
Original Sin
【原罪】
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 382k Words
- Genre
- Mystery
- Subgenre
- Mystery High-Concept
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
158Chapters
38Reads
55.7kReads · all time
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I haven't finished reading it yet. I want to know what the ending is. Will the bully get the punishment he deserves? A very realistic thing is that my ending was a suicide attempt, and my mother told me "everything will pass." I didn't see a doctor, nor did I transfer to another school. That person transferred to a higher school midway as a student with a talent for sports. However, because of her influence, my grades plummeted, and in the end I could only get admitted to a vocational high school. In fact, it wasn't them who really defeated me, it was her who was the most important to me. What I want to say is, if I had been braver and stronger at that time, would the direction of the story be different from what it is now. Then I hope evil will be punished and all bullies will be punished.
I think Jian Qishen is just Wang Yalan's imagination. Because he is stuck in the quagmire, he wants someone to help him to give him the motivation and courage to live. As I watched, I became more and more confused. Does Jian Qishen really exist?
A very realistic book, but it is a novel after all, and the final result can end in a good way. In my opinion, the revengeful Wang Yaping is just a fantasy of a dying person. Jane is a fantasy, Officer Song and Officer Zhang are fantasy, the school doctor sister is a fantasy, and Liu Yu is still a fantasy. The only real thing may be the love of her parents for her. I really like the description of the boy's fight against capital in the article. Yes, how could the boy fight against capital? It's just a scene with the boy under pressure. There are too many stupid people in the world. They just follow what others say. They never have their own ideas and are entertained like pigs and dogs.
It's so beautiful, help!!!! Five stars, five stars!!! How should I put it? Although I read it very quickly, the content frame was really not good enough. It was so beautiful!!! A girl who has been bullied for a long time, no one cares about her, no one protects her, except her parents, but she is kind-hearted and never confesses to her parents. She has read many books about redemption. The redeemed protagonists in the books all have corresponding redeemers, but she does not. In the long-term depression and bullying environment, she unconsciously imagined for herself an upright, gentle and kind boy who would help her and protect her unconditionally. She set up a trap step by step. She seemed weak, but she had a strong heart, and in the end she pushed the people who bullied her into the abyss. It's so beautiful!!!!
This book deserves good reviews. It's really good-looking and has a great ending. The protagonist punishes the school bullies in her own way. They deserve it. Good people also get good rewards. It's a pity what happened to the protagonist, but I also admire her determination and bravery. Some of the things in it are also very realistic and very beautiful.
The tone of the whole book is that of a capital tragedy, which is very real. It depicts the image of a female protagonist who was bullied. After long-term bullying, the female protagonist suffered from schizophrenia and differentiated a personality to comfort herself and walk with her. The story is probably about the heroine's fight back against bullying. Watch all the efforts she made. It's really good.
It's so beautiful that it made me cry. Yalan resisted little by little from being bullied, resisted the bullies, and resisted the capital behind them. When justice failed, she used her own methods to punish the evildoers and became the law in her own world. Finally, she was freed by death. Moreover, the scene of Yalan's parents begging for those funds and the bullies was very real, very sad, and deeply touching. Overall, this book is really great and worth reading The author is awesome (/≧ω\)
The writing is very real, very helpless, and too cruel. The protagonist is pitiful and hateful. Justice is not easy to come by.
So Jian Qishen is just a fantasy, right [awkward laugh]
The bullying of the heroine in the first half was too cruel, and even in the end, when she took revenge, she only suffered a loss of one thousand to her enemy and eight hundred to herself. It was so cruel, so cruel.