Traveling Through **********

It's super beautiful, but the subject matter is too niche.

This book is considered to be one of the best among Yu Huanshui fanfics. The ending of each character's story is arranged well, and several contradictions are handled well. Especially Gan Hong's cleansing and leaving home is really fun to watch. But, this script is originally a small web drama, and the story is not strong. That's all. The plot is almost over. I don't know if the author plans to finish it directly or what to do next.

Let's talk about this novel. The current plot is spliced ​​from "Yu Huanshui", "The Beginning" and "Anti-Gangster Storm". The main plot is to conquer Liang Anni's rise, join forces to blow up Zhao and Wei, accept his ex-wife and younger siblings, open a company and accept subordinates. At present, it seems that Xu Yingzi is about to collect the stamps. He has come here. Stop pretending. I am not a gentleman. I like to read it.

The ideas are good and the plot is on point. After reading Tomato for so long, this book has given me the impression that it can be ranked in the top ten. I understand everything [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

This book is still good, you can read it, although my thinking is a little jumpy. At the end of the second half, the author should have finished it quickly after seeing too many bad comments. It is a pity. If you polish it carefully, you can still write a lot. I look forward to the author's next book.

This book is good. The threshold for Tomato writers is very low. You can basically write it with both hands, but this book is really good and not brainless. The author should keep writing and hope it won't end badly. I hope the author won't write other novels in the next book. Fans have great limitations.

The characters in the plot don't have any major faults. The small flaws are not worth mentioning under the cover of the driving skills. The driving skills are improved, which is a little taboo, but after all, they are not as young and handsome as other protagonists. It doesn't hurt to lower the threshold [I learned it] What about Chapter 93.5? I'll change it back to five stars after seeing it [smile]

It's okay. Please support me. There are flaws, but you can see it.

When I wrote about his cousin's classmate, I still felt like my eyes were shining brightly, so please try to do more [smile]

Logically speaking, if you have not watched the film and television works, just based on the novel, it is not a bad thing, and it deserves praise. The protagonist is decisive and troublesome, and grasps people's hearts. The villain, supporting roles, and female supporting actors all have online IQs and fit the character. The most important thing is to write about the part on the boat. Comrade Zhao's sensitive inner planning, including thinking, is online, and Xiao Lizi's brain-replenishing ability and reaction thinking are also very good. The best part may be the part about understanding the psychology of a gambler. The only part. The only drawback is that the story about his hometown is written in a hurry, and each character is not introduced properly. The most important thing is the problem of his stepmother. Since the matter has been decided, he is indecisive, which is really embarrassing and blunt. I have to say that I have deducted a big mark here, and the blunt description of the stepmother's son going to work is nonsense. It is too forced and makes people disgusted. But overall, the literary love is really good, the character's IQ is online, and the protagonist has unique charm and bold behavior!

It's quite nice, the logic and writing are good, it's a bit refreshing, and the driving is stable, but the subject matter is a bit niche. After watching Yu Huanshui on TV, I will have a stronger sense of immersion. Watching the foreshadowing of Ivy will be followed by other film and television series, I look forward to it! ! !

I haven't watched any of these TV series, but it doesn't stop me from liking this novel at all. It's really well written. I hope Liang Anni will come back to accompany the protagonist soon, probably by changing her identity or something like that [Sending my heart]

Come on, author, eh, it's pretty good, write it well

Not bad, a bland fanfic, but the arrangement is a bit off. Unexpected, I can only say this, I read it when I am calm, and it is quite enjoyable. It would be too few, the number of words in each chapter is too few, if the foreigners next door saw it, they would think we are looking down on it, ten chapters per person, ten chapters [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I saw Chapter 40, and I was originally going to comment after seeing the updated chapters, but seeing how sincere the author is, I decided to comment. After seeing the current chapters, I feel that the writing is quite good, the IQ is also online, and the various settings are reasonable. Although the protagonist's methods are a bit dark, I still support it. Such a person is more realistic and flesh-and-blood. I still like this aspect.

This is the only movie I have read in a long time that can complete a book with supporting characters. Good luck to the author. If you write more books, you might have the chance to become a god [Like] There are not many of them in recent years [Like] [Like]

But I didn't want to watch it, so I started watching it again! Aside from the film and television plot, Fish for Water is quite bland and would easily make people abandon the book! I feel that the highlight should be the extension of the plot. The transitions in the middle should be shorter and the plot connection should be faster!

Although the golden color passages cannot escape the original work. But the author is also very imaginative. There is no harm in stringing together several dramas. In the process, the personality of each character is basically intact. This is not easy. I haven't seen some of the dramas and I don't understand them just by hearing the names. Sometimes I can't get the point. It intrigued me to keep reading.

The blood is too hot and needs cold and rational things to cool it down. The evil of reality is difficult to eliminate, so people hope that the books can present things that are difficult to have in reality. Come on! For this small piece of pure land in reality, resentment will be rewarded and virtue will be rewarded! I hope your new books will be more exciting.

This is a new story wonderful

It's good to watch. It's Tomato's only film and television work that is very well written [smile][smile][smile]

It's really good. Friends who are interested can take a look.

The author writes well, especially in the grasp of human nature. When a person decides to cherish something that is threatened and starts to make a choice, he has already entered the transaction. In reality, some people may not make a choice because they are dull, numb or free and pure. Human nature is complicated, right?

I read this book a few times and deleted it after reading one or two chapters. Later, Shuhuang started reading "Sweeping Crime Storm", and the rest of it was also good. Although it was a movie variety series and involved a lot of scenes, the integration was particularly good. Unlike most other books, the main plot of every movie and TV show has to be walked through again without leaving the original plot. Is this considered bad? The Anti-Gangster Storm was pretty good, but then it was very bad, and it was just barely enough when I was thirty. Then Gu Jia's writing was good again, and then suddenly it disappeared!

I haven't watched Yu Huanshui's film and television works, so I just read the plot of this novel, which is a bit confusing. The plot twist of the trio of villains is quite good. It was not easy for the author to code, so the positive reviews are encouraging.

The article is well written, but it is a little different from the movies and TV series, the speed of the car is relatively fast. If you like it, support it

I've finished reading it. Overall, it's okay. Anyway, I think it's okay. Just read it as a fun article. Don't take it too seriously. I'm reading it too late. Maybe I can encourage the author 😂😂😂

It's a good book, very suitable for me

It's pretty. I think all men should like it.

It's very well written. I haven't read this kind of book for a long time.