Transform into *********

I read a few chapters at the beginning and then at the back. It has been revised well, but there are still a few points that the author still doesn't seem to care about. 1. The description of the character's appearance seems to be lacking. 2. Description of character expressions and environment description. 3 Language organization. / Of course, I have only read the latest few chapters, and you are welcome to add anything you may have missed. [Thinking] I looked at it again and saw why the first few chapters only had more than 1,000 words, but Chapter 7 had so many words.

How to say it? You are not just water, you are sea water

First time rating.........? I forgot too