She Is the Heartthrob of Kuaiwen and Is Eye-Catching

I hope that the heroine can always be aloof and incapable of love. It is those who work hard and use all means to get her (I have always preferred the flower of the high mountain, np text) In addition, in fact, the first world structure written by Da Da is quite good. Even the ending is short and there is no follow-up. In addition, you can write down the parts that you think are exciting in detail. If you are not sure, you can write according to the author's feelings. Trust your intuition. Finally, I hope you can be yourself! ! ! The big structure itself is amazing! ! ! Just be yourself! ! !

It's a very good heartthrob story. The heroine's IQ is online, and the story is relatively logical. Except for the fact that the system encourages the heroine to engage in some bloody operations. Although I like to read it, the system is really a bit cheap. Overall, it's pretty good. The heroine is very beautiful and has a very cold and indifferent personality. She is not in the mood for love, she is just for the task. She is very dedicated and quits after finishing the plot. She is very decisive and never lingers. I really love her! However, being decisive also resulted in the ending of the story being hasty and ending abruptly. I feel like it could have been written in more detail and explained the ending a little bit. As a heartthrob, the heroine will not hang around those men unless the task requires it, but the heroine will not wrong herself when doing tasks. The heroine always has the advantage, which is very nice. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Can the system gather CP appropriately? It's really not okay to keep interfering with the heroine's thoughts and actions. Some other stories ended too hastily. Anyway, I still hope there will be an ending, a beginning and an end. The writing is very messy, anticlimactic...

The heroine has a very good character, she is capable, charming, powerful, ruthless, her mission comes first, she is seasoned with love, and she is a very charming heartthrob. In fact, if the author changes some things, it will easily become popular if the heroine is used. What's more, the author's writing style is pretty good. There are many reasons why it is not popular ①The plot is incomplete, the small world ends abruptly, and there is no ending ②Some small worlds are written halfway and then abandoned, then they start over and write new ones, and then abandon them again. I guess because the number of dramas is not good, it is normal for the data of new authors and new books to be poor. At this time, the author only needs to work hard to update regularly. When a certain number of articles are written, the data will naturally be high. But the author is arrogant. This kind of abandonment behavior can easily make readers impatient, and the data will naturally be poor. It is a vicious cycle. ③Some small worlds are written with content that suddenly crosses into other small worlds in the middle. It is very messy and can easily make readers lose their patience. It would be better to finish one small world and then write the next one. It would be better to add an extra chapter. ④ If the author has no confidence in himself, the readers will naturally not trust the author. They subconsciously label the book as unsightly, and then subconsciously find faults and abandon the book. To be honest, this book can be successful based on the heroine's design. Depending on the heroine's design, it will be successful no matter it is about strong women, heartthrobs, scumbags, multiple male protagonists, etc., Not to mention the very popular fast time travel. Many people like fast time travel. It's a pity. If the author still wants to write an article, you can read my opinion.

Your own children are the best in the eyes of your parents

Good-looking is good-looking. I just feel like I can't say anything about it.

I really like it. If anyone hasn't read it, I will be sad. If you don't give it five stars, I will cry. The author is really good🌹🌹🌹

I like the heroine's character very much. It's so good. I also like the plot. I can make the next one soon. The author will update it well. I'm urging you to update it here.

The author you write is in the clouds [Thinking]

I like big books, good reading

The hole you opened is over before it is filled in, ah ah ah

It's very interesting, but some of the stories were left unfinished and left some holes.

How can I put it? It feels good. But I think the first few pictures look better. Looking forward to those follow-ups.

It's well written, it's a GB novel, and the heroine's character needs to be perfected, so don't keep updating it.