Inuya*******

I don't care, I just rush to write about Naraku on Tomato. I have to give it a five-star review. I don't care, I don't accept refutation. The author is great, Naraku is the best [shy][shy][shy][shy] I don't like reading serialized novels, but now I read them for Naraku. I can't help it, but that's my Naraku-sama [shy][shy][shy][shy]

Although I have deleted the comments, really, please, please, you can tell me whatever you are dissatisfied with the plot, but don't tell me that the male lead role is awkward. I am Naraku's biological mother and just want my son to have a good death. You told me that I can't change this and I don't want to change it. I don't like to avoid lightning. Don't bring this up with me. It's no different from arguing. I don't like to avoid lightning. I don't like to avoid lightning. I don't like to avoid lightning. Say important things three times! ! ! [Stare][Stare]

Five stars are given to the author. For this book, I think it is generally good. I still felt very sad when I read Gang Ya because Gang Ya was so miserable, as if he was an injustice. The heroine was abandoned by Luo Nai after something was done to her. After that, the heroine went to find Gang Ya. Gang Ya seemed to be an injustice. He originally gave up when he gave him Gang Ya, but the heroine came to him and gave him hope. But actually the heroine likes the hero. To be honest, I was quite happy and satisfied when I tortured the male protagonist, but Gang Ya was so miserable and he was just a big wretch. I hope it won't be too miserable behind the steel teeth. This is just my personal opinion.

The author's writing style is still very immature, the emotional line comes out of nowhere, and the plot line is not well developed. However, I still give the author a five-star praise (o^^o). You have made a lot of progress. Next time you write, you can make an outline first and then write a detailed outline. This way the content will be much more exciting. Come on, work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, come on, the author is great! (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

Looks good, I like it very much

Looking forward to the next plot development [Love][Love]

It's acceptable, the writing style is a little immature, and the emotional development is not very clear, but those who are not good at reading can give it a try.

I love it so much, I'm so touched. I don't have to read all the novels. I can't stop updating this novel, I can't stop reading it [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's written with great feeling, and it's a good fanfic [Adoration] [Blowing a Kiss] [Sending Hearts]

My tear point was so low that my tears just stayed. It's so beautiful.ʘᴗʘ