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The author's writing is super good and really suits my taste [I learned it] [I learned it]! Please update [I'm about to cry][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Very healthy. I don't know why no one is watching o(*≧▽≦)ツcome's Hello ABC~\(≧▽≦\)

The writing is exquisite and the characters are outstanding. Cheng Shaoshang dares to love and hate, Xiao Yuanyi is stern but secretly has a mother's love. The protagonist Cheng Shaogong embodies the theme of the book - doting on the sister. It satisfies the readers' regrets about the TV series. I hope the author will work harder and make more updates as soon as possible, otherwise I will teach you to "be an adult".

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn and lowered my head deeply. I silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood - Like, heavy, very heavy. Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was heavy. It might be both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. Opening the window, I shouted out the window: Who are you looking down on in just a few chapters? I dare not make random comments, for fear that later someone will use the Qinglong Yanyue Sword to teach me how to comb my hair in the middle, use the Fangtian Painting Halberd to peel apples for me, use the Chuanguo Jade Seal to smash walnuts for me to eat, climb high-voltage wires to play the Dongfeng Po for me, use the Dinghai Shen needle to knit a sweater for me, and then call me Xiu'er. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young girl was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on her lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn and lowered my head deeply. Silently turned off the phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, and took out a bottle of 82 The collector's edition of Nongfu Spring, hold it tightly in your hand and walk slowly When I went to the window, the scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood Same, heavy, very heavy, gradually, it becomes gray outside It's raining lightly in the sky. Why? My vision is blurred. I don't know. Whether it's because I shed tears or because it's raining heavily, maybe it's both, I My mood became even more melancholy, and I could no longer suppress my inner feelings. I felt so excited that I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just TM Who do you look down on in the next few chapters?

This should be the best novel in the Tomato novels and Xinghan brilliant fan fiction. I feel that if you, the author, removed the part where the protagonist revealed his identity as a time traveler, your score would still be higher. You insist on saying the identity of a time traveler, which is of no benefit or use, so why expose it? Instead, he lowered his score.

The author suggests that the plot can be advanced faster. In addition to the plot, you can also add some new plots appropriately. For example, the protagonist's wife can be written along this line. If possible, write more story lines between Shao Shang and Ling Buyi. For example, the rebellion in Shu can actually follow the original plot and let Ling Buyi and Shaoshang's relationship advance further. The protagonist can advance the plot while ensuring Shao Shang's safety behind the scenes. Author, you basically wrote it according to the original plot, but you seem to have only changed the part related to Shao Shang's emotional line. I suggest you change more and don't just limit yourself to the emotional line. Many people who read this novel came after reading the original plot. You should write more new plots and be more innovative. This will help you write the next novel in the future. By the way, author, is the protagonist of your novel Cheng Shaogong, or do you plan to follow the original plot of Shaoshang and Ling Buyi?

It's so good. This novel is the most enjoyable one I've read in Chasing Stars and Brilliance. The updated version has one or two more chapters than theirs. Although it's still not enough to read, but the author writes very well. It would be better if there were one or two more chapters.

Ten thousand words a day, don't make me kneel down and beg you [angry]

It's very good, but there is one thing. ① In the TV series, Niao Niao and Ling Buyi are together, so try to match them up. ② I love Sister-guarding Madman, but it's not good for my brother to always protect Niao Niao. There will inevitably be some setbacks in a person's life. Although Niao Niao's life was not good before, there should be things that are not difficult for each person at every stage. In the article, I have no objection to the fact that the brother always protects Niao Niao. Some things must be faced by oneself. The author will try his best to improve it. If possible, I would like to express my special thanks to the author. ③Since the article has said that it helps the protagonist a lot, you can write more articles about the protagonist and his subordinates. The author tries to fit the novel with the original plot. Most people like novels where the protagonist is particularly powerful. However, do not have everything given by the system. Try to make the protagonist do something by himself. (Now I would like to express my special thanks to the author for making this novel very interesting. The above are all personal suggestions. If you don't like it, please don't comment)

It's super cool. It's the only type of fanfic I like right now. It's really, really beautiful. Why is no one following me? [Crazy]

Great author, I really like your book when I read it. If you have saved the manuscript, I beg you to post it. I just ask you to update it quickly. I really see that you are just getting excited, so you just give it up. Please, the author is so grateful.

It's very interesting. The author just needs to reveal who the male protagonist's CP is [Thinking]

Yes, you can watch it. If you ask me to give it a rating, I will give it an 8.5. I'm afraid I'll give you the remaining 1.5 Too much and you'll be too proud and won't update it. Then I'll lose more than the gain, hahahahahahaha

Like as long as you don't remove the CP, There are a lot of beauties in this world, and many novels often reveal the CP. Most of those who like this TV series do so to watch the CP. If this book is not broken, you must give it a thumbs up!

To be honest, the idea of ​​meeting a time traveler is a bit toxic, but the atmosphere is not up to par. Overall, it is OK, with exciting parts and funny parts. Personally, I think the best part is when the male protagonist and his sister fight against their mother and become the sixth child. The description is very good, and the characters are well drawn. I hope there will be a female protagonist with a high IQ, a personality that can make trouble with the male protagonist, or a gentle and virtuous character.

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Renew! Called Male 2, Male 3 is defeated, and there is also the one named Huo Buyi [laughing evilly], since it is a doting sister system, isn't this worthy of heaven? [Thinking] Right, author, come on, it's very interesting, update soon [Blowing kiss]

Well... Overall it's still very good. There are a few points that I hope the author can correct a lot. 1. It's just words, there are a lot of typos. 2. The plot seems a bit bland. 3. ... I didn't think about these two points. Come on, the author! No highlights, don't be too bland, the plot should be a little more gorgeous

It's a good read. It's such a relaxing book that I like to read. But Mother Xiao's thinking is really strange. Yang Yang is the enemy's daughter. If you don't take it seriously, she is already pregnant. Why do you still defend her reputation for being pregnant?

As I watch it, I only have one thought in my mind: Ahhhhhh! ! ! The author should update quickly. Has your mortgage been paid off? Is your car loan paid off? Have you saved enough for your pension? What else are you resting for? Get up and work [laughing]

The author greatly cheers, cheers, cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง

This is the first time I read Xing Han's fan fiction on Tomato Beautiful (make up the number of words)

Are the male protagonist and Ling Buning a couple in the back?

How can I put it this way? I really want to continue watching it. It was like this last time.

I enjoyed reading this book so much. But I am uneducated and can travel all over the world with just one sentence.

It's super good-looking, I just wish there wasn't a female protagonist

Very good, but too slow. Author, I advise you to hurry up, otherwise I will kill you along the network cable.

Very good, but the updates are too slow. I want to send you some things from the kitchen.

I really like this book. The writing is very good.