Age of Empires: Begin with Warlords

It's pretty good but a little lacking.

The subject matter is good, but the author noticed that some parts are illogical and very secondary [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The writing is quite satisfactory. Pretty good. Come on author! Come on, come on, come on! ●███▄▄▄▄▄▄ ●●●●●● ▄▅██████▅▄▃▂ ██████████████ ◥⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲◤

If you have enough troops, you can divide your troops to set up an ambush, while another unit goes straight to the bandit's nest, and you can also set up another ambush on the way back to the bandit's nest! Let the bandit soldiers be tired of running away, gradually lose their courage, and lose all their energy. At this time, if you encircle and suppress them again, you can force them to surrender! If the bandit leader does not surrender, a heavy reward will be set. Anyone who takes the bandit's head and body will be rewarded with XXX oceans, fields and houses!

It looks fine so far, I hope it won't be too outrageous in the future.

Not bad, come on, author!

Not bad, why is the rating so low?

Not bad, five stars for you!

Yes, she is the heroine

Come on, come on, I support you

Can the author tell me if the uniforms of country D soldiers summoned by the system are the same as those of local country D soldiers?

Come on! It's confusing in some places, but it's still okay

Very exciting, keep up the good work

Well written, keep up the writing

Writing is not easy, so work hard

The plot is very exciting, but some of the sentences are not smooth. The author needs to work harder.