System Malfunction: I'm Scrambling to Get My Internship Credits in the Cultivation World

This novel is really good and a treasure. The plot of the novel is a bit like the Black Lotus strategy manual (don't criticize me)

Witnessing the growth of this book, Qingqun and Gu Shili rushed to both sides without hesitation. Their love lasted for a long time, and they were not afraid of the time and space apart. Qingqun is really trying to improve her cultivation to protect Shili, and is not just a dodder flower in the past. The jade hand holds the mirror and raises the smoky eyebrows, and the green skirt is rolled up in the strong wind. Live up to the encounter, live up to each other

A very good-looking novel, the story line is also very complete and tight. It feels like the villains in each story are three-dimensional. Whether it is Huai Min or the Dragon Girl Mei Niang, they all have cause and effect. There is no simple good or bad. I think this novel is very conscientious and I recommend it [get it] [send my heart] [send my heart] It's been a long time since I've read a novel. This one is really like it. But every time I read it, I keep forgetting the previous plot [face covering], but the novel is very good.

Really pretty! ! It's just that the male protagonist doesn't look like a yandere, more like a tsundere boy, but he's still very good-looking! ! The male protagonist also doesn't like the original female protagonist. Super poke me! ! I hate the kind of people who really like the original heroine. Recommended! ! ! I have a very picky taste! This is the third article that Tomato has allowed me to read to the end! ! Really recommended! ! No loss in investing! ! !

Hateful! It's so abominable! Such a good article, but so few people read it on Tomato, and the rating is so low. It's really a pity. (óò｡) I rarely see stories in Tomato where the male protagonist wants to kill the female protagonist at the beginning, and Mrs. Orange is a breath of fresh air among them! (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡(Omit my love for oranges here) I originally wanted to wait and see it again, but I just couldn't help it anymore. It really suits my taste! This novel is really different from other yandere novels! It's really super pretty! The heroine is not innocent and sweet! She has her own thoughts and won't just revolve around the male protagonist! He does his best to complete the task. Hahaha, I really like the character of Willful Little Green Tea! The plot of Orange is also very well written! The only drawback is that updates are a bit slow Finally, I would like to make some suggestions: Can Orange shorten the copy? I took a look, and there are now 114 chapters in total, but I have only completed three dungeons and the fourth one has just been opened. I think the dungeon is a bit too long and makes people impatient (annoyed). Also, is the "spiritual weapon levels are divided into heaven, earth, black and yellow" in Chapter 7 wrong? Shouldn't the correct order be "The levels of spiritual weapons are divided into Huangxuan Heaven and Earth"? (My wife should be from eldest to youngest, but I think most people think it is from childhood to eldest. I am also like this, which leads to the fact that I can't understand the following chapters at all (இωஇ) Finally, I wish Mrs. Orange will recover from her fever soon! Books can become more and more popular🔥! There is a slight bug in the sentence, because I am so excited to post a long comment for the first time, please don't mind it, thank you! ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶ Editor 3: Let's see how many hours we watched in total. Part 4: 2023.7.19 It's over, it's over, it's finally over

I declare it here! ! ! This is the best book I've read this year! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I don't know why no one is watching [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] I don't allow it! ! ! ! ! I hope it won't end badly [crying] I love my wife! ! ! ! My wife is great! ! ! ! ! ! !

Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. How can I put it? Every character has a very distinct personality, whether it is a supporting role or a male and female protagonist. Every small side task is also very beautiful. The ending of every CP pair is also very good. The male and female protagonists really wanted to kill each other at the beginning. The emotional line is slow and very sweet. I held my mobile phone and grinned. It is very good-looking. I am not joking. Is it sad? In fact, I personally don't think there is anything very sad about it. I like this style of writing. It's very beautiful. Let me read it. Go and read it [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Very beautiful. Has anyone read the Black Lotus strategy manual? I think this one is as beautiful as that one

To be honest, I think this book is okay. It has some merits and some bad shortcomings. The female protagonist is indeed a rational person. The male protagonist is tempted first, but I don't see it as chasing his wife in the crematorium. It may be a different kind. And the growth process of the female protagonist is too written. It's brief, but the process of several dungeons is well written, and the transformation of the male protagonist is also well written. However, I don't understand that a trace of resentment can directly turn the male protagonist into a demon. Is it because I overestimated the male protagonist's self-control, or is it because of the female protagonist's purification spirit stone that can resist it? Then there are the supporting characters. Except for the female protagonist and the second male lead in the original book, all other relationships are briefly mentioned. You can try to summarize them in detail in the future. It is great at this stage. Many of the sentences in it are quite poetic and are used appropriately and profitably. This article is not long and there are not many typos. You can take a look.

I haven't read a novel like this in a long time, and this one is really good! There are no unnecessary clichés, it's fun to watch and the plot is not that cliche😍