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The author is great, I like this kind of book It's short and weak, please give me some help from the author.

I personally think it's very good and well written, but it's too short and not enough to read.

Come on, author, you are so awesome! (ง•̀_•́)ง, This plot [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering] I just want to see how you come back in the future [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's pretty, but too short. Not enough.

Reversing the family members, the child in Gan Yu's belly is mine. The protagonist has nothing to do with Gan Yu. And no one wants the protagonist. I also took back the ability I gave him and made him a useless person [Chigua] [Chigua]

Author, five stars have been given, bookshelf has been added, and gifts have been given. I just hope that I don't want a harem. Even if I accept a harem, I have never confessed to it before. After all, this kind of sadistic plot seems to be the most enjoyable [laughter][laughter]

It's very interesting. At present, the main development of the article is the harem. After all, after the confrontation between Shido and Makoto comes out, the general direction of the article is almost determined. Some readers think that the male protagonist is a bit of a bastard if he opens a harem again. This is indeed a problem. But if there is no harem, what will be the positioning of other female characters? At that time, it will become the daily life of the male protagonist and Gan Yu. I'm just an average reader, so it depends on the author's recommendations.

I don't know what to say either? That's it! [Laughing evilly] After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. Gradually it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining heavily. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer keep my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who am I looking down on in the next few chapters!

Let me summarize it for everyone. The introduction clearly mentions the plot of You Tianli, so I am very much looking forward to the author writing in the direction of the harem. I will definitely write this part of the plot explaining Tianli. I hope the author's writing is strong enough not to collapse. It is a good book.

Books are always the best in my mind. The author will always be in my heart. I hope the author's life in Teyvat does not have as many regrets as in the novel. Take care, author.

Harem, harem, must harem! ! ! ! No harem: yes! Nice! Mars! Bus! Change us! (Evil sound)

To be honest, I don't know why, but I feel that the harem is a bit um, I can't put it into words, I don't like it very much. Anyway, I hope I won't have a harem. Be single-minded.

It looks good, but the description of Gan Yu is a bit lacking. There should be more description of the main palace [shy]

My senses are good so far. I look forward to the time when the protagonist discovers other people's feelings.

I like this book very much. It's rare that Genshin Impact fan fiction can be written to such an extent. At least it's very comfortable to read.

Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival in 2023. If it were replaced by Teywat Festival, it should be the Moon-by-Moon Festival. Well... I wish you a happy Lunar Festival over there in Teyvat [laughs].

May the deceased rest in peace. Your spirit will be passed down forever. . . [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I believe he will continue to write this story in another world. So that he wouldn't be in such pain again. If I don't go to Teyvat, may there be no tuberculosis in heaven. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Although it is short, weak and discontinuous, the character's personality fits Genshin Impact and the emotional description is also very good. It's just that the protagonist's ability is too sudden for Ultraman. By the way: May peace be in heaven. I hope I can read this complete article wherever I am in a few decades.

Brothers, I really like the character of Gan Yu in this book😍Gulu Gulu Rolls Down the Mountain Zhenjun (♡˙˙♡) But because of this, the harem is a little hard for me to accept, ah! But I understand the author. According to the current plot, the harem should be the most suitable, otherwise it won't be possible to write, so don't worry about what I say. The author can just write according to his own ideas. And everyone, don't sneeze at me, please orz.

This article is very good, or it can be said that I have sympathy for the author from the bottom of my heart. The novel is very good and I like it very much. Maybe I still have a little luck in my heart. After removing it, I came back to find this book a few weeks later. I used to think about it on nights when no one was with me, imagining that I was the protagonist in a world that made me dream. I happily and freely brought myself into the role. I was lucky that he would change, but I was disappointed. He didn't, but I know the reason and there is no need to be obsessed. @ May you continue your unfinished story in Teyvat.

May the ruler of the wind watch over him and grant him the determination to "fight" May the ruler of the rock look upon his body and grant him an "immortal" body May the Ruler of Thunder watch over him and grant him "eternal" time May the ruler of grass look over his body and grant him the favor of "wisdom" May the ruler of water look at his body and grant him the glory of "self" May the prodigal son wandering in another world Be blessed forever To the author

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The author wishes you a good time in Teyvat, goodbye, and may there be no tuberculosis in heaven Dear tit, please bring my arrows, my flowers, and my love to the lonely journey˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

Although there is no intersection, reading this book is also the intersection of fate. No matter what the situation, no matter what position, we should mourn in silence. May the world be healthy and peaceful. May the people who are related to this book and those who read it have a safe and worry-free life. Finally, I apologize for what I did. I just saw the news and took it as a joke. I apologize for my indifference.

A very nice book. It's a pity that the author is no longer here. I hope he can complete the rest of his trip in Teyvat.

I think this book lacks an element of yellow hair, including bringing all the sad heroines into the harem [OK] [laughing evilly] [Like]

Well written, I hope it won't become a harem

If you torture me more, I can't bear it at all. Maybe it's because I'm a bit emotional and my tear glands are relatively developed. It hurts. It's really too painful. After the pain, I feel a little better [laughing] So if you torture me more, it's very ki mo ji. I still want more ~ [laughing evilly] Also, Sero is too dramatic, Susan! [Anger]

I wish you a bright future in your next life, and may you find your sweet rain. I'm back, I wish you meet your own sweet rain in the next life.

I have read the book, and it is really well written. I have been searching for this book for a long time, but the author has not updated it. I only found out after reading the comment area... Good luck all the way.