Mortal**

It's pretty good. Is there a female protagonist? What's the protagonist's personality like?

I just like this kind of slow pace, where I write about this and that cool article every day. Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's worth reading. It's a real mortal flow.

So far, it's okay. The protagonist's IQ is online and the plot is rigorous. However, the pace in the early stages is so slow. Is this a book with over 5 million yuan? [Shocked]

Mortal flow, normal rhythm, Golden Finger is not too outrageous, not bad!

This is a real mortal style of writing. It's all foreshadowing in the early stages. It's wonderfully written. Those who don't like mortal style may not be able to stand the pace, but it's pretty good once you get into it [Thinking][Thinking]

Yes, the protagonist is very resourceful and much better than other mortals who follow the process of entering the martial arts sect and becoming Han Laomo like other mortals. However, it seems that failing to enter the immortal sect in more than a hundred pictures is a common problem among mortals in novels. This is the case with Han Laomo, the originator of mortals [laughing and crying] I thought it was good at first, but the more I looked at it, the weirder it became. The cultivators plotted to steal things from mortals, but instead of directly robbing them, they had to keep spies around for years with all kinds of schemes. And at first, I just thought that the protagonist was bewitched by Wang Shun just to control him. But later on, it turned out that Wang Shun was also controlled. A higher cultivator instructed Wang Shun to bewitch a beggar he just met. . . . . The overall feeling to me is that a group of immortal cultivators plotted against a group of mortals and the protagonist from the Nascent Soul Golden Pill. . . . .

A good book

I feel like I'm watching Water Margin

Why are so few people watching?

The writing is very good, I like it, and hope to continue to work hard and write better works.

It's super good-looking, the male protagonist's IQ is online, and the plot is reasonable. I hope it won't collapse in the follow-up.

Why doesn't it look good?

Seeing that Chapter 8 is quite attractive, I'll give it 5 stars. Do you think the later part is well written? It's too slow, the plot is double-agent. It feels like watching a spy drama.

It's good to watch. Just watch it as a martial arts warrior.