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Tomato is one of the few good transformation stories written without a system, but the update is a little slow. The subject matter and content are very novel. It is much better than other transformation stories. Those that feel like they are made from the same mold are worth collecting and worth five stars. If it's too short, you can raise it. Maybe it will be enough to watch until 2024? [Laughing] (bushi) Regarding my offline viewing without adding time

This is the novel that gave me the best feeling this month. It has neither system nor ambiguity, because the male protagonist is very strong from the beginning. The key is that you know [laughs crookedly]. I stop reading many novels halfway through because there is no fun in them. Anyway, cheers to the author! You are the best!

This book is indeed very interesting and has many interesting points. Good luck to the author! I really like this book, but can we update it faster, or update it twice a day or something like that [Flying Kiss] The story line is really good

A good invincible article, written very successfully, it can be regarded as the top level of transformation articles. It is rare to see. When I first saw it, my eyes lit up, but afterward I was speechless. With such a good setting, why do you want to be a licking dog? Why! Why! Puzzled! ! ! ! ! ! ! The world is clearly at your feet, but you kneel down.

This world view is really in line with my preferences! ! ! The local world hangs the ceiling of superpowers and is invincible all the way (It's those from the Federation who don't know how high the sky is and how high it is) The former most powerful magician returns to another world to seek revenge and find his parents. (The protagonist is also slowly becoming more mature) All the details are connected together, it's so beautiful! ! ! I haven't watched it for a long time. Why does the protagonist come up again later? Doesn't he have a grudge against the emperor? When the palace exploded, he could have killed the emperor. Even if he didn't kill the assassins, he would have killed them, and he actually helped the emperor to deal with the assassins? And the protagonist of Nakko's wife is also accepted? Na is the protagonist's teacher! It's just two souls in one body! Hey, he and the protagonist are two people! Nuo Xi obviously likes Na Ke! ! Also, even the protagonist's parents can conjure up intelligence. It's unscientific to think that a person without scheming or strength can live for such a long time. My mother is also very "kind" and she deserves to be called her biological child. Note: There are many typos.

It can't be described in words. Anyway, it's very good-looking. When the ratings come in, it will be at least eight points. If it's good, it might be nine points. Of course, I don't know, but it's really good-looking. I won't spoil it. You'll know after you watch it.

I have been reading this book for so long, and after writing so many chapters, the author still seems to have not run out of inspiration. The updates in my bookshelf have been updated several times, and this book is still there, and the others have either been discontinued or completed. This book has almost become the oldest book in my bookshelf. I can't bear to give it five stars. I'm sorry! [Crying] I hope the author can continue to persevere, come on! ! ! @Radiant abyss [blowing kiss]

About being able to understand even though the sentences are not clear [laughter] Overall it's pretty good, but there are a lot of typos and sentence issues. Although I can understand it... In the end, I still hope that there will be no more eunuchs [almost crying]

Single, partial, and excellent writing style → The writing style is excellent (the writing style improves greatly starting from Chapter 661), and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. The heroine transforms into a lolita, integrating the world view, and the Western sword and magic worldview invades the earth. The heroine is set as one with two souls. They are basically female characters. The emotional lines are generally written, and the battle scenes are well described. It can be regarded as a masterpiece. After all, there are too many words and the world view is not bad. The poisonous points are acceptable. The loli body can be treated as a genderless protagonist. It is a pity that the description is not in place. There is nothing wrong with it. Overall, a book worth collecting.

It's pretty good, except that the author is too short and not enough to read [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] Can the author read it? Hurry up and update [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

I have been looking for novels in various two-dimensional games before. I have read all the ones I am interested in. I am looking for other novel styles. There are not many novels that I can continue to read, but this novel will definitely be on the list. I think if you want to retain people, you have to start with a cool article in the early stage, but don't be too brainless. After that, try to write some short stories to match the main plot, so that it will not be boring. This is how Detective Conan is written. From now on, I'll occasionally have to write some cool clips to keep people entertained, but the key point is not to make mindless cool posts.

