Fox Spirit Matchmaker: Sorry, I Really Am the Mastermind

The protagonist becomes a stallion when he has the power, forgetting who saved him when he was about to die.

If you correct the typos and incorrect sentences that don't make sense, there will be a lot of room for improvement. The subject matter is not new, and some characters may have some disadvantages in terms of interoperability and popularity, but overall it is okay. It's a bit different from the previous one. The one about Darkened Naruto is very comfortable to read.

First of all, the two Tushan sisters saved themselves and ran away because of the little Taoist priest Scar, and were not sold to the fairy world at all. Secondly, you wrote Cuiyu Xiaotan before Jin Renfeng deceived her. What was the timeline like during this period? You don't know what you are writing blindly? If it's just for your own entertainment, don't post it, just watch it for yourself✍

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It's not bad! You just have to be smart when writing about love. . .

Very nice, madam. Is there a female protagonist? Mrs. Although there are some flaws, it is generally better to avoid emotional scenes or female protagonists in behind-the-scenes stories. After all, the protagonist also has secrets.

The shortcomings are that there are many typos and bad sentences, and the most important thing, why is the cover mosaic? There are still many issues that need to be changed, such as the female protagonist. It is really unnecessary to have a female protagonist behind the scenes. Before, the male protagonist had money, but because of the female protagonist, he had to go out to set up stalls to sell things and buy raw materials and this and that. The money became less and he became tired. Tianxianyuan feels very abrupt. I saved the Tushan sisters and ignored the other demons. I won't write about them. If I were the protagonist, I would save those demons and let the dolls spread in the demon world. The author can completely pave the way for more things here. There is also the issue of the timeline. Fan, fan, I don't care, but the time when the ghost appears can be designed to have a longer timeline. Huan Du Qingtian is thousands of years old, so it is easy to identify. There are also the third young masters of Aolai Kingdom. There are too many flaws. I just saw it here, and I may continue to talk about it later.

There is a problem with the plot timeline, and maybe the author has never watched Fox Demon

The plot is not bad. There are ghosts at the beginning, and then there is my favorite Xiaohei. There are really not many like this. But there are a lot of typos in every chapter. What about "probably", "of course", "unless", these words are used in every chapter, and they even appear repeatedly in the same chapter! I just want to ask if there is no other adjective 🤦, the logic is a bit confusing (I think), and the timeline is also confusing. At the beginning, I kept repeating the protagonist's abilities too much, but in my opinion, it is the only way for the protagonist to strengthen his power. Every protagonist will do this. Let's say that everyone knows that the protagonist controls the puppet, and then tell the protagonist what he does every time he controls the puppet. Hey, at this time, I will say that it is all under the control of the protagonist~, and then write in excessive detail about the protagonist's small action and what wonderful things it has, and then the whole chapter turns into talking about the protagonist's deep meaning behind his action without leaving any plot at all! It feels very arrogant and weird to keep repeating and highlighting the protagonist too much. 🤦

Aren't you talking about the mastermind behind the scenes? Why does the protagonist let Doll Wuhan be afraid of him? There are so many people. Don't you just want to pretend? 🥺 There are a lot of typos. Let's not talk about this. Can you delete the ones that were pasted incorrectly? Those strength divisions, what are S, A, and B levels? I feel like they are all done according to your ideas. But the protagonist has not had an affair with many people. I guess that is the case, except for the leech demon at the beginning.