A Body Bearing Two Souls

Now that I have seen it, I feel it is a mid-to-high-end novel. The setting is quite good. It includes spiritual energy recovery, supernatural recovery, spiritual ruins development, killing spirit beasts to obtain spirit beads, and absorption of promotions. There are no big problems with the setting. But there are some minor flaws in the writing, and it appears to be a new author. Most of the current text revolves around the protagonist. There is little background preparation, the driving force for the advancement of the story is not obvious, and the description of the supporting characters is slightly thin. The setting of the background can be more detailed. There is no need to explain it separately. It can explain the international situation, the development of Lingxu, the prosperity of Buddhism and Taoism, etc. The content of the story can be richer, and there can also be foreshadowing. Then the main driving force for the advancement of the story is not very clear. The protagonist wants to know the truth about the death of his parents and the origin of Sakaki. Then the criteria for completing these tasks are not very clear, but simply becoming stronger is not a good goal. Let's list the very classic battles to break the sky, victory in the clan competition→successful admission→acquisition of strange fire→dominance of the academy→… The big goal of "becoming stronger" is divided into many very clear stages and small goals. Each time you complete a new goal, you can provide a wave of cool points. Finally, there is the description of the supporting characters. The description of the characters is relatively thin, the characters are not three-dimensional enough, and the characters are somewhat flat. Writing some of them individually does not need to be three-dimensional, but some characters that run through the main line have flat personalities, which will lead to insufficient content to write. This is purely a personal opinion. The author needs to polish his writing skills slowly and slowly. This book will definitely be good after being written well. Come on, come on [top post] It can be said that I have caught up with the progress. This novel is a slow-burning novel. The first few chapters may not be as exciting as other novels, but the more you read, the more exciting and delicate this novel becomes. Different from most of the novels I usually read, the fighting scenes are just skipped with a few superficial movements. This one is more like martial arts, and the movements are graphic. Just reading the text can feel the thrill of punching to the flesh, especially the chapter where Mu Feng uses boxing skills, which looks very enjoyable. The action scenes are not just about shouting out the name of the move and releasing sound and light effects, but there are also detailed body movements, which can make the picture pop out in people's minds. Next is the relationship between supernatural beings and people. There is no absolute hostility between monsters and heroes. People are divided into good and bad, and supernatural beings should also be distinguished. Unlike some other spiritual energy revivals, where supernatural beings and people fight to the death, and fight passionately when they meet. There are also scenes of mutual help and harmonious coexistence between humans and supernatural beings. I really like this kind of duality.

It's quite good. In this era where systematic harem stories are everywhere, I can be considered one of those flowers. The plot is very tight, the writing is also very good, and the appeal is very strong. It's even better than Zhanshen.

This book was due to a shortage of books at the time, and I saw the author commenting and sharing it in other books, so I fell in love with it. Unexpectedly, it got out of hand, Mu Feng's growth history, the change of mentality, from introverted and autistic to cheerful and lively, meeting friends, comrades, lovers, and elders who regarded it as their own, and Sakaki's constant companionship. This book is very interesting and I will definitely continue to read it. I hope you can work hard and pay attention to your health so that it doesn't end badly. Throw flowers🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

It's well written. I'm very curious about the development of the plot. Where does Sakaki come from and what is his purpose? This is one of the highlights. It's much more awesome than the system. There are many mysteries. This is also the most attractive point to me.

Because I read it very carefully, I have only read about twenty chapters so far. But the content is still relatively fresh. The psychological changes of the characters and the changes in the scenes are described in detail, and people can clearly associate with the scene, which is great! The presence of God feels like an old man in a certain ring! Anyway, I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the protagonist has a ruthless and ruthless style, the Madonna-type character is the most annoying! The most important thing! I haven't seen the heroine yet, so I give this a big thumbs up👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻Like👍🏻! Big cheers for the author!!!!!

It's really good-looking. As a new writer, it's very interesting.

Super good-looking~ The beginning is completely different from the common novels nowadays. The writing is very detailed and the psychological activities are described very well. It can still produce a sense of picture when you calm down and read it. Come on, author~ It will get better and better~ I believe it will be a big hit in the future!!!!

It's pretty good. Compared with other traditional power books, this one doesn't focus on upgrading and fighting monsters like others. It focuses on explaining major events. Every major thing the protagonist accomplishes has great significance. It's also not as fast-paced as other power books. Every time a thing is accomplished, There is a paragraph that is equivalent to a description of ordinary life. Zhan Shen is indeed very interesting, but its rhythm is too tight, and it will be very tiring after reading it for a long time. Not only Zhan Shen, most of the supernatural novels have a very tight rhythm. This book has a very tight pace when doing things, but it is more relaxed in ordinary life. But to be honest, I don't like the second half very much, because the second half is a bit tense (The Kingdom of Gods is coming), and there are too many gods coming down, which causes a lot of pressure on the protagonist and makes me a lot of pressure. But this is not the author's problem, but everyone's opinion is different. I think the second half is a bit tense, and other readers may find it exciting. In addition, the combat power is not broken, which is quite good, but one thing is still not good, that is, for the level of Daotian, it is not particularly powerful in the later stage. The description of the level of Daotian is quite good, but in the later stage, Daotian's power cannot be felt when Daotian fights. Regarding the current rhythm of this book, it has just been described to the point where Daotian needs to appear. I think the author can describe the battle of Daotian better, because Daotian has just appeared. You can also rethink how to write Daotian, but if the author has already coded many chapters and cannot change it, then there is really nothing that can be done, but this can also show from the side that the author has many Save the chapter, but the author just couldn't bear to post it🍉. Of course, these questions are also my personal opinion. I wrote these questions just to see what the author said, because the author really knows how to reply🤦. When later readers see my comment, they also think that the questions I mentioned are reasonable, so they can take a look at the author's reply. The book is written by the author, and his understanding must be different from us. When subsequent readers see these questions of mine, they can judge whether these problems exist based on the author's reply. In addition, this book should be the author's first book. If it is really the first book, then the evaluation of this book will be very high. It is really good. To be honest, I am looking forward to the author's second book because I feel that the second book will be more rigorous than this one, with a better plot and better characters. Also, I actually think Ji Changge is more suitable to be the heroine. I wonder if anyone else feels the same🍉

How should I put it? In fact, it may not be that amazing. The writing may not be as good as those of the great writers, but it kept me reading without skipping chapters. I think it deserves five stars. You can give it a try. It is a little troublesome to read the male protagonist at the beginning. After all, it was really a bit toothy when there was nothing. I only reviewed the book when there were 60 chapters left to read. I saw the author asking for book reviews earlier. I also said that I would finish the review after finishing 60 chapters. It turned out that I might have finished reading 60 chapters in a while (I personally read books faster). So I thought I would raise a pig, and then I saw the notice saying that I would give it to a book reviewer. I had nothing to do and I gave it to me. Who told me that I still owe the author a book review? Hahaha You can give it a try. I can't guarantee that everyone will like it, but there is still something to read.

It's quite interesting to watch a little bit, everyone should come and take a look. It's a very good book, so there's not much I haven't read yet. If you haven't read it, I highly recommend reading it.