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I hope readers will give more support to new authors, and I will apologize if my writing is not good.

The author Shinra Tenzheng can actually be used for defense. . . . You don't have to use your body to resist. It looks a bit silly.

After listening to this book in one day, I can still accept the pace. The main content is also clear, because it follows the world line of the original book, but the protagonists are all trying to complete tasks, so a faster pace feels appropriate. Otherwise, if it is too slow, it will feel like ink. Yakai kicks two Yonko to pieces, the visuals are vivid, and it is very enjoyable to read. However, the book is almost finished after the sacrifice of Momonosuke in Chapter 103, because the subsequent time and space plot can be regarded as an extra chapter to make up for the regrets. I thought that after the plots of the three theatrical versions were over, I would return to the original pirate world to continue, but it turned out that I went to Roger's era again, and I gave up without returning to the original world until the latest chapter, which lasted dozens of chapters, and the author seemed to have not updated for a long time. In addition, regarding the character of the protagonist, at first I thought it was Payne's cold style, but after thinking about it, although the cold style is very handsome, the original Hokage Yahiko's personality when he was alive was not cold, but positive and optimistic, so it seems to be consistent with it. Finally, here is some advice. If the author wants to continue updating, he can write about changing the world. For example, after returning to the original pirate world, he first gathers all the members of the Akatsuki organization. After all, the members of the Akatsuki organization are still very interesting. Then he meets the Straw Hats during an outing, and just finds the last one. A piece of historical text. Now that Luffy is the younger brother of the protagonist, let's go to the last Raph Drew together. Of course, the content in the original pirate world cannot be the same as the content in the extra story, because the content in the extra story is too ridiculous, such as Oda Kingdom, Daxia Kingdom and so on [laughing] Although the content sounds reasonable, but it still sounds strange at first glance. I feel embarrassed, so the content of the final destination of the original One Piece World must be consistent with the original work, even if it is imagined out of thin air, it will finally overthrow the rule of the Celestial Dragons and create a world where everyone is equal. Isn't this Yahiko's original intention when he founded the Akatsuki Organization? The book is almost over at this point. At the end, we can also add some extras, such as the married life of the protagonist and Xiaonan, the daily life of the Akatsuki organization, etc. This is my personal suggestion. If there are no more updates, then just pretend that I didn't say it. I gave four stars just because I didn't see the ending. In addition, the plot of time and space later is too long, so I don't want to give five stars.

What can I say about this book? The plot is not very good, but the author is very good. He can read comments and read readers' suggestions. I think this is very good. Unlike some authors who are very arrogant. I recommend not to read or write anything. This is worthy of five stars.

This book is very good. Keep up the good work, the author. Some people will read it. Keep updating. I will read it for a few days.

This book is really great. I feel that the author has done a thorough research on both animes. The plot arrangement is passionate and reasonable, and there is no obvious OOC. There is also a system, which is very funny sometimes when it comes out. I hope the author can calm down the pirate's difficulties and show his heart. I love Ace so much, please update it soon.

I think it looks great! When I first chased Naruto, I felt sorry for the Akatsuki organization (even though it may not be very good, it is still a villain force [facepalm]) Come on, keep up the good work! The Akatsuki organization must be strong (it's not bad to be strong in the world of pirates [please update])

Not bad but a bit rushed

It's good. Although the book is bad, Ace is alive.

What Payne did is probably what all fans of the sea want to do. He went into the war to save Ace. It was absolutely amazing.

This book is well written and has a good style. Among them, the collision of Naruto's system in the pirate world and the two worlds deeply attracted me. I hope there will be better plots in the future.

I read it and found it to be very well written. I just wish the author would update more and not be like a man with a weak kidney, grinding away.

Pretty good, keep up the good work.

Full of essence

Very well written, keep up the good work

Comrade, to be honest, this is a composition [face covering] But newcomers still need to be encouraged [laughs crookedly]

As long as it is an Akatsuki organization, I will give it five stars.

It's okay, but the speed is a bit fast

I finally found a good book today, and I will continue to work hard. 👍One

It's a pretty good novel, but there are too few chapters to read.

I feel like the author has a lot of imagination. It's a good first time to read this type of article.

It's a very good article. The author has worked hard. Come on, come on, happy Mid-Autumn Festival!

I accidentally clicked on this novel and found it quite good. It's good to read.

This type focuses on youth, Luffy is thirteen years old. This book is well written and I am very touched by it. I like reading it very much.

The writing is very good. Keep up the good work, the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's pretty good. It's my favorite style. Keep up the good work [laughs]

This is the first time I have seen this kind of theme, the pirate type, it is particularly good-looking, I am hooked, I hope there are more.

Traveling through the world of pirates, I can accept this rhythm. The Judiciary Island was the beginning of my love for pirates, and the plot nodes are all classics among classics. Like, like, like

I haven't seen a novel that suits my taste for a long time. The subject matter is very novel. Please support it.

Hey, I like watching One Piece. I feel like I have a pirate dream. A Caribbean island dream.