In S5, we were instantly brilliant and shed tears in the top eight.
S6, we set off at the end of the road, carrying the lost past and challenging the old king.
We are YM, the young miracle of this generation.
(Although there will be a system, most of the time it is just fishing and it will not disrupt the balance of the game too much.)
Reader comments
The emotional scenes between Gu Li and Yu Shuang are always written in one stroke. You can write more. You can also write a little more life stories. There are too many competitions. I feel that your pace is too fast. I am afraid that you will collapse in the later period. You can relax a little.
My little opinion.
As an author, it's not too much to give yourself a five-star review. [Laughing evilly]
After browsing around the comment area, I briefly replied to some questions. Readers who did not respond due to time constraints, please understand. [Shy]
Then there are some setting details, which will be answered here:
First of all, because I am a newcomer, the writing may be a little sloppy in the early stage, but I will try my best to change it in the future. However, I definitely opened this book with the intention of making up for my regrets. After all, e-sports writing is really not popular in Tomato. You will know it just by looking at the third young master next door. [Laughing evilly]
The second is Gu Li, the protagonist of this book. His positioning is actually the strongest spear and shield. He can bravely break through formations and kill enemies, and he can also become the "old father" of his teammates who protect him. This is my only positioning for him. (In addition, because someone in the LCK is also called sky, I changed the protagonist's ID to skY.)
Finally, regarding the system issue, I originally didn't want to hang up the system. However, it is really difficult to maintain the status and progress of professional players, so I added a pendant to rationalize some things. Just treat it as a cat hanging in your bottom lane ranking and don't care about it.
Finally, I certify as someone who has been involved in the game Luahlu since S3. Can you guess whether I can be a eunuch? [Cool]
It's very interesting, but I feel that because the system doesn't tell him how to save his mother, it seems like he has lost his character. Yes, I feel like sometimes I can write about my life dynamics, otherwise I feel like it's too fast. I hope to give Yu Shuang a chance.
This is a very good League of Legends novel in Tomato. Although it has minor flaws, the flaws are not outweighed. I don't know why the score suddenly dropped to 7. It was 9 before. Was it reported? (I heard that Tomato is not allowed to write League of Legends fan fiction?)
It's really good. The only bad thing is why it is forced to arrange an unclear family. Even if it is arranged to be a normal family, it will not be the case. Many people were persuaded to quit in the early stage. But other aspects are still very good. It can be called a cool article just like IG back then.
In fact, I think it's better than many LOL novels
The protagonist's family is plagued by illness, his mother, and a younger sister
Compared with e-sports articles, this book is pretty good, but there is one story where the details are not very good. However, regardless of the details, it is still quite enjoyable to read. The main reason is that the priority is pretty good, and some unimportant games are simply skipped. The description from the pig's foot C at the beginning to the group collaboration at the end is very good, and overall it is good.
Is the cost of this system helping people the protagonist's mother?
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Is the author really not afraid of caring about God? [Sneaky laugh]
It looks okay, but the plot with Yu Shuang is a bit unclear.
The writing is good, why is the rating so low? If you have fantasized about YM Ultimate Body, you can check it out, it is really good.
Very well written, keep up the good work
Commemorating the IG that can't go back
The author writes well
Pretty good, come on
Okay, pretty good
Well written, I like it
It looks pretty good so far
Not bad, come on, author! !
It's just that the system's presence is very low.
It's ok, come on, author
Very good details
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Did the author stop writing?
?
Did the author run away?
Why is it only rated seven points if it is well written? Please increase the rating.
Am I the only one who found this book to be very similar to "What is a roaming mid laner"?
The emotional scenes between Gu Li and Yu Shuang are always written in one stroke. You can write more. You can also write a little more life stories. There are too many competitions. I feel that your pace is too fast. I am afraid that you will collapse in the later period. You can relax a little. My little opinion.
As an author, it's not too much to give yourself a five-star review. [Laughing evilly] After browsing around the comment area, I briefly replied to some questions. Readers who did not respond due to time constraints, please understand. [Shy] Then there are some setting details, which will be answered here: First of all, because I am a newcomer, the writing may be a little sloppy in the early stage, but I will try my best to change it in the future. However, I definitely opened this book with the intention of making up for my regrets. After all, e-sports writing is really not popular in Tomato. You will know it just by looking at the third young master next door. [Laughing evilly] The second is Gu Li, the protagonist of this book. His positioning is actually the strongest spear and shield. He can bravely break through formations and kill enemies, and he can also become the "old father" of his teammates who protect him. This is my only positioning for him. (In addition, because someone in the LCK is also called sky, I changed the protagonist's ID to skY.) Finally, regarding the system issue, I originally didn't want to hang up the system. However, it is really difficult to maintain the status and progress of professional players, so I added a pendant to rationalize some things. Just treat it as a cat hanging in your bottom lane ranking and don't care about it. Finally, I certify as someone who has been involved in the game Luahlu since S3. Can you guess whether I can be a eunuch? [Cool]
It's very interesting, but I feel that because the system doesn't tell him how to save his mother, it seems like he has lost his character. Yes, I feel like sometimes I can write about my life dynamics, otherwise I feel like it's too fast. I hope to give Yu Shuang a chance.
This is a very good League of Legends novel in Tomato. Although it has minor flaws, the flaws are not outweighed. I don't know why the score suddenly dropped to 7. It was 9 before. Was it reported? (I heard that Tomato is not allowed to write League of Legends fan fiction?)
It's really good. The only bad thing is why it is forced to arrange an unclear family. Even if it is arranged to be a normal family, it will not be the case. Many people were persuaded to quit in the early stage. But other aspects are still very good. It can be called a cool article just like IG back then.
In fact, I think it's better than many LOL novels
The protagonist's family is plagued by illness, his mother, and a younger sister
Compared with e-sports articles, this book is pretty good, but there is one story where the details are not very good. However, regardless of the details, it is still quite enjoyable to read. The main reason is that the priority is pretty good, and some unimportant games are simply skipped. The description from the pig's foot C at the beginning to the group collaboration at the end is very good, and overall it is good.
Is the cost of this system helping people the protagonist's mother?
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Is the author really not afraid of caring about God? [Sneaky laugh]
It looks okay, but the plot with Yu Shuang is a bit unclear.
The writing is good, why is the rating so low? If you have fantasized about YM Ultimate Body, you can check it out, it is really good.
Very well written, keep up the good work
Commemorating the IG that can't go back
The author writes well
Pretty good, come on
Okay, pretty good
Well written, I like it
It looks pretty good so far
Not bad, come on, author! !
It's just that the system's presence is very low.
It's ok, come on, author
Very good details
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Did the author stop writing? ?
Did the author run away?
Why is it only rated seven points if it is well written? Please increase the rating.
Am I the only one who found this book to be very similar to "What is a roaming mid laner"?
It's just a five-star review