One Tripod, One Tree, One World

How can I put it, after reading books for many years, I have very high requirements for some details and writing style. I feel that the author of this book has just started writing books, or is still young. Many things written seem very immature, but when I read them, I am very inspired. Just like when I watched The Condor, there were no gorgeous words, only simple dialogues, and everything seemed so simple and plain. To say that he has returned to his original nature is really flattering, because he is still young. He has a pure heart, does not follow the crowd, and takes one step at a time, but it is just right. I am commenting with joy. I am not concerned about whether I can finish the book. I am just leaving some thoughts on the chapters I have read so far. By the way, I have just read Chapter 27. I am not commenting on this book to increase my sense of existence or to score points for this book. I just have some thoughts. Cheers to the author.

The plot of this writing is reasonable, the character settings do not violate basic human nature, nor are they divisive, personal knowledge and cognition, and the text dialogue settings are consistent with their age and knowledge structure. The description of the world of cultivating immortals is relatively reasonable. It's not like the protagonist in a certain book who is set to exchange various items in his storage bag, fearing that someone else's store won't be able to eat them. As a result, a lot of items are only exchanged for 200 spiritual stones. [Laughing] Most of the text in other books is the author's subjective description. Sometimes the pig's feet are deeply affectionate, and sometimes they are ungrateful...

It is well written, interlocking and fascinating. It is a good casual novel. I hope the author will update it faster.

Very exciting. Very exciting. The rating of 8.1 Is low.

Yes, be brave and resourceful! Know how to advance and retreat, and kill decisively.

As a 20-year-old bookworm who likes novels about mortals, I give this book a five-star rating. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, bookworms who like reading novels about mortals should not miss it.

First-class masters are good at rebuilding their own spiritual home, allowing the soul to present free and conscious spiritual creation at a higher latitude. When consciousness is focused, inner wisdom will flow naturally. The so-called flow is the joy of body and mind that occurs when a person is mentally focused. The wonderful feeling of free flowing consciousness is an advanced creative state of the unity of body and mind. In this state, body and mind are unified, people and environment are unified, and people and things are unified. Entering a state of selflessness, consciousness is full of vitality and shows strong spiritual creativity. The unity of body and mind means turning the spirit inward, while turning the spirit outward is the beginning of self-imprisonment in life.

Five points are to be given. There are really not many novels to read. I've watched more than half of it, and I feel a little anxious. This one is about imitating a mortal's journey to immortality. But it still looks great. I hope the author will be more stable. The encounters continue one after another, and there is no buffering time for us.

Very good look, clear thinking, step by step, one of the models of mortal flow

I really like reading novels about mortals cultivating immortals. Mr. Fuchenzi, your works are pretty good. However, there are many problems. Immortal cultivation is ancient, so it must be written according to the ancient tone and data. The ancient cauldron medicinal herbs are set to mature at a certain time. The protagonist stayed in the demon bat cave for so long. Did he go without food during the Qi training period? If we watch costume TV dramas, there will be people wearing watches to tell the time, people using meters to calculate distance when walking, people using Arabic numerals when writing, and people using popular contemporary slang when speaking. Can you continue watching a drama like this? Coding is not easy, five stars encourage you, I hope you can write good works! I'm curious! When I wrote about the Five Spiritual Roots, I always looked down on the qualifications of the Five Spiritual Roots, saying that it would stop at the Qi training period. As a result, the Five Spiritual Roots were all established, but no one mentioned the qualifications of the Five Spiritual Roots. No one even mentioned it. Could the author clarify this?

Not bad, worth watching, it would be better if it had more female leads.

The plot is good and the characters are vivid. Although the protagonist is selfish, cold-blooded and realistic, he is greedy for money and not lustful. He is calm, daring, courageous and unyielding. He grows from a small person to a powerful hero. It is difficult to describe the bitterness and bitterness of the story, but his heart to become stronger has never changed. The inspirational struggle process that has won praise makes people sigh. This is a very exciting fantasy novel that is worth continuing! One

I have read more than 200 chapters. The protagonist is decisive in killing. Without the Virgin, there is no heroine! I just saw those bad reviews and almost missed such a good novel! The content is very good, five stars! ! ! !

Super beautiful! I have been short of books for a long time. I came across this book and it made me read it eagerly.

This is a brother chapter of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Although the design ideas of many environments and treasures are the same, the plot is different. It is not bad. It is difficult to write thousands of chapters. I can read it when I am short of books.

The writing is very good, the sentences are smooth, no lags, no spoilers, no waste of words, the chapters are smooth, 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

It is not easy for old bookworms to see this, which shows that what the author wrote is still acceptable.

This book is so wonderfully written, I hope the author can write 5,000 chapters! ! ! ! We all enjoyed reading this book so much! ! ! I hope the author can write the fairyland chapter, finish the content of the fairyland chapter, and then complete the book! ! ! ! So wonderfully written! ! ! Please author to write to chapter 7000! ! ! It's best to write the chapter on the divine realm as well! ! ! Write about the world of chaos again! ! ! ! ! ! Author, please update! ! ! The author wrote this book very beautifully! ! !

The writing is delicate and the plots are interlocking! Nice novel!

This book is not bad. I am reading it carefully, and I feel that the author's writing is more careful, and everything in it is more in line with my requirements. Haha, thumbs up to the author, this book is definitely a top-notch work.

This book is good, well-conceived, very beautiful and exciting.

Five stars. Hurry up and update. Don't write messy harem dramas.

It's almost the same as a mortal setting. I'm looking forward to it. I need a five-star rating.

Not bad, I just need to write more of Li Haoran's story line to set off Li Yi...

You can take a look, but of course you can't follow the requirements of ordinary people. Just relax appropriately [laughing]

It conforms to my aesthetic point of view, let's continue to look at it

The score for this book is low. Very exciting and beautiful.

Many of the early plots imitated the legend of mortals cultivating immortality, but later on, they also developed their own style. The male protagonist is not as cunning as Old Demon Han, and he basically relies on external tools to upgrade all the way. The plot is quite compact, and the troublemaker keeps fighting monsters along the way. It is not bad in the mortal stream.

Although it is similar to another book about mortals cultivating immortality, it is still a five-star masterpiece. The author is still very good at catching the reader's psychology and making it fascinating. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and not sloppy. It is very enjoyable. The disadvantage is that they are all child marbles so far. Is it necessary for mortals to cultivate immortality and improve their realm... It is unimaginable. Without emotional plot, it still makes people feel that a dish is missing condiments. Come on! Author.

The logic of the connection between the preceding and following chapters is basically coherent, and the narrative is basically straightforward. You cannot follow up like fast food just for fun. You can refer to Verne, Jin Yong, Contradiction, and Jia Pingwa's writing experience for better improvement.