Hongdou Gave Birth to the Southern Kingdom, and His Apprentice Turned into a Succubus

Let's build a building here. Xiaobao can find me here. Although generally I can see your comments, except for paragraph comments, I can only see them when I re-watch it. If Xiaobao has any troubles with the plot, some plots he wants to watch, unhappiness in life, etc., You can write them down below. As long as they are not malicious insults, I will reply. There is also the question of updating, because I am not writing full-time, so I don't have so much time to write. I'm sorry in advance, but I will definitely finish this book to the end. If it is quick, it will be completed this year. Please don't worry, Xiaobao. There are also some things that everyone thinks are strange and unreasonable. Maybe it's just me setting my sights. I've also seen some comments from Xiaobao who thought the plot was strange, so I'm going to explain it here [Chigua] This article is definitely not a sweet article, it is sweet but has a sharp edge. If there is Xiao Baolei, you can leave early. It is a group portrait article. The author hopes that each character can live out his own characteristics, rather than being a simple flat NPC. Finally, what is our purpose! No cp, only children make choices, we adults want them all! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

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I've been following updates without interruption. After all, I like to follow short stories, and I think this one is quite good. Xie Weilou is really hard to get over. (Contains spoilers below) At first, I thought this noisy kid had a bad look. Because of his previous life, I thought he would be a bit darker, but he is just a good boy with a good reputation, and he will not charge for helping others. Those people in Jingyun Village really deserve to die. Why did Xie Weilou have to endure so much malice from the world at such a young age? Why did he have to be used and plotted all his life? I feel sorry for him and feel sorry for him, but I think this may be his ending. I can't interfere in his world, but I wish him and Ruan Li happiness. Alien, ahli, we will never be separated.

Beautiful! ! ! The writing feels like searching for clues! I feel that the description of the final battle could be more detailed and richer. The foreshadowing is very detailed, but the final battle feels a bit lacking. Although the target story is actually a long-running sad story [I almost cried], and the daily relationship between master and apprentice is interesting and fun, but the outline is that fate plays tricks on people, and there is a strong sense of powerlessness that cannot be violated.

The perspective changes smoothly, the writing is very good, and it is not a stupid story. The plots in the book unfold one after another. The story lines of the supporting characters are well written, coherent and smooth, focusing on the plot of the story. It does not just revolve around the protagonist, but has a main line full of mysteries. All in all, the writing is very good, the story is also very exciting, and it's super profitable to get involved. It's great to watch. It's finished. I feel that I have endless aftertaste and a little bit of stamina.

Nice! ! ! I'm curious whether there will be multiple people in the end, or the heroine alone, or buying stocks👀 I really like this book, it's beautiful

Very nice! Every character is very emotional! Just why doesn't Du Changfeng give a side story? A little bit upset That's how young people like it. If you can pick it up, you might put it down if it hurts. Woooooooooooooooooooooooo

Woooooooooo, the more you watch, the more you watch. Almost all the protagonists are dead, but they meet in reality, but it is really good to watch. Highly recommended. It was quite funny at first, but the more you watch, the more you watch. But I have to say that it is really, really, really, really, really great.

The plot is compact, the writing is smooth, the plots are ups and downs, and the plots are interlocking. As the main line progresses, the mystery is gradually revealed. Some sand sculptures are a bit abstract, but there is always a faint sadness lingering in the center during the watching process. Although it is HE in the end, the stamina is still a bit strong [almost crying]. In short, the story is wonderful, and it is not a loss to invest [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][like][like] I hope that whether it is Ruan Li or Li, they can have a feast with Brother Lujuan, Green Tea's "sister" Xu Qingchen, Tsundere Xie Weilou, and Gu Yi, Xu Shuangning, Ruan Bo, Aunt Ruan, Zhuang Huanzhuang'an, Qi Yunmu, Wen Changfeng, Tao Zhiyanruo, Jiang Jiyue, and Aunt Ziyue during the annual reunion festival! I wish everyone will continue to be happy in another time and space! 😭😭

There are so few people, but this book is quite interesting

Beautiful [send heart] [send heart] Love it, love it

I love you so much, the author is so awesome, have you updated more? [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The author's writing is so good that I cried several times while reading it. The writing style is also very good [crying][crying][crying]

It's really beautiful. The author is so good at writing. I can't get enough of it. Why is it gone again! Why! Do you know that this chapter of yours will make me sleepless all night long? Thinking that this book is not finished, I have to wait for a new chapter after finishing one chapter, and thinking that I can only read one chapter every day, I feel #nausea#dizziness#pale#sweating#abdominal pain#blood pressure drops#shock#coma#increased body temperature#all over the body is weak and cold#all body aches#no food Desire #drowsiness #diarrhea #vomiting #sore eyes #joint pain #cough #phlegm #chest pain #chill #headache #body muscle aches #throat pain #nasal congestion #runny nose #unconsciousness #palpitations #sweating #tremor #sadness #self-harm #collapse #suicide#!!!! I want to struggle but I have no strength, my heart feels like a big hole has been drilled, do you care? You don't care, just like you don't care that there is no lion in the lion's head, and there is no wife in the wife cake, you also don't care about me who is going crazy chasing serials.

Good, very, very good

Beautiful, highly recommended

Well written!

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It's really well written, keep it up