first lol novel that I have read on Tomato for a long time that suits my heart. And as a girl who plays lol, it is really enjoyable to see the heroine killing everyone in the professional league! Highly recommended! !

It's still very good, the details are in place, and the girl is very pretty. It's just that I wrote too many chapters that have nothing to do with the competition in the early stage. It won't affect me if I skip a few chapters, so I hope the author can appropriately reduce these chapters.

[Adore][Adore] Love it, love it [Adoration] [Shy], I really like the author's writing style, and the story is novel and the plot is fascinating. After reading it, I have endless aftertaste. I like it so much, and the author updates it every day, wow wow wow! ! Rush, rush, rush

The author, please come on and update, don't be a eunuch~ [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It looks good, the author's writing is very good, and the detailed description of the line making is so satisfying to me.

It's really good-looking and saved a book-hungry party! ! ! ! !

Even though I have never played League of Legends, I was deeply touched. The battle scenes and plot settings are all very well written. [Adoration][Adoration] Love to death [admiration] [admiration]

Boys are generally not so reserved. Try to make the protagonist's character more generous and cheerful. The early interactions with your girlfriends are real and the psychological activities are not so awkward. The real psychology of boys should be a little shy with a little joy, but not so repulsive. For example, taking a bath or something, they won't care about these issues so much. The most they feel is no big deal, just a little shyness and a little guilt with a little expectation.

Reality, it seems more real than just winning and losing a few games [laughing], but there are some things that you must not lose, such as this latest fight with WE [punch], if you lose, you may not need to write this book [angry]

It's a good book, but action players who have never played MOBA games really can't understand it, so let's stop here [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] It's also very interesting to watch the plot without reading the commentary [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] [Like]