Pirate******

The writing is good, and the details are handled well, but it feels very bland and has no highlights.

I feel that this book is quite suitable for me. The protagonist is strong, but he doesn't interfere in the main plot. Let it develop freely. She also got married and had a daughter, which is what I am most satisfied with. It just updates too slowly. Come on💪💪💪💪💪💪

The second fanfic, because it is a novel, it is impossible to copy all the plot settings from the original work. I hope everyone can understand. Thank you for your support and love. The author will work hard to bring you more exciting content [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

How can I put it this way? This book is one of the better ones in my collection. The plot is well handled, the characters have their own characteristics, and the fighting scenes are exciting. I hope the author will keep up the good work and keep up the good work [laughs]

The low score of this book is probably because the protagonist is too weak in the early stage or the protagonist's early opponents are too strong, which makes people feel uncomfortable after reading it. The back part is pretty good and fits the style of Shuangwen. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing is good. Kuzan's character is portrayed well. I hope to create a different navy to change Akainu and Kizaru Sengoku. Then I don't want to waterproof the Straw Hats and accept Robin in advance. Come on.

Support it! Update slowly, don't write poorly just because you have less to destroy, the subject matter is good, keep up the good work!

Come on, the writing is very beautiful, the plot is compact and not verbose.

Very good, keep up your writing skills, keep up the good work

The writing can be good and good, but stick to this quality. Put it on the bookshelf and keep it first, don't let it be unfinished, author

Personally I think it's very exciting [Thoughts] Big boost for the author

It's great, I wish there were more words and it wouldn't be a mess

Overall this book is good, some plots still lack a little vividness, but overall it's still good! I like it [like] [like] Looking forward to the author's next book [love] [blowing kiss]

Five-star praise, remember to get cash back [you taste carefully]

I think, when will we give Aoki Pheasant a Overlord color? After all, Overlord color is still very domineering. Although Aoki Pheasant doesn't have it, it doesn't mean that the time traveler doesn't have it.

I like Aokiji's justice!

Come on, author, your writing is very good, don't stop.

It's so pretty, wow wow!

Very good! Written about pirates!

The writing is very good and the subject matter is novel.

Not bad, well worth watching.

Very good. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer good quality novels. I hope you can stick to them.

It feels pretty good! This is one of the few pirate books I've read, and it's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Super awesome, the best One Piece novel I have ever read

This is my first time reading Kuzan's article, it's pretty good

Why doesn't the Aoki pheasant outbreak end the world government at the end of the play? Why write Qing Pheasant to death? Why can't Aokiji defeat Akainu, and his legs and arms are broken? Why?

It's okay, nothing poisonous It's very beautiful, don't go into the palace [cry][cry][cry]

I feel like it was well written.

I think it looks pretty

Not bad, keep up the good work