Help! the Young Yandere Follows Me Across the Fast-Traveling World

I have to say that this book is quite good. The writing is smooth and does not feel stuck or unfamiliar. At least when I read the first world, I thought it was a very good and interesting fast-travel article. Until I read the second world... There are really too many loopholes in this Mary Sue world! ! ! ---1. Character dialogue is sometimes a bit confusing. For example, at the beginning, the old lady just cared more about Yuanyuan, and Shangguan Yi said that she was not her biological child... Me:? ? ? To be honest, it's a bit embarrassing 2. After Yuanyuan returned to Mary's house, the heroine's father was very happy and cared about her. Then Shang Xueling (the adopted daughter) slandered the heroine and other things that were posted online. It is impossible for this father not to know, right? Just forget about driving her out, but she doesn't even appear in the rest of the story? ? 3. The heroine was splashed with acid downstairs, and the police cars came... When she went upstairs, she saw the hero at the elevator door... And asked the heroine if anything had happened to her. The hero was upstairs! ! When a police car makes such a big noise, most people will look at it or ask a few questions when they hear it, right? ? All in all, I think the first world is pretty good, and I'm looking forward to the following content. But in the second world, I was really confused. There were very serious logic and practical problems in writing. To be honest, I was a little disappointed, so I deducted a small star⭐ (I don't mean to say this, I just hope that the author can pay more attention to truth and logic when writing. Although this is just a novel, good novels become better and better after revisions and listening to opinions, right? I raised my questions really seriously. I hope you can correct it or express your thoughts after reading it~) I took a look at Dada's homepage. This is my first novel. I hope Dada will be strict with myself. Come on! ! ! Now it's time to enter the world of The Little Mermaid, so I'm looking forward to it! I also hope that your writing style will get better and better! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

As a senior fast travel writer for more than ten years, this yyds

This book is very strange. The story in the middle is very confusing. If you don't have the patience, it will be difficult to stick to it. But the following story is something I didn't expect. For me, it is a kind of bystander's redemption of others and my own redemption. Anyway, it's pretty good. I recommend it.

It's very interesting [I almost cried] but it's too short. It would be great to have a small world of ten or twenty twenty people.

A very wonderful book

It's okay, but the ending is a bit hasty, so are they together in the end? In fact, in the end, I didn't really feel the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist.

How to say it? I think it's pretty good-looking, but there are some shortcomings, such as typos and omissions, and some places that don't explain why it can't be done like this or why it should be done like this. It's a bit unclear. Overall, the story is quite good.

The writing felt very natural and smooth, and it was effortless to read. It felt a bit immersive. I accidentally read it from the beginning to the end. Small World also has a mermaid, a school bully, a Mary Sue heroine, and an empress, but the plot is not heavy and it is quite enjoyable.

It's very interesting, and the guide is not like other books. What guide points are there? Emotions cannot be expressed by simple numbers. The plot is also very good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I have been looking for books with more than 9. Ratings, but there are very few books that I like. This book also changed my perspective. Ratings do not represent everything.

Overall, it looks good, but the ending is too hasty.

It's okay, it's just a matter of word count.

It's not bad. I came from DY, but it feels different from what he introduced. Overall, it's okay.

It's pretty good. The only one I've finished watching. Maybe the ending was a little rushed.

How to say it? The ending is still a bit rushed. But I have to say, it's really a good-looking duck😁

It was so beautiful, but the first world was so cruel that they died just after they met [crying][crying]

Very beautiful, highly recommended to see it

It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit rushed

I want to meet a lover who can start from a formal confession

In the end, it's a pity that there is no clear extra [face covering]

I read it in one sitting, and the ending is very different from the novels I have read before.

In fact, the ending is quite good, it is an open ending, at least Su Yuan will not be bullied in the end. There will be people who love him, and it won't be like in the last life.

The writing is quite good, but the text is a bit short.

It's good to watch, I like it very much, but the ending is a bit rushed, but everything else is okay

Although the ending is a bit rushed, I like the concept very much. Each small world is not a fixed routine, so it is worth watching!

A wonderful little story, no nonsense literature. The storyline doesn't drag on. It's just that the ending ended a little too quickly.

Wow wow wow wow, it looks so good, we can just finish it in one day and redeem each other.

Very nice! ! ! Just like this tone! !

Beautiful and beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Recommended!

It's very well written, I still can't get enough of it.

Not bad, good-looking, every life is too sharp