"About the fact that I am on the fan list" author, come on, keep going ? The author explains why this book's fan list is no longer in the fan list @radiant abyss

Now that I have read more than 130 chapters, I feel that the previous part is quite novel, but it does seem that this hole has been dug and cannot be filled without opening another world. Personally, I feel that it looks a bit awkward [eating melon] In fact, I feel that the main world is a pavement for the other world, and it is interesting to watch the other world for a long time.

The author's writing is very good, and I like to read it, but I was wondering why the author didn't let the protagonist advance into a great mage when writing about another world. It's a pity that after staying in the other world for so long, he has a little more magic energy stored, and his strength is still a magister. For the rest of the plot, I estimate that the perspective will always be from the main world. When Kexin and the others arrive at the ruins or encounter some danger, the protagonist will return to the main world from the portal. At that time, the vision will attract everyone's attention.

Good looking ୧⍢⃝୨ With a score of 7.2, It's worthy of being a tomato.

If you change some sentences and some pronouns, it will be a good book. [Laughing evilly]

This book is the best transformation text I have read so far. I highly recommend it!

Although the writing is indeed good, there is still a lot of room for improvement. If the author can see it, he can refer to "Sound × Magic" written by Japanese writer Osamu Shirase more than 10 years ago. It has a similar theme, but the character descriptions are more vivid, and there are many very interesting daily interactions in it. You may think the plot is old-fashioned, but after all, it was written more than 10 years ago, and it is already very well written like that. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

I give this book a high rating! It's really interesting to travel to another world after more than 100 pictures! I used to listen to more than 90 chapters of the book and felt that I always made the mistake of listening to other books later. Now I come back to listen to this book and find that it is more and more interesting! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] NNBNB, after updating for so long, you still write some useless chapters (555-570) or some good chapters, you are still really NB! I actually want to ask, who is the protagonist? I gave it 5 stars in the early stage and now I give it 1 star and I have revised my review n times! How much do you think I want that?

Generally speaking, it is average. Many people have mentioned its shortcomings, so I won't mention them again. But writing is not easy, so I give you four stars

The advantages are very good, the plot is relatively innovative. Moreover, this book should not have a real heroine. I personally think that the heroine is also the hero. The second biggest drawback is that there are more chapters every day than I can read.

It's very beautiful [almost crying] [almost crying] but I want to see them go back soon It's really good. I've been watching it for a long time.

It's very interesting [Blowing Kiss]. When I saw the first part, I thought it was the traditional Feng Aotian. After returning to the original world, I suddenly felt a little bit nervous. However, after reading the second part, it was really good. It would be better if the author could speed up the update.

It is very graphic and every plot is very vivid! The alternate world created is super imaginative! Make readers want to read more after reading it! By the way, please update. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] This book could be made into a movie! It's not finished yet! How many pages will be compiled later? But this story is really exciting. It now has more than 12,000 pages, and the word count is even more incredible! The author's imagination is really rich. I hope the author can write more novels about this new world in the future. I love you!

It's really good to watch and I think the plot is very good. I just want to ask when will this emperor die?

I'll give it 5 points for my first review, because the beginning is very good and engaging. The middle is not bad either I would give it a 3 or 2 in the follow-up review, which is a bit unbearable. In the later stage, it was average (it may be that I didn't watch it anymore. But it was no longer attractive enough) Let me ask, is there any necessary relationship between the previous and later articles? The part about the different world can be regarded as another novel entirely. I don't know if it's poisonous or not. But someone said it. Is there anyone who can give me the desire to continue watching? If nothing else, the author is quite capable of updating.

It's so beautiful, I just need to add more daily routines.

Basically, if I'm satisfied, I'll give it four stars. The author should work hard and update [laughs]

If the needle doesn't poke, you're a bad guy, it's not enough to read at all, please update quickly! ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

This book is awesome, well worth reading