Thanks for the invite. I'm in Yugakure and have just put together a crew. Regarding the recent uproar over Minato's nighttime visit to the pleasure quarter, I happened to interview someone involved. Now, I'll let you in on some details that few people know.
The courtesan: “I'd just finished a day of practice and had returned to my room to rest. As I was changing out of my dance costume, I suddenly heard a loud crash behind the screen. Startled, I fell to the floor. When I turned around, a handsome young man with blond hair and blue eyes emerged from the billowing purplish-red smoke. He... very courteously helped me up. At first, I thought some fanatical dance fan had broken in, so I sent the guards who came running away and wanted to have a chat with him. I hoped he would meet me through the proper channels. If he was interested, I wouldn't be opposed to...”
“Oh, so you had your eye on him, huh? By the way, wasn't there a potted plant behind your screen?”
“How did you know, sir?”
“Now I get it. So that's where the potted plant in the middle of the open-air bathhouse went. And here I was, going out of my way to set up a special entrance effect for him.”
“Sir...” The courtesan discreetly slipped him a stack of banknotes. “When this gets published in the paper, could you touch it up a little?”
Shin felt the thickness of the banknotes. “A woman who left the Yellow Flash utterly lovestruck. How does that sound for a headline?”
Even though I know you won't write anymore, I still want to give you a quick update. Both the writing and the plot are quite good.
Not bad, the imagination is good, and there is no common hostility. The story is well told, please try to update it.
Come on
Yes, the plot setting is a bit immature but still watchable