I Cultivated for Billions of Years in the Primordial Realm and Was Invincible from the Start

The writing is still very good, but the timeline of the prehistoric era is not clear (the prehistoric timeline: Pangu opened the sky - ferocious beasts measured the calamity - Long Han measured the calamity (i. E. The war between the three clans) - the battle between immortals and demons (afterwards Hongjun became a saint) - Hongjun preached - Six Saints Hengkong - the lich measured the calamity - the gods measured the calamity - the journey to the west measured the calamity - the end of the law calamity) The Two Saints of the West were born between the war between immortals and demons and Hongjun's sermon. He did not know that the spiritual veins of the West were destroyed during the war between immortals and demons, so Hongjun plotted against Hongyun and Kunpeng to repay the cause and effect. Between the Lich Measuring Tribulation and the Conferring God Measuring Tribulation, there are still: the return of the Three Emperors and the arrival of the Five Emperors Conferring the Gods to Measure the Tribulation - Journey to the West to Measure the Tribulation There is another event (not sure if it counts as a prehistoric event): Zulong restored the emperor (that is, Ying Zheng swore on Mount Tai that he wanted to restore the throne of the human emperor between heaven and earth, and he was named the First Emperor. However, the name of the human emperor was abolished, so he collapsed in the sand dunes under the power of heaven and earth)

Great 👍🏻

The low rating is not unreasonable. I don't know how to use punctuation marks. The writing is the same as the narration. The format is very uncomfortable to read. I couldn't stand it after eight chapters. It's too tiring and messy. First watch the formatting and punctuation used by other authors before writing, otherwise no one will read your article no matter how good it is.

Although I like this kind of subject matter, invincibility does not need to be hidden, and there is no need to use any disgusting plot to suppress the realm, let alone any garbage clones. But, author, can you use quotation marks correctly?

I finished reading it in one go. The title and the content fit very well. The protagonist is invincible at the beginning. One thing I like very much is that the protagonist relies on training to become invincible, instead of becoming capable by doing nothing like other books. So far, the plot is very smooth. If you ignore the occasional punctuation errors, it can be regarded as a good Hongmeng book. 💕💕

Can you write without a second perspective? It feels like listening to other people's stories.

It looks good, but why is there no punctuation mark?

Chaos? Don't know what to write? It's a mess, it's a mess. Hongmeng came over and said, Chaos comes here and Honghuang comes, and here comes the Tribulation Dragon, Phoenix, and Kirin, and now it's the Lich Tribulation and now it's the Conferred Gods List?

It's very good. The main character's strength is yyds. I like this kind of invincible novel very much. It's very enjoyable to read, but it's just a bit unreadable. [Laughing] [laughing]

There are no highlights. The first part was better. After seeing the end of the world, I didn't want to watch it. There was no sense of immersion. It felt like the theme of accepting an apprentice. When you enter a world, you only accept a disciple and it's always a matryoshka.