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This book is quite good, and the plot is also good, but there is one thing that I think needs improvement, that is, the author needs to improve greatly in the description of the male and female protagonists. Every time the adjectives are the same, such as gentle eyebrows, sweet breasts, sticky, and so on, and I feel that when describing the male protagonist's breasts and cuteness, it is not necessarily necessary to use these words to describe the image of the male protagonist. You can also use some language and action descriptions to reflect the image of the male protagonist. (It's not a bad comment, just my opinion)🙏🙏🙏🙏

It's a bit unexpected. I thought it was XAR's fifth consecutive victory, but I didn't expect it to be Yun Guan. It was unexpected and reasonable. It made people suddenly realize that everyone has the halo of the protagonist, so just work hard.

Jue Jue Zi, I like it very much. Please give me more encouragement from the author. I'm looking forward to the ending. Don't let it end badly.

Gaga is beautiful. I hope the two of them can explain it quickly. It's really a pity to miss it. Even if they will be together in the end, I still hope they can be together sooner.

The plot is relatively novel and the writing is very exciting, otherwise it would not stay on the bookshelf of a person like me who likes novelty and hates old things for so long╮(╯＿╰)╭But one thing is that the writing is a bit complicated, as if I want to write about everything, and nothing seems to be written to the point. Also, can you trouble the author to write a title for each chapter? Titles can set the tone of an article, make people full of expectations from the moment they see the title, and enhance the sense of involvement in the article. Moreover, because many chapters are used to foreshadow, sometimes I want to skip it, but because there is no title, I don't dare to jump around, so I almost gave up the article, but the writing is so exciting that I can't bear it. I sincerely hope that the author can change it. I don't mean to curse or force, just an objective evaluation. Come on, look forward to better [salute][please update][admiration][love]

Reunited after a long separation, reunited after a long separation, super beautiful [Adoration][Adoration] I feel sorry for him during those years abroad. Fortunately, he met Shi Rang (the innocent wild king who can be a wolf but a baby), and he fell in love with him to death... I am ashamed that there are some competition parts in the book, and I skipped them.

Very good looking, Shi Rang is totally my ideal type, I want to know the ending of Jiang Chi and Xu Yinan

Like [admiration] The male and female protagonists have distinct personalities, the plot development is organized, and the story is very real. Many plots are very consistent with the real-life fans' feelings of watching KPL. I really like it. "There is no permanent winner in e-sports", so when I saw the latest chapter (Chapter 36) that XAR did not win, it felt very real. Every player and every plot described was really real. Highly recommended!

The writing is very good, I really love it. 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Come on, author⊙∀⊙! I will always support you. ❤❤❤ This book is absolutely amazing! Jue Juezi. I really love it! The fate of Jiang Chi's King ID is simply [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The content is rich and the characters are real. I still feel a little bit reluctant to let go of the characters in the book. If there is such a considerate man like Shi in reality, I will definitely meet him. Otherwise, I am sorry to give you full marks. Then, let me tell the book fans that this book is really beautiful and I really like it. If my studies are not urgent, I will definitely read it a second time. And I am very grateful to everyone who likes this book. Well, I feel like I am just like an author. I don't mean that. Don't misunderstand me. I simply like this book. And if possible, I hope the author can continue to update it. He can write the story of Jiang Chi and Yi Nan, and then write the story of the male and female protagonist's marriage! Okay, that's all for my comments. It's the first time I like a book so much. I will also read the author's other books. Last but not least, the author's writing style is really good.

This article is very passionate. The spirit of e-sports is noble, but e-sports itself is also cruel. But love can be worth a long time. As long as you pay for your dreams and love, work hard, and have no regrets, it is worth it. What I like most is that Shi Rang has really good breasts, is well-educated, and has a good education. He is the cutest male protagonist I have ever seen. He is so sweet, hahahahaha. However, this article is a bit difficult to read for people like me who don't play king games very much. I would rather see the daily interactions between Shi Rang and Xia Yu. Shi Rang should not be too double-standard, hahaha. However, the core value that the author may want to express is the spirit of e-sports, so the length of the article is relatively long, which is understandable. Many of the game scenes in the article are exciting.

