Bearing Two Souls

Now that I have seen it, I feel it is a mid-to-high-end novel. The setting is quite good. It includes spiritual energy recovery, supernatural recovery, spiritual ruins development, killing spirit beasts to obtain spirit beads, and absorption of promotions. There are no big problems with the setting. But there are some minor flaws in the writing, and it appears to be a new author. Most of the current text revolves around the protagonist. There is little background preparation, the driving force for the advancement of the story is not obvious, and the description of the supporting characters is slightly thin. The setting of the background can be more detailed. There is no need to explain it separately. It can explain the international situation, the development of Lingxu, the prosperity of Buddhism and Taoism, etc. The content of the story can be richer, and there can also be foreshadowing. Then the main driving force for the advancement of the story is not very clear. The protagonist wants to know the truth about the death of his parents and the origin of Sakaki. Then the criteria for completing these tasks are not very clear, but simply becoming stronger is not a good goal. Let's list the very classic battles to break the sky, victory in the clan competition→successful admission→acquisition of strange fire→dominance of the academy→… The big goal of "becoming stronger" is divided into many very clear stages and small goals. Each time you complete a new goal, you can provide a wave of cool points. Finally, there is the description of the supporting characters. The description of the characters is relatively thin, the characters are not three-dimensional enough, and the characters are somewhat flat. Writing some of them individually does not need to be three-dimensional, but some characters that run through the main line have flat personalities, which will lead to insufficient content to write. This is purely a personal opinion. The author needs to polish his writing skills slowly and slowly. This book will definitely be good after being written well. Come on, come on [top post] It can be said that I have caught up with the progress. This novel is a slow-burning novel. The first few chapters may not be as exciting as other novels, but the more you read, the more exciting and delicate this novel becomes. Different from most of the novels I usually read, the fighting scenes are just skipped with a few superficial movements. This one is more like martial arts, and the movements are graphic. Just reading the text can feel the thrill of punching to the flesh, especially the chapter where Mu Feng uses boxing skills, which looks very enjoyable. The action scenes are not just about shouting out the name of the move and releasing sound and light effects, but there are also detailed body movements, which can make the picture pop out in people's minds. Next is the relationship between supernatural beings and people. There is no absolute hostility between monsters and heroes. People are divided into good and bad, and supernatural beings should also be distinguished. Unlike some other spiritual energy revivals, where supernatural beings and people fight to the death, and fight passionately when they meet. There are also scenes of mutual help and harmonious coexistence between humans and supernatural beings. I really like this kind of duality.

It's quite good. In this era where systematic harem stories are everywhere, I can be considered one of those flowers. The plot is very tight, the writing is also very good, and the appeal is very strong. It's even better than Zhanshen.

It's well written. I'm very curious about the development of the plot. Where does Sakaki come from and what is his purpose? This is one of the highlights. It's much more awesome than the system. There are many mysteries. This is also the most attractive point to me.

Because I read it very carefully, I have only read about twenty chapters so far. But the content is still relatively fresh. The psychological changes of the characters and the changes in the scenes are described in detail, and people can clearly associate with the scene, which is great! The presence of God feels like an old man in a certain ring! Anyway, I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the protagonist has a ruthless and ruthless style, the Madonna-type character is the most annoying! The most important thing! I haven't seen the heroine yet, so I give this a big thumbs up👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻! Big cheers for the author! ! ! ! !

It's really good-looking. As a new writer, it's very interesting.

Super good-looking~ The beginning is completely different from the common novels nowadays. The writing is very detailed and the psychological activities are described very well. It can still produce a sense of picture when you calm down and read it. Come on, author~ It will get better and better~ I believe it will be a big hit in the future! ! ! !

The writing is very good, the characters are rich and the characters are clear. It is one of the few novels that has no system, no time travel, and no rebirth. When reading this kind of novel, you can also feel the intimacy. There are many funny plots in the book. The protagonist has rich personality and you can see the growth process. The setting of Sakaki is also original. When the plot is rarely weak, the author has a great imagination and the book is very sustainable. Although as a new author, the popularity is low, but it will definitely become popular in the future.

The pace is not that fast, but the characters, environment, and battle scenes are all described in detail and in great detail. It's a good book worth reading.

This book is definitely a rare masterpiece. It may be a little dull in the early stage, but the subsequent content is very exciting, the plot rhythm is also well grasped, basically all the holes that need to be filled are filled, the character portrayal and psychological transformation are also reasonable, the emotional scenes may be a little dull, but overall it is quite good. Overall, as long as the book doesn't end badly and follows the general direction of the plot, I think it'll be fine. (A little suggestion: There are too many skills for the protagonist. Many of the skills did not appear a few times in the later period, which seems a bit too big to lose. You can try skill fusion or even power fusion. In this way, no matter how many skills there are, no one will care about how many skill slots the protagonist has.)

The writing is delicate and the characterization is great, especially the details. It's very comfortable to read, it's my favorite type [Sending my heart] There are really no characters that make readers uncomfortable. Whether they are supporting characters or protagonists, they are all unique and interesting.

The emojis are so cute, the writing is quite fluent, the story structure is okay, and the most surprising thing is the character development, keep up the good work! ! (＞◡❛)

I gave it 5 stars. I have read this book several times. I saw so many words but I was too lazy to read it. I read it today when I had nothing to do. It is quite good. The single female protagonist suits my taste. Although the writing style is not as stunning as those of the great masters, it is plain and simple. It also describes the character's personality very well. Not to mention how sophisticated the writing style is, at least it surpasses most of the authors of Tomato.

