I Wanted to Be a Teacher, but Was Forced to Join the Twelve Crests

Now that I have seen it, I feel it is a mid-to-high-end novel. The setting is quite good. It includes spiritual energy recovery, supernatural recovery, spiritual ruins development, killing spirit beasts to obtain spirit beads, and absorption of promotions. There are no big problems with the setting. But there are some minor flaws in the writing, and it appears to be a new author. Most of the current text revolves around the protagonist. There is little background preparation, the driving force for the advancement of the story is not obvious, and the description of the supporting characters is slightly thin. The setting of the background can be more detailed. There is no need to explain it separately. It can explain the international situation, the development of Lingxu, the prosperity of Buddhism and Taoism, etc. The content of the story can be richer, and there can also be foreshadowing. Then the main driving force for the advancement of the story is not very clear. The protagonist wants to know the truth about the death of his parents and the origin of Sakaki. Then the criteria for completing these tasks are not very clear, but simply becoming stronger is not a good goal. Let's list the very classic battles to break the sky, victory in the clan competition→successful admission→acquisition of strange fire→dominance of the academy→… The big goal of "becoming stronger" is divided into many very clear stages and small goals. Each time you complete a new goal, you can provide a wave of cool points. Finally, there is the description of the supporting characters. The description of the characters is relatively thin, the characters are not three-dimensional enough, and the characters are somewhat flat. Writing some of them individually does not need to be three-dimensional, but some characters that run through the main line have flat personalities, which will lead to insufficient content to write. This is purely a personal opinion. The author needs to polish his writing skills slowly and slowly. This book will definitely be good after being written well. Come on, come on [top post] It can be said that I have caught up with the progress. This novel is a slow-burning novel. The first few chapters may not be as exciting as other novels, but the more you read, the more exciting and delicate this novel becomes. Different from most of the novels I usually read, the fighting scenes are just skipped with a few superficial movements. This one is more like martial arts, and the movements are graphic. Just reading the text can feel the thrill of punching to the flesh, especially the chapter where Mu Feng uses boxing skills, which looks very enjoyable. The action scenes are not just about shouting out the name of the move and releasing sound and light effects, but there are also detailed body movements, which can make the picture pop out in people's minds. Next is the relationship between supernatural beings and people. There is no absolute hostility between monsters and heroes. People are divided into good and bad, and supernatural beings should also be distinguished. Unlike some other spiritual energy revivals, where supernatural beings and people fight to the death, and fight passionately when they meet. There are also scenes of mutual help and harmonious coexistence between humans and supernatural beings. I really like this kind of duality.

It's quite good. In this era where systematic harem stories are everywhere, I can be considered one of those flowers. The plot is very tight, the writing is also very good, and the appeal is very strong. It's even better than Zhanshen.

It's well written. I'm very curious about the development of the plot. Where does Sakaki come from and what is his purpose? This is one of the highlights. It's much more awesome than the system. There are many mysteries. This is also the most attractive point to me.

Because I read it very carefully, I have only read about twenty chapters so far. But the content is still relatively fresh. The psychological changes of the characters and the changes in the scenes are described in detail, and people can clearly associate with the scene, which is great! The presence of God feels like an old man in a certain ring! Anyway, I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the protagonist has a ruthless and ruthless style, the Madonna-type character is the most annoying! The most important thing! I haven't seen the heroine yet, so I give this a big thumbs up👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻! Big cheers for the author! ! ! ! !

It's really good-looking. As a new writer, it's very interesting.

Super good-looking~ The beginning is completely different from the common novels nowadays. The writing is very detailed and the psychological activities are described very well. It can still produce a sense of picture when you calm down and read it. Come on, author~ It will get better and better~ I believe it will be a big hit in the future! ! ! !

The writing is very good, the characters are rich and the characters are clear. It is one of the few novels that has no system, no time travel, and no rebirth. When reading this kind of novel, you can also feel the intimacy. There are many funny plots in the book. The protagonist has rich personality and you can see the growth process. The setting of Sakaki is also original. When the plot is rarely weak, the author has a great imagination and the book is very sustainable. Although as a new author, the popularity is low, but it will definitely become popular in the future.

The pace is not that fast, but the characters, environment, and battle scenes are all described in detail and in great detail. It's a good book worth reading.

This book is definitely a rare masterpiece. It may be a little dull in the early stage, but the subsequent content is very exciting, the plot rhythm is also well grasped, basically all the holes that need to be filled are filled, the character portrayal and psychological transformation are also reasonable, the emotional scenes may be a little dull, but overall it is quite good. Overall, as long as the book doesn't end badly and follows the general direction of the plot, I think it'll be fine. (A little suggestion: There are too many skills for the protagonist. Many of the skills did not appear a few times in the later period, which seems a bit too big to lose. You can try skill fusion or even power fusion. In this way, no matter how many skills there are, no one will care about how many skill slots the protagonist has.)

The writing is delicate and the characterization is great, especially the details. It's very comfortable to read, it's my favorite type [Sending my heart] There are really no characters that make readers uncomfortable. Whether they are supporting characters or protagonists, they are all unique and interesting.