I’m in the Cultivation World, and I Can’t Learn Spirit Skills. I’m Desperate

The author's writing style is OK, but the plot is a bit slow. The previous explanation of the Righteous Demon Cult can be simplified. The sooner the protagonist appears, the better. After all, 90% of people click in to take a look. You need to catch the reader within these ten seconds. Good novels are addictive. The growth of the protagonist can be more obvious, and the dialogue between the system and the protagonist can be less. The world Explain what you want to watch at the beginning, use as few chapters as possible to describe forces, situations, etc., Write more plots, try to have an attractive plot or the growth of the protagonist's strength in each chapter, try to have tasks or other goals at the beginning, and set explicit rewards, or let readers think about what will happen if they complete this goal, and there must be an obvious main line. Also, it can be seen that the author wants to make the article interesting, but this is not necessary. One or two points in a chapter will be fine, or none, but not too many to take up the text, and it must really make readers smile. I hope you can write better and better, support (personal opinion, don't blame me, the author) [smile]

The writing is very good, very in line with my taste, come on^ω^[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

If you like it, post it to give it some motivation. You can tell me whatever plot you want to see, and I'll add it to the text if you can. Effective for a long time [laughter]

It's beautiful, don't give up! I hope it will always be a single heroine with no ambiguity

It would be unacceptable for the male protagonist to use someone else's body to stick to the female protagonist.

I feel like the author is the other path taken by the protagonist. Maybe the protagonist is the author when he was a junior high school student.

Not bad, very beautiful

The male protagonist uses someone else's body to kiss the female protagonist. This is a fucking poisonous point.