It's quite good, but the author isn't confident yet, even though his writing is so good. The writing is very detailed. After searching for so long, I finally found another book that suits my taste. The last one was God Killing, and the update was very slow at the end of the day. I hope the author will finish it as soon as possible so that I can read enough in one sitting.

The description is very delicate, I like this feeling very much, please come on

This book is well written, with three correct views, a solid narrative, and layers of chapters. It has a clear understanding of the mythical world of China. It is also a good book that promotes the spirit of patriotism and advocates a community with a shared future for mankind!

My personal preference is that it would be better if the accusations of each group of the Twelve Crests were introduced in one place, but overall it is pretty good. The plot is very compact, not too long, and can be followed. The plot is very direct and the content is quite rich.

It's not bad. The text feels a bit too vernacular, and the description of the same expression is too simple. Like the wry smile before, the smile can also be a laugh, or a hearty laugh. To be more straightforward, it can also be holding your stomach and laughing so hard that you can't stand up. The vocabulary should be richer. Write slowly. I feel that the author's attitude is quite serious. Come on.

This book is very good. The male protagonist has very upright views. Although there are occasional minor problems in the plot, it is innocuous. At least the writing style will not appear childish. Friends who are not good at reading can give it a try (the author's request for book review is really pitiful. Please help you) [Cool]

The story about the revival of spiritual energy and the setting of dual souls are relatively new. Actually, I am not interested in the invincibility of the dual souls in it. I am just jealous of the ring. Give it to me, brother, and I will take you to a picnic.

The author's writing style is very good. It is rare to see such wonderful novels on Tomato. It's a pity that I like multiple female protagonists, just two or three. Brothers who like single female protagonists, don't miss it, this is a good book. I'll save it on my bookshelf first, and I'll look at it later when the books become scarce!

It's very well written. Good luck, author, but I have a few suggestions. I always feel that your way of writing emotional lines is a bit unfamiliar. I find it a bit embarrassing in some places. Maybe it's my problem. Keep up the good work~

It's really good to read. I feel that the score is quite strange. It's not like this. In my opinion, it's at least 9.3. Friends who are book-hungry can come and take a look. It's really good. The author is also very careful. I hope everyone will support it. At least it will give people the motivation to continue coding [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

The writing is good, it can be considered top-notch in Tomato. The content is very slow, and the golden three chapters are not handled well, making it a bit boring to read, but after the ten chapters it becomes good. You can learn from the Lost City of Alien Beasts, it doesn't have to be passionate, but setting up more suspense will make it more fascinating. The author is a bit like someone who writes physical books. The paragraphs are very long, so remember to divide them into more paragraphs. It's not brainless, and has very few poisonous points. I don't know why the score is less than eight. I originally wanted to give it a nine (I would give it an 8.5 Or above if I can stand it), so I'll give it a ten to improve my score.

The world view is okay, the characters are well created, and I personally don't hate the emojis ヽ(￣▽￣)ﾉIt appears more frequently in the early stage and less frequently in the later stage, probably to take care of readers who don't like it, (~￣▽￣)~The description of the protagonist is also very good. I'm ready to continue reading. If necessary, I will review it ୧⍢⃝୨ After reading Chapter 153, the review (only my personal opinion, not to start a fight), the author can probably give more consideration to the character dialogue and inner monologue. It can be seen that these two points mostly serve the character shaping of the task or lay down the positive/negative foreshadowing for the subsequent chapters, but sometimes I feel that it seems to be a bit "too strong". For example, some dialogues can be streamlined or some parts can be deleted. Currently, I feel that these two aspects have the above problems at least in the first 150 chapters. In addition, some descriptions are too colloquial, resulting in a lack of three-dimensionality in the tasks or plots. It may be because the author updates 5,000 words a day and is busy with his main business and does not have much energy. However, this does not have a great impact on reading, but readers who have accumulated a certain amount of reading in Tomato may abandon the book because of such problems. I myself have had similar thoughts but I still keep reading. Finally, I wish the author can realize his novel dream through this book or draw a good ending to his dream (ง •_•)ง

It's really good. What's different from other books is that the details are handled very carefully, which is also known as leaving very good white space. After reading it, if you think about it for a while, the picture that the author wants to express will appear all at once, and it's not unreasonable. It's really good.

Very nice, come on author, you can do it

It's a very good book in the Reiki Resurrection stream, but it's just that the personality of the protagonist is a bit different before and after the practice. Previously, because of the death of his parents, his personality was relatively cold and aloof. After confirming the practice, the brain developed and the protagonist suddenly became very detached. I felt that the transition was a little fast. I didn't react and it felt like the protagonist was a different person. But I got used to it after reading it. The story setting and battle scenes are very good. Come on, the author, the results will gradually improve.

I have read Chapter 94 so far The story is very good and there is also an emotional line The author does not need to belittle himself, even if it is to fulfill his wish, it is still much better than other water authors. I can't write enough words to praise you, but I have been reading novels for 7/8 years, and I think this novel is very good.

The author's writing is relatively fresh, different from other similar works of the same period, and does not follow blindly [laughs] Can you please not write a single female protagonist? Books with single female protagonists often have too many emotional scenes, either no female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. Too many emotional dramas are not only disgusting for the author, but also for us readers.

Five stars, very good. Except for the first few chapters, it is a bit difficult to get into the mood. But as long as you persist through the beginning, you will not be able to stop at all. In a place like Tomato, which has a large number of mindless articles, it is not easy to find this novel. I highly recommend it. It is more than just this rating.