I Am Wielding My Sword to Dominate the Mountain and Become the King

I look forward to the development of the plot in the future. I hope you don't join Li Yunlong's team, and don't become Lao Li's tool. You can write your own style. The subject matter is the same, and it's basically the same way. Since you have traveled through time and still have a system, let's use your hands and feet to fight the devils and innovate some new ideas for the plot. You can be a little brainless, but you have to be more rigorous and don't act like a magic drama.

You can have 5 points first and fight the Japanese at the same time. Let's start a harem

Not bad, not bad. I finally have a book that is self-reliant, so I don't have to be a licker all day long.

It's well written. I hope the author will continue his work and write more chapters. It's really too few and not enough to read!

As for the last part, it's pretty much the same, and it's very realistic to the original text, but the characters and times are a little off. In the end, only Kong Jie was safe.

You can add more modern elements into it

It's pretty, but it's missing a bit.

It's just missing a lot of famous scenes

It looks great, keep up the good work!

The plot is complete and smooth, and the author is great!

The writing is quite good. Although there are some slight exaggerations, it is much better than those dozens of people beating thousands of locusts.

Good, good, this book is good to read

I feel good looking

Double-click the author's work to follow it. Thank you for your work.

As long as it develops independently, it will be fine, otherwise it will be empty and unified and it will never be able to shake off Lao Li's aura.

A very good systematic novel [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Nice. A good beginning and a good ending.

Not bad! Worth reading

Not bad, good, tastes great