Looks good! But I have a small request (can the author write a side story about Jiang Chi and Xu Yinan, I really want to know!!!)

Absolutely, the milky and ferocious Shi Rang, the pure desire Xia An, not bloody but sweet!

It's so sweet, it's a book worthy of being on my bookshelf, it's so good! The article is very in-depth and talks about some issues worth pondering, such as cyber violence. The author has a very upright view and gives many characters different souls, especially the male and female protagonists. Then there may be a bit of sadism in the front, but they are forced to do so. In fact, both people are bidirectional. I like the most "I have always liked you for so long~" and the cute setting of the male protagonist! I'm looking forward to Shirogiri Kuro[shy][shy][shy]

Shi Rang is so good! I really want to squeeze it, who is talking about such a boyfriend? I'm jealous. I don't want Jiang Chi and Xu Yinan to be. They are obviously secretly in love with each other, and they are going to each other. Please give them a good ending, please.

This is my first attempt to write a long review of a novel. First of all, I would like to praise the author's writing style. I think the author must be a knowledgeable person. Compared with the easy-to-understand text, the right amount of literary beauty adds a unique flavor to this novel. I haven't played Honor of Kings for a long time. Whenever I see various characters in the novel, I can always picture the appearance of the hero of the king in my mind. This can be regarded as a different memory point. In my opinion, in fact, every hero who appears can more or less embody the role of the character, making the person who was only in the novel more vivid. The paragraph about Baili Xuance in the last scene also touched me very much. I was excited for a long time, and finally burst into tears. It is said that art is based on reality and is higher than reality, but the author's brushstrokes can integrate the two very well, allowing me to immerse myself in it, and even similar pictures can appear in my mind. I really admire the author's writing style! Thank you again to the author for providing us with such a good novel, and I hope Xia Yu and Shi Rang will stay in their world for a long time! I also wish the author that his novels will become more and more popular! Come on!

I really love Rangshen so much, why is he so cute😏

I haven't finished reading it yet. I like this book with male and female protagonists very much. The male protagonist is nice and soft but cruel and cold in games. The female protagonist is also very strong and sober. She doesn't want to be manipulated by others. They both like each other. I just feel that they have been scolded too much for this trending search on Weibo. The whole world knows about a trending search. It feels too exaggerated. Moreover, the male and female protagonists have been scolded for being on trending searches too many times due to fans' public opinion. Currently, they don't have the will to read anymore🙁 However, readers who like e-sports literature can still recommend this book, especially the character of the male protagonist is relatively novel. Those who like male protagonists who are young and naughty dogs highly recommend this book🧐🌝

It's a very good e-sports article. I don't understand much about e-sports, but I feel that the author is very careful in writing it. The male protagonist is Grandma Du (super tolerable) The female protagonist is the boss, right? (She dotes on the male protagonist, she also considers his fans, and teaches him a lot of things) This novel is really worth it to everyone. I'm quite looking forward to Jiang Chi's ending. I also found his story in a big book that belongs to them, but it seems to be serialized. It has been added to the bookshelf and I can follow it. The big text is very beautiful and can be followed. Everyone must read it [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] Looking back at the couple scene, I still feel shocked and happy. It's such a famous scene.

It's super good-looking and you can try it if you like competitive e-sports. Who wouldn't like a cute boy who loves to kill everyone alone? And who would reject such a big sister? [Cry] Will respect your preferences [Send heartfelt] It's not easy to understand his difficulties [Understood] And very gentle [Salute] Ok [OK] Then let's [Explore] See you in the book next time [Attention] Hahahahaha [Full] [Hold]

It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. The description of the scenery in the article can show the author's skill. The voice broadcast of the heroes can reflect the author's intention. The most worth mentioning is that the names of each character are very nice. It won my heart. The love between Agen and Eucalyptus is really amazing. It is very interesting to read. I hope there will be a sequel, about the wedding night, I understand everything. And Xiao Chi and Yi Nan, their secret love is so humble. Please let them be together in the extra story, please. Chengzi and his little bamboo horse are also very touching. I am going crazy with these three pairs. Keep up the good work, author! ! ! You are awesome~

