When the Female Supporting Role Becomes My Wife, I Will Pamper My Wife Online

I will be an old fan when it becomes popular in the future. Come on, author, don't give up on writing books! It's hard to find a book that interests me. Don't stop updating or give up on writing.

Average. The story is not complicated, even a bit silly. But it's quite comfortable to look at, and it's pretty good among the men's quick wear articles I've read. It's just that the protagonist is a bit too pampered, even a bit "licking". (I just saw the second story. It may be that the emotional relationship between men and women in the second story was not fully described, which made me feel that the protagonist was too "licky". It may also be that the plot requires that they must be together, but the way it was handled made me feel slightly uncomfortable). My suggestion (personal suggestion) is to change the plot settings in subsequent unit stories. The happiness level does not have to be 100%. In this way, the relationship and dealings between the male and female protagonists will be more flexible, and the writing ideas should be more open. (If you take the "pure sweet pet" route, pretend I didn't say it) (I personally prefer a "balanced relationship between men and women". If it is easy to write "pet" from a single perspective, you can add more dedication and appreciation of the heroine to each other to balance it out, otherwise I always feel a bit licky)

I think it's OK. Please note that I feel that I don't represent the majority of netizens, nor the author. Maybe this is the author's first book, and it should be the first one. There is no period. Can we add it? Leave a comment and add time

Author, tell me you don't update anymore. It's been a minute since I finished reading. Come on, hurry up.

Worth watching, not shilling [laughs]

He's just a pick-up guy, it's okay, after all, there are no more clean and innocent girls, don't take it too seriously, there are too many in reality. [Punch hard]

A pretty good book. As for the shortcomings, the plot is not smooth enough. For example, character names are often confusing, improper sentence segmentation leads to unclear meanings, etc. However, the plot design is really good, and considering that the author may be a novice, it can be understood. Finally, I hope the author can improve it, come on! Please add more chapters. The child is crying (´;;`). I also want to ask where the author is from. I always feel that there is a dialect flavor when writing, um... It's weird.

As for Wei and Mei in the last plane, I think it would be better if there was a side story. I haven't described the relationship between them in detail yet. This ending made me a little confused. Another regret is that Xiaomei did not return to Jiang Chen. It feels like a pity [crying] [crying] [crying] But it's really beautiful! ! !

I think everything is fine. The reason why I gave it four stars is just that, I saw in the comment section that the female general suddenly had a sword in the back of the volume. I don't know if it has been changed to no sword or the same as before, because I have only read the third volume now. I saw the black-faced man in Volume 3. Is he the main god?

The first world is well written, but a little short (quickly read it, I understand). The second world is also okay, but it's too late and I have to go to bed, so I haven't finished reading the rest. I'll read the rest when I have time. Come on, author bacteria [learned]

It looks good, it looks good, don't abuse me later, just abuse the bad people [laughing]

After reading three chapters, the plot is good. I think there are many areas that need improvement. For example, in the first story, where they eat at the beginning, and after the protagonist leaves, "he" feels good to the protagonist. Who is good to the protagonist here? Although everyone knows that he is the village chief, I think some actions of the village chief or some other descriptions can be added in front to express that the current person is the village chief. I feel that this is a bit incoherent. Also, when the protagonist first saw the village chief, he said he was his father-in-law, and later he said that he liked the village chief and felt that he was in love. So earlier, he directly thought that the village chief was his father-in-law, which was a bit confusing. Of course, I don't mean anything else. I think it's still very good, but there are some minor flaws, which don't affect my understanding of the novel's content. Come on, author! [Like][Like][Like]

The second world's takeover smell is too strong

Look at life with an appreciating heart. All gains and losses, hidden and obvious, are all scenery and style. Look at life with an appreciating heart. All gains and losses, hidden and obvious, are scenery and style. Look at life with an appreciating heart. All gains and losses, hidden and obvious, are scenery and style.

Do you think this matter can't just be looked at next time?

But I am uneducated and I can go all over the world with just one word.

Some of the content in the book is a bit logically confusing, but it is also very good. Come on, the author is so [cool][cool][cool]

I've been watching the last chapter for a long time, the really fucking knife. Fortunately, I got it back for you. Although it's far-fetched, overall it's good and the pit is filled. After all, I forgot a lot while saving and reading. Come on, keep creating.

A very good book, thank you to the author

I'm a native dog and I love watching [Eating Melon]

Ah, this unexpected ending.

The first world does look good, the second world almost poisoned me to death, but the male protagonist does have a good hand in taking over [Thoughts]

This book is generally good, but some areas are not handled well, such as the takeover. If the author improves these, this book will be even better.

This book is good, but the details are not enough. There are very few. I still want to read it.

Ahhhh~ It's worth watching, super sweet. Really sweet

Good looking 😊 Nice character design, I like the story about quick wear and pampering my wife from the perspective of the male protagonist.

The writing is very good. Maybe the plot is not fluent enough, but I can still read it carefully.

The content of this book is good, but it suddenly turned into a sadistic book, just like eating sweets and suddenly giving me a knife. It was too sudden and a bit unacceptable.

It's quite interesting, cheers for the author

This book is very beautiful.