No boy is eighteen years old forever, but there are always eighteen-year-old boys. You only have one youth, of course you have to live it more passionately than anyone else! This book is an e-sports article, so e-sports is of course an essential part of the content. What stood out to me was the author's profound portrayal of the e-sports profession and the arena. From the professional nature to the public opinion turmoil, the unknown pain and pressure behind the glamor are realistically and brutally written. They are not the invincible gods we imagine, nor are they gods that are out of reach and invincible. They are also ordinary people who will fail, be afraid, be confused, have self-doubt, be hurt, and be sad. Shi Rang and Xia Yu met in the game. Due to Xia Yu's family changes, they were separated for three years. Three years later, it was a reunion, a reconciliation with the past, two people growing up side by side, and walking hand in hand. "With you by my side, I will never be afraid again." Shi Rang is my ideal boyfriend. Regardless of factors such as family affairs, appearance, height and voice, he can still do it. He is careful and gentle, and although he may seem cold, he is actually very insecure inside. He can carefully understand the emotions of those around him and provide comfort and companionship silently. He can cook and has very upright views. He is very protective of his girlfriend and very rational and calm. He has a dream and is willing to work hard for it. He will plan Xia Yu into his future. "It's the reward that comes after all the hardships. We met when we were young and spent the rest of our lives together. It is also something that will never be forgotten, and there will be an echo. On this day, Shi Rang, who was fifteen or sixteen years old, never imagined that one day he would be able to marry the one he loved. At the age of twenty-five, Shi Rang finally found the girl who belonged to him. " Where would such a boy not be a dazzling presence? "Do you regret taking this path? When the road of being a professional player comes to an end and you look back at it, will you feel any regret or regret? Did the once lonely and brave young man finally get what he wanted? Maybe I really regret it. " "No matter what the future holds, there is nothing wrong with seizing the present." In everything, there will be victories and defeats, but no matter which one, you are your own hero.

It is really the best e-sports novel I have ever read. In fact, as a competitive fan, I was initially opposed to this type of novel. I read it with the intention of giving it a try. Moreover, the sister-brother relationship of the milk dog is also the first time I have encountered it. It is really good-looking. I have already been in love for a long time. My family [sends my heart] [sends my heart]. Secondly, Jiang Chi and Xu Yinan really hope to have a book that belongs to them. The author is great! ! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Wuwuwu, it's over. I really can't let go of the obedient captain and the gentle girl. The ending is very happy. Love can last for a long time. The captain really did it. In the second dimension, they will be very happy. They will love each other for life and have cute babies. Goodbye, Agen.

It's so good. Watching Shi Rang and Xia Yu leave and reunite, from falling in love to getting married, I have an indescribable feeling [I'm about to cry]. Has the author considered making a story about Xu Yinan and Jiang Chi? A spin-off is also possible! There are also Qin Cheng and Cheng Yuzheng [eating melon]

It's super good-looking, the male protagonist is very nice, and has a very positive outlook on life. The heroine's character is not very good in the early stage, but is good in the later stage. The author's writing style is very good, and the heroine's friends are very good to her. The only shortcoming is that I haven't seen the follow-up of Jiang Chi and Xu Yinan.

It's very good-looking, a bit sadistic in the middle, but other things are very good. The male protagonist is an innocent puppy [smile] Shirokiri and Hei are so handsome when they protect the female protagonist. The female protagonist loves to tease the male protagonist. It's really sweet [shy][shy][shy]

The writing is really great. I really love the team leader and Eucalyptus. The people in KPL and Cheng Zi are also very good. Forgive me for being illiterate and unable to express it, but I really like this book. For me, this book is really, really good to read, the writing is impeccable, the plot is exciting, and the characters are vividly drawn. Looking forward to Dada's next book, I love you, Dada [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Regarding the love between the male and female protagonists, I believe everyone has seen the author's thoughts. I think the plot is more exciting, and I hope the author can write more good works for us [Like][Like][Like]

It's really good to read. Who knows the time when they were separated? It really made me want to cry. Well, this book is not abusive at all. It's very sweet. The reason why I want to cry is because my body is a bit too weak, and there are game playing processes interspersed in the middle. Since I don't know how to play, I skipped them all. Also, I am worried that he is his brother. I hope his brother is